AkDha FF- Tu Jahan Mein Wahan *Chapter 28 updated* pg 130

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

wow...u did urself proud...it was so so touching...loved it..👏

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

i want to see ruqaiyyas reaction...i hope everytime she does smthing stupid jalal and jodhas love grows.

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SUMESHNI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

U r the greatest writer ever . Plz update the next chapter soon.cant wait👍🏼

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Suvarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

👏👏👏Loved the update...I am touched...you are a brilliant writer...👍🏼

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Az3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

P.s. guys

Besides this chapter I've included two surprises within for you... AkhDa's first 'kiss' and a shirtless Jalal😳😳😳

So even if this chapter doesn't live up to the hype... Those presents should get me off the hook ryt??😛😛😛

Thanks to all who liked it and who reviewed... I'll start the next chapter asap!!!🤗

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SShreShthA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Ausme... Luvd it vry much

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

The chapter not only lived upto our expectations but beyond them it was brilliant azi..😃 ❤️.
Jodha was on her deathbed yet jalaal's troubled and lost eyes bothered her before her senses finally gave away..[ :)].
Jalaal's emotions were shown with utmost brilliance and perfection by you..
There are two things I loved here he stepped over his crown to save jodha's life which from my pov signifies that even his kingdom does'nt matter to him when its jodha in question he could give up anything his kingdom his wealth his everything even his own life..
This part really made me fall for jalaal he was ready to die along with jodha if he could not save her..
Beautiful update plzzz update the next part soon..😊.

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daisydee425

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

superb
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Yoga priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

No words for ur writing. 👏

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ash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

omg- the last chapter was BEST so far. It was so dramatic and full of emotions. I loved the enitre part of how Jalal went into pyre to get his jodha.

I do not have words to describe this chapter. It was just amazing, fabulous, great, mind-blowing.👏🤗

thank u for the pm and giving us a regular updates. I really appreciate it.