AkDha FF- Tu Jahan Mein Wahan *Chapter 28 updated* pg 130 - Page 7

hey!
awesome update dear
i'm feeling bad for jallal
i hope jodha recovers soon
u have described it beautifully
btwn thanks for the pm

Wonderful Azi,
The sentiments brought out by you is simply matchless....!!!!😊 But be sure u don't turn Jalal into a crying blob in front of Jodha Openly any soon...I mean at least not when he is still in the process of realizing his true feelings completely and coming to terms with it...and she hers!! 👏

Awesome chapter dear... Continue soon... Cant wait for jodha's reaction...

Originally posted by: KDR81

Wonderful Azi,
The sentiments brought out by you is simply matchless....!!!!😊 But be sure u don't turn Jalal into a crying blob in front of Jodha Openly any soon...I mean at least not when he is still in the process of realizing his true feelings completely and coming to terms with it...and she hers!! 👏

Hey every1!! Thanks for all the love and wonderful reviews... and don worry sugar😛... I have a plan😈... I know you understand😳😳😳

Hi sory fr late reply...
Ur realy gr8 writter
u describe jalal feeling, emotion, care, n unknw love toword jodha ws superb...
Awesume update
feel bad fr jodha n jalal they r trap ruku plan...
Jalal care , love fr jodha ws nice...
I hope jodha cme out her deep sleep n understand jalal love...
Jalal knw rukaya black magic n he slap rukaya...
Love it...
thanks fr pm n update soon

Azi you're awesome at writing emotional updates it was brilliant..👍🏼 ❤️.
Jalaal's life and death depends on jodha like said in the update after seeing jodha's internal beauty jalaal belonged to jodha forever..😊. His remorse and agony was described beautifully by you and his unsettled and broken heart when the hakim told him he can't tell jalaal when jodha will open her eyes..
What he feels for her is a strong passionate love which he will never felt for anybody it is shown in his restlessness to see jodha healthy and hale soon his want to be around her all the time to get a reaction out of her if she does'nt respond to him and getting peace being in her proximity only depicts how badly he is smitten by her..😃.
Ruqaiyya knows that jalaal knows now that jodha is innocent no wonders he saved her acting impulsively something that he had never done before yet it is a truth hard to digest for her that jalaal will never belong to her emotionally she can possess him physically but from heart he belongs to jodha.. She will again plot something to make sure jodha never rules over jalaal's heart and mind..
Pleashh update the next part soon azi..😊 .

wow...this is amazing. Please continue soon

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
amazing

this is amazing pls pm me when u update