SS : FALLING IN LOVE CH 3 (page 6)**UPDATED **

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iNDEX
CH 1 : PAGE 1
CH 2 : PAGE 4
CH 3 : PAGE 6
OK GUYS SO I AM WRITTING A NEW SS !!HOPE U LYK IT OTHERWISE U CAN THROW PATHAR , TAMATAR ANYTHING ...
CH 1
Jalal had realized his mistake of not trusting Jodha and gets into deep repent..
In Jodha room
Jodha is busy in packing .
Moti : Jodha sach boliye ap sukanya ki shadi ke bahane shehnshah ke apman se dukhi hokar jaa rhi h na ?
Jodha : Moti tum janti to ho hi na fir kyu puch rahi ho ??
Jalal overhears the conversation , Jodha is shocked he entered alone without any soldier announcement and all.
Jalal : Takliya!
he sees Jodha packing and is confused ..
Jalal : ap kahi jaa rahi h Jodha Begum ?
Jodha : Ji! (she tries to keep the conversation short )
Jalal : Lekin kaha ? (unhappily he asks)
Jodha : humne Ammi Jaan se izzazat le li h ...hum Amer ja rahe h Sukanya ki shadi ke liye ...
Jalal : Haan to vha to hum bhi jayenge ap humare sath hi
Jodha : (stops him in mid sentence ) hum unki behen hai kaafi taiyariyan hoti h hume pehle hi jaana hoga
Jalal : nhi Begum Jodha Begum ap nahi jaa sakti
Jodha : kyu ?
Jalal : vo! vo! vo isliye ! vo hum !
Jodha : koi vajah nhi h na apke pas ....humare nikalne ka waqt ho gya h ...hum chalte h
Jalal : Par Begum Jodha
Jodha leaves
Jalal in night is not able to sleep his guilt, Jodha dissapearence was annoying him
Next Morning
Jalal : Badi Ammi ! humare Amer jane ki taiyari ki jiye hum Amer ja rhe h or ab sukanya ki shadi ke bad hi lautenge
MA : Jalal lekin shadi mai abhi samay hai ...Shehnshah e Hind ka itni jaldi jana
Jalal : Badi Ammi hum shehnshah hai hum jo chahe kar sakte h hume kisi se puchne ki zarurat nahi h ap taiyariya kijiye
MA : (confused) jo hukm Shehnshah
In Harem
Some Begum talking to each other
First Begum : Suna h shehnshah Jodha Begum ke piche Amer jaa rhe h
Second Begum : haan suna to yahi h ! lagta hai shehnshah ke sine mai bhi dil dastak de rha h
First Begum : Haan or usi dil ke haatho majboor shehnshah ek raat bhi Jodha Begum ke bina nhi reh sake
Second Begum : Lagta h ki dimag ke suroor ko todne dil ka junoon aa hi gya samajh lo ab kuch ke liye reh gya h Malika e Khas ka taj Ruqaiya Begum ke sir par
They both start laughing
In Ruqaiya Room
Hoshiyar : Suna Malika shehnshah Jodha Begum ke piche piche Amer ja rhe h
Ruqaiya : Chup kar gustakh vo shehnshah e Hind hai or shehnshah ek am begum ke piche nhi bhaga krte...Zarur Jalal ke dil mai Jodha Begum ka gurur todne ke liye koi naya paintra h
Hoshiyar: kai unke sine mai dil to nhi dhadkne laga or usi ke hatho kayal hokar vo Amer jaa rhe ho
Ruqaiya becomes angry
Jalal leaves Agra
In Amer
In Jodha Room
Jodha was a but upset and was not feeling good after leaving Agra and she was waiting for Jalal but did not accept it
Dasi : Begum Jodha shehnshah Amer padhar rhe h
Jodha :(she is happy but does nt understand it ) kya !tum jao
Dasi leaves
Jodha: Shehnshah hume akela kyu nhi chod dete pata nhi ab unke dimag mai kya chal rha h ...zarur vo koi na koi naya khel khel rhe h
Jalal comes in Amer
Maina wati does arti and Jalal is told if he choose Jodha among these 30 ladies in parda then only he will get to go in Jodha room otherwise he would be given different one Jalal goes by two ladies but he does nt chose still . Suddenly fast wind comes and Jodha payal twinkles Jalal recognises the voice of Jodha payal and choses the right Jodha
Everyone clapped
Jodha is a bit sad and more impressed ...but does nt show it
How was it ?
Should i continue ?
M ready for all Juta chappal ...

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