SS : FALLING IN LOVE CH 3 (page 6)**UPDATED ** - Page 2

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luv it but i don't understand most of da dialogue it wud b greatly appreciated if u can put in eng. translations😊
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I WILL TRY N UPDATE SOON SORRY A BIT BUSY
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ok guys here i go with the second chapter...

CH 2

Raja Bharmal : shehnshah ! ab ap apne kamre mai ja kea ram ki jiye hum bhojan adi vahi bhijwate hai ...Jodha Jamai raja ko apne kamre mai le jao

In Jodha Room

Jalal is quite impressed to see her room ...room was neat and clean beautifully decorated there was kanha mandir just like she had hers in Harem ...but the the painting that hung on the wall attracted Jalal attention the most...he had never seen such a fine master piece in his life ...it was made by Jodha it had her name on bottom but Jalal was illiterate

Jalal : Wah kya fun h (looking at the painting) kis kalakar ne banaya hai ye ?

Jodha was already annoyed that he had come so early and now she has two share her room with him only and it was not Agra that they could sleep in different rooms ...and she was unware of the fact Jalal was illiterate and she thought Jalal was intentionally annoying her

Jodha :(in a irritated tone ) ao aisa kyu kar rahe h shehnshah apko sukoon nahi mila humare parivaar ko itna dukh pohocha kar jo ab ap humari behen ki shadi mai koi naya khel khelne aa gye ek baar pehle bhi apki vajah se humari behen ki zindagi kharab ho hi gayi thi or ab ap najane kya such milta h apko hume dukh pohocha kar ...(she folds her hands) bas kijiye ab apko humse dushmani h na to hume saza di jiye humare parivar humare bapusa maa sa or humari behen ko or dukh mat pohochaiye

Jalal : (now angry she was just going on and on while he had no bad intentions this tym) (he holds her tightly)(ISHQ HAI VO EHSAS STARTS PLAYING IN BG ) hum yaha koi galat iraade se nahi aye humne sirf apse funkar ke bare mai pucha or ap na jane humae kya kya bole jaa rahi h or agar apko sach mai lagta h ki hum khel khel rahe h to yahi sahi ...

Jodha was about to say when servant and Mainawati comes with food ...

Mainawati : LI jiye Jamai sa kuch khan pan li jiye ...Jodha jamai sa ko paroso ...

Jodha serves food to shehnshah when another servant comes and tells Jodha Raja Bharmal is calling her

Jodha : ap khana khaiye hum abhi ate hai

Jodha and Mainawati leave ...Jalal has food

In Raja Bharmal Room

Jodha enters

Jodha : Bapusa apne hume bulaya ?

RB : Haan Jodha ! Jodha Jamai sa aye the humare pas or sach kahu to aj humara dil unki baat sunkar tumhe lekar chinta mukt ho gya

Jodha : aisa kya kaha unhone Bapusa ?

********Flash Back********

Jalal : Raja Sahab aj hum apke pas ek Jamai ki haisiyat se aye hai na hi shehnshah e Hind ki hum apse maafi chahte h jo vyavahar humne apke or apke parivaar ke sath pichle kuch dino mai kiya (he folds his hand)

RB : Jamai saa ye ap kya kar rhe h iski koi avashyakta nahi h

Jalal : Kaise nhi h hum behad sharminda h apne vyavahar ke liye or hum apko vada dete hai ki hum Aj ki bad Jodha begum ka kisiko apmaan nahi krne denge or unki dhal banenge

********Flash Back ends *******

Jodha quite happy and impressed but at the same time feel guilty for the words she said to Jalal she know she needs to apologize

RB : Kaha kho gyi Jodha ?

Jodha : kuch nahi bapusa ...ab hum chalte h

RB : HAAN (Jodha is about to leave when ) ruko Jodha jo kam tha wo to hum bhul hi gaye

Jodha : ji adesh di jiye Bapusa

RB : Jodha ye patra lo isme vivah ki aupchariktao or ane vale vidhiyon ke samay taarikh h ye tum jamai saa ko jakar padh kar suna dena

Jodha : ji bapusa hum unhe ye de denge or vo pad samajh to khud hi lenge usme hamari kya avashykta h?

RB : Ye tum kaisi baatein kar rhi ho Jodha ? kya tum nahi janti Jamai sa padhna likhna nahi jante

Jodha : (surprised and even more guilty) bapusa hum chalte hai

Jodha leaves and enters her room Jalal is still lookin at the painting

Jodha : ye humne banayi hai

Jalal : wah ! inshallah bohot hi khubsurat fan h sach mai Jodha Begum apke hunar kabil e taarif hai

Jodha : (she blushes) dhanya vad ...vo hum apse maafi mangna chahte hai hume ap par aise nhi .hume bapusa ne btaya ki apne unse maafi mangi or ap pad likh nai sak...

Jalal : Haan Jodha jis umra mai bache kalam se padhte likhte hai hum khan baba ke sath jaakar apni shamsheer se logo ke sir kalam kiya karte the ...jis umra mai bache apne walid walida ke sath mela dekhne jate h us umra mai hum apne walid sahib ki darohar unki sultainate vapaas pane or use sambhalne mai lage the ...jis umra mai bache khilone se khelte h us umra mai hamara nikah ho gya padhne likhne ka samay na hi hume kabhi mila or na hi takdeer ne hume kabhi uski rehmat ki ...

Jodha : hum shama chahte h

Jalal : or rahi baat raja sahib se maafi ki vo to hume mangni hi thi akhir humne galti jo ki ...or apko to maafi magne ki koi avashkta nahi hai humne apko jo dukh or jo saza begunah hone par bhi di vo apki galti ke age kuch nahi h

Jodha comes forward to say something when she slips and Jalal holds her Jalal Jodha eyelock ...(ISHQ HAI VO EHSAS IN BG)

Sukanya comes

Sukanya : Jiji (she turns and closes her eyes ) (Jodha Jalal get up start looking at each oder then here ther) hum bad mai ate h

Jodha : nhi Sukanya bolo kya hua ?

Sukanya : jiji vo maasa apko byah ke liye kapde pasand karne ke liye bula rahi h

Jalal : (gives disappointed look)

Jodha : thik h chalo

They leave

Precap : Jalal standing behind the pillar Jodha seeing him through mirror and Jalal giving reaction to clothes Jodha is choosing


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Very nice update... Will b waiting 4 more...
Update soon...
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