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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Anchal could u put the page no for the part on the title when's update it will be easy to know whereu have posted the update
Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Very nice update dear...luved the sweet bond developing between Mainavati & Jalaal...waiting for the next update...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome updates,
loved it
do continue soon
please, do pm me if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Wow Aanchal!!!Super-Amazing Update!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ ā­ļø I really loved it so very much.ā¤ļø ā¤ļø
Jalal is feeling really guilty of what He did to Jodha and his family!! 😳 Poor Jalal!! 😭 😭
And Loved to see a mother-son waala bond betwn Mainavati and Jalalā¤ļø 😃 😳 Really Heart-touching scene!!ā¤ļøLoved it!!ā¤ļø ā¤ļø
Waiting to see what'll Jalal do to manofy his Jodha Begum?! šŸ˜› šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜†
Pls Continue Soon!! 😊 😳 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
nice ff. please continue and if possible please PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
luvd jalal nd rani mainavati's relationship here 😊 plz con't
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
part 6
the preparations for sukanyas marriage were going on full flegedly...a lot of rajput states were not happy with this marriage,they felt raja bharmal had betrayed them and they did not want any other rajput state to form any kind of relations with ameer...for this precise reason the king of ajabgarh and raja bharmal had decided to keep all the ceremonies at one place for both the bride and groom...two lavish tents were created at sambhar...jodha and jalal's wedding venue...sukanya had insisted on getting married there itself...she had finally understood jodha's sacrifices and her importance in her life and wanted to follow in her footsteps as much as she could...

both the families were busy with their respective preperations when suddenly there was a commotion outside the tents...their respective guards came running to them to inform then that the representatives of the neighbouring rajput states had come and wanted to have a word with both the kings and their aids...

raja bharmal requested the king of ajabgarh raja abhimanyu to consent to attend this meeting in his tent...king abhimanyu along with his most trusted aids went to raja bharmals tent...and the meeting started...

RB(to his guards)-pesh kiya jaye hamare mehmanon ko...
the representatives of chittor and amangarh came to the tent,they bowed down to RB and RA...
before they could start speaking in came JALAL,and RB greeted him and asked him to sit down right besides himself...before jalal could take the seat the representatives of chittor and amangarh intervened
"RAJA BHARMAL AUR RAJA ABHIMANYU,hum aapse akele main baat karna cahte hain,kissi bahar wale ke samne nahi"
RB-"yahan sab hamare parivaar ka hi hissa hain,aap ko jo kehna hai bezizzak kahiye"
representatives-"nahi raja bharmal ji,hum aapse mughlon ke samne baat nahi karna cahte"
RB-"khamosh,kya aap yeh bhool gaye hain aap jiska apmaan kar rahe hain woh hamare jamai sa hai"
representatives-"bhoolna cahein bhi toh nahi bhool sakte maharaj,aapne kaam hi kuch aaisa kiya hai,jiske mooh par thook kar,kaalik poothni cahiye thi,usse hi apni palkon par baitha kar rakha hai"

everyone was shocked to hear what the representatives had said..jalal had never been so insulted in his entire life..these low lifes were talking about the shehenshah of india like he was some rodent who no one should be assosiated with.his hand reached for his shamsheer,but before he could do or say anything raja bharmal walked upto the representatives and gave them a resounding slap each..there was pin drop silence...in the history of rajputs no representatives of any state had thus been treated like this...it was an offense but raja bharmal was beyond caring.

RB-"aapki himmat kaise hui hamare jawai sa ke baare main aaisa sochne ki bhi...aapko pata bhi hai aap kiske baare main baat kar rahe hain,yeh cahein toh abhi yaheen khade khade aap logon ka sar dhar se alag kar saktein hai,parantu yeh chup hai,sirf hamari izzat bachane ke liye...agar aap log yahan sandesh wahak ban kar na aaye hote toh hum khud hi aapko aaisa dand deti ki koi bhi aaisi galati dobara dohrane ke baare main sochta bhi nahi"

the representative looked with hatred towards RB and said"RAJA BHARMAL,hum toh yahan yeh kehne aaye thee ki aapko hamare maharaj ki taraf se badhai,apni badi beti ki shaadi ek mughal se karane ke bavazood aapko ek aaisa raj gharana mil hi gaya jisne aapki choti beti so sweekar liya,magar aaj jo hamara yahan apmaan hua hai,jo teraskar aapne hamara kiya hai,uske baad aapko saza zaroor milegi...ek mughal ki wajah se jo aapne hamare saath kiya uska buktaan aapko karna padega"

jalal had had enough of this nonsense ,not only had these people insulted the shehenshah of india but were also threatning his begums family that too infront of him..
JALAL-BAS(he shouted),BOHOT BOL CHUKE HO TUM SAB...AB AGAR ISSE ZAYADA KUCH BHI BOLA TOH YAHAN SE TUM LOG NAHI TUMHARI LAASHEIN JAYENGI"
representatives-"dekh liya RB aapne,yeh hai aapke jawai sa ki tehzeeb"
JALAL-"kis tehzeeb ki baat kar rahe ho tum,jiske ghar aaye ho ussi ki bezaati kar rahe ho..."
representatives-"jab do rajput baat kar rahein ho toh kissi bhi aur ko..."
JALAL-"hum shehnshah-e-hind hain batmeez,aur tumne hamare samne hamare walid ki bezati karne ki gustakhi ki hai..hum cahein toh abhi tumhare sar kalam kar saktein hai,par hum sirf RB ki wajah se chup hain,aaj hamri behen ki shaadi ki tayari chal rahi hai..agar aaj itna khushi ka din nahi hota toh hum tumhe batate ki shehenshah-e-hind aur unke parivaar ki bezaati karne ka kya anjaam hota hai...ab chup chap yahan se nikal jao,isse pehle ki hum apna aapko kho dein"
the guards come and try to escort the two representatives from there...

representatives-"ab yudh ke liye tayar rehna RB"
JALAL-"apne raja se bol dena ki ameer aur agra unki har chunoti ke liye tayar hai"

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
hey!
it was awesome dear,
loved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Absolutely loved your update! Eagerly waiting your next update 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
superb..waiting for ur next part..

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