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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4
JALAL-jodha,aap theek toh hain...aapko lagi toh nahi,uss shehzade ne kahin aapse kuch batmeezi toh nahi ki?
jodha finally started struggling to get out of jalal's arms,what does he think of himself she thought,first he insults me and my parents and now has come here and trying to sympathise with me,talking to me as if nothing has happened...what else can i expect from jalludin mohammad...he is and will always be a jallad...
jodha finally managed to get herself free from jalal's hold and moved back to put some distance between them...this pierced jalal's heart...he knew he had wronged her,but he could not tolerate jodha distancing herself from him..he tried to hold her hand but jodha put up her hands to stop him.
JODHA-wahin ruk jaeye shehensha..hamri taraf aane ki koshish mat keejeyega...aapko kya lagta hai,hum sab bhool gaye,jo aapne hamre saath kiya usse toh phir bhi bhool jaeye,parantu jo aapne hamare parivaar,hamare bhaisa ke saath kiya,usse hum kabhi nahi bhool sakte...
aap apne aap ko hindustan ke shehenshah kehte hain na,dekh liye humne hindustan ke shehenshah ka insaaf dene ka tareeka...humein laga tha aap cahe jaise bhi hon,magar insaaf karna jante hain,magar hum galat thee.
ek aam muzlim ko bhi safai dena ka haq hota hai,magar aapne humein toh kya hamare parivaar ko bhi bolne ka mauka nahi diya..agar uss din aapki ammijaan nahi hoti,toh aaj hamare parivaar puri tarah bikhar gaya hota,hamein apni parvah nahi hai,agar hum maar bhi jate toh accha hi hota,aapse aur aapki qaid se hamien chutkara toh mil jata..hamein iss sacchai ke saath jeena toh nahi padta ke hamare pati ek aaise insaaan hain jo dusron ko insaan hi nahi samajhte.unke liye jo woh sochtein hain wohi sach,jo woh karein wohi sahi,dusra cahe sahi ho ya galat,usse apni safai dena ka koi haq nahi hai.
abhi aapne humse kya poocha,ki hum theek hain ya nahi,toh suniye,hum theek hai,aapke bavazood bhi hum theek hain,aur ek aur baat sun lijeye hum ab kabhi bhi agra vapas nahi jeyenge...samajh lijeyega ki jodha maar gayi.
and she turned and left from there,leaving jalal, with a bruised heart,and guilt that would have been enough to kill anyone...jalal always prided himself on his ability to take the correct decisions,though he was passionate and impulsive but never before had he acted hastily...he still remembers the feeings that coursed through him when he thought that jodha was the culprit...it was pure unadultarated hatred for her...she had killed his child,but it was not only bcoz of that,it was also bcoz he had placed his trust in her and when he got to know that she was the one who broke his trust,all hell broke lose...had it been anyone else but her he might still have given that person a chance to prove his innocence ,but jodha...the kind of feelings she invoked in him,no one had ever been able to do so,not even ruqaiyya...the relief he had felt when he got to know of jodha's innocense had got him to question whether he had a heart after all...he was still searching for an answer...

meanwhile not so far away from there,was someone who had witnesses the whole episode...our price ranveer was in serious thought as to what jalal might have done that had irkd jodha so mauch that she had vowed never to return to him...on one hand he was happy that he might get a chance to woo jodha at leisure,but on the other he needed to find out the truth behind this,so he could eliminate his enemy,once and for all...

to be continued😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Update!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ I loved it yaar!!❤️
Jodha is in anger and don't want to go back to Agra!! 😲 Ab Jalal kya karega?! 😕 And that Ranvijay is planning something now as He heard Akdha's full convo!! 🤢 That Bas***d Guy!! 😡 I hate him!!! 😡 😡 🤢
Though Jodha's anger and pain is justified here but I feel bad for Jalal here as He was just trying to get the truth out that's why He sent Jodha away!! 😳 😭
But In show I'm hating Jalal's behaviour,I really hope Jodha behaves more rudely to him in the show more than She is doing in your SS as there He really deserves it you know!! 😉 😳

And Pls Continue Soon!! 😊 😳 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Janvie--

Awesome Update!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ I loved it yaar!!❤️
Jodha is in anger and don't want to go back to Agra!! 😲 Ab Jalal kya karega?! 😕 And that Ranvijay is planning something now as He heard Akdha's full convo!! 🤢 That Bas***d Guy!! 😡 I hate him!!! 😡 😡 🤢
Though Jodha's anger and pain is justified here but I feel bad for Jalal here as He was just trying to get the truth out that's why He sent Jodha away!! 😳 😭
But In show I'm hating Jalal's behaviour,I really hope Jodha behaves more rudely to him in the show more than She is doing in your SS as there He really deserves it you know!! 😉 😳

And Pls Continue Soon!! 😊 😳 😳


thanks sweetie,i will continue soon ,and its ranveer who is after jodha ,bechara ranvijay toh sukanya se shaadi kar raha hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice...
Its turning interesting

Eagerly will b waiting
Plz update d next part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg- what is ranveeer going to do-i hope there is not another misunderstanding...btw, i was so glad jodha did not give in yet- plz pm me.thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice...update hope jodha soon forgive jalal go back to agra...plz pm me if possible...
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice story
loved it
let's c wat Jalal will do to manaofy his wifey. but 1st of all he sud slaughter. that Ranveer.
update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
part 5
jodha's words had pierced jalal's conscience...he could not forgive himself for hurting her so badly...none of the decisions taken by him before had hurt anybody to this an extent,he knew what she said was true...how could a girl live with a husband who had not only humilated her publicly but also humiliated her family.jalal knew the extend of jodha's love for her family,how could he not..she got married to him to save her brothers and her family,the people of her kingdom would be forever indebted to her for her sacrifices...he cursed himself for not thinking about this before,if a girl can do something like this for not only her family and her kingdom,but also for someone who had no prior relation with her,how could she even think of harming an innocent.

jodha's relationship with rahim was not hidden from jalal.he knew that rahim loved jodha like a mother and she also adored him...when someone can give so much love to anothers child how could that person commit such a heinous crime...jalal wished he could go back in time and undo what he had done to hurt her and her family...jodha deserved this and much more.

just then rani mainavati came there and saw jalal standing in one place,staring in one direction,not moving even an inch...she could make out from his face that he was in desperate need for someones support and love...mainavati had hated the mughal's all her life esp after shaguni bai had made that prediction all those months ago on jodha's 17th bday,but she could not bring herself to hate jalal now..he looked like a lost child in need for someone to show him the right path,the right direction..she walked upto him and tapped him on the shoulder..jalal got out of his thoughts and turned around to find mainavati giving him a smile that looked like it could brighten anybodys life...
MAINAVATI-jawai sa aap yahan kya kar rahe hain,kya aap jodha se mile?
JALAL-ji maharani,hum jodha se mil chuke hain
mainavati knew her daughter very well,she knew all was not well between jodha and jalal.even though she dint know jalal that well but she knew from what she had witnesses at jodhas wedding and her recent visit to agra that jalal was not a bad person by heart...she knew he was still young,maybe lacked experience and therefore maybe took rash decisions hurting himself and people around him...mainavati knew that jodha was a very stubborn girl and once she decided something would do anything to stick to her believes...she was the one who has instilled hatred in jodha's heart for mughals and therefore knew jodha would find it very hard to accept her relationship with jalal...she knew she had to do something to help her daughter and her jawai sa,to smoothen their relation...for a better life...she was suddenly brought out of her thoughts by jalal..
JALAL-hum aapse kuch kehna cahte hain maharani..
MAINAVATI-boliye na jawaisa...aap pooch kyun rahe hain...hukum kijeye.
JALA-hukum nahi maharani,aapse mafi mangana cahte hain hum.
MAINAVATI-mafi kaisi jawai sa,jo kuch bhi hua usmein aapki galti nahi thi.
JALAL-galti kaise nahi thi maharani,humse galati nahi gunah hua hai...humne apni begum aur apki beti aur aapke parivaar ki itne bezati ki...koshish bhi nahi ki inki baat sunne ki...jab hamein ammijaan ne samjhaya tab jakar hamein baat thodi samajh main aayi,par tab tak bahut deer ho chuki thi...hum aapke parivaar ki bezati kar chuke thee,apni begum ki bhari sabah main bezati ki humne...hum unse mafi mangne ke kabil nahi hain maharani,magar yakeen kijeye humein apne iss gunah par bahut pachtava hai,aap jo cahe saaza de sakti hain...magar humein maaf kardijeye maharani...iss bojh ke saath hum jee nahi payenge.
MAINAVATI-jawai sa aap jante hain hamare yahan jab bhi beti ki shaadi hoti hai,toh hamein lagata hai ki humein ek aur beta mil gaya...aap hamare bete samaan hain jawai sa...aapne bacchon se galti ho toh maa baap unhe maaf kar dete hain,haina...aapke jazbaat hum samajh sakte hain...aap chinta mat kejeye..aapke inn bhapusa aur maasa ne aapko kab ka maaf kardiya...ab apne dil se yeh sab nikal dijeye aur chaliye,jodha ke bapusa aapka intezaar kar rahe hain..

jalal could not believe the generous and good heart of his inlaws,had it been anyone else they would have reprimanded him and refused to even entertain him ,but these people had not only welcomed iwth with respect but also made him feel like home...he was even more glad now that he had made a relation with such kind people,god knows he needed such people in his life,now more than ever...

JALAL-hum aapka shukriya kaise karein maharani...
MAINAVATI-aap humein shukriya kehna cahte hain na,toh humein maharani nahi maa kahiye shehenshah..
jalal had tears in his eyes...
JALAL-hum uss layak nahi hain maharani...
MAINAVATI-bas shehenshah,aap ab hamare bete ke bare main kuch nahi kahenge..yeh ek maa ka hukum hai...
jalal could not control himself and bend down to touch mainavatis feet...he had not even given this kind of respect to his badi ammi but today he felt he had made a very special relation...this mother would be his true support and he vowed to never let her down...

to be continued😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update.., but waiting for that ranveer's plans...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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niceee update... like it...
eager to know abt more akdha and ranveer's plan

would be waiting 4 next update...continue soon

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