SS:Jalal Pehele Hamare Kaksh me Ayenge!Updated Prt Pg17 11/4 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ApurvaLovesARVI


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Sahi Kaha, jo ho raha hai uss show me likhne ka man nahi karta..</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thanks for comment...</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">AkDha ki chemistry dekh kar koyi aapne aapne aap lik de</font>

Sahi kaha..akdha ki chemistry is sizzling..
Aur jahan tak madhubala ki baat hai..its just r addiction to rishbala or just r right kameena rather!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: cuterishabhala

Sahi kaha..akdha ki chemistry is sizzling..
Aur jahan tak madhubala ki baat hai..its just r addiction to rishbala or just r right kameena rather!

Agree 100%
Ab Madhubala ki baat mat karna aur yeh Thread close ho jayegi
😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
loved your os❤️
nice job👏👏👏
keep up the good work 👍🏼!!!
hope to read the next part soon😃 !!!
specially the last where they were in each other arms 😳!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
so beautifully written...I could imagine each scene u have narrated...its so romantic...awesome OS👏...plzzz continue it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Morning sun rays entered through the Hojra's Window and kissed their faces lightly, the couple whose Love Story would be told in the coming ages, who at present Hate each other.

Even the Rays feared what would happen if Jodha woke up seeing her in this consition, Badly entangled with Jalal.

The Birds started cooing.

She opened her lashes delicately, Whole night thier has been a strange aura, which was err.. Pleasant!

But why do she feel something heavy on her legs?What is it?

She turned her head aroung to see.

It was Jalal. She stared at his handsome face "Sote waqt kitne masoom lagte hai, par jab jag rahe ho toh Jallad"

Saying this she patted Jalal's cheek and turned to...
Wait a second!!!
What is Jalal doing here? She again looked back to see if this is for real
She glanced at Jalal then down at her legs whcih were entangled then Jalal again
"Aaa..."
***
Ruquiya sat on bed bwildered
"Yeh kaise ho sakta hai"
***
Jalal was quick enough to firmly place his hand and shut Jodha's mouth before she could wake whole Agra up.
He saw her almond eyes widening up when she realised what he has done.
"Begum Sahibaa!''
''Jodha~!''
People were coming, her two second long screech alerted them, Now what to do?
Daasis, Maham Anga and Hamida Banu entered inside
"Mallikaye -Begum Jodha Begum toh yaha nahin hai"
"Phir cheekne ke awaaz kiski thi"
''Shyad Hume Vehem hua ho"
"2 Logo ko vehem nahi ho sakta" Hamida Banu was worried for Jodha"Kahin Jodha kisi khatre me toh nahi"
"Aap fikr mat kijie Mallika hum Jodha ko dhoondhte hai, Yahin kahin hongi"
"Chaliye, Allah kare Jodha theek ho"
If only they had searched behind the silk curtains they could have spotted Jodha struggling to get out of Jalal's hold.
He held her tightly, clutching her stomach and shutting her mouth. Her back was sticking on his fore.
She couldn't scream because of his Mahan Shauher!
"Mmm"Jodha tried to speak out
Her lips moving against Jalal's palm aroused him, He didn't knew what Magic she did but he couldn't resist himself from thinking what would happen if she kissed his palms...
Suddenly he felt a sharp ting of pain, It was Jodha, Expected!
She bit him.
"Yeh sab kya tha?"
"Kuch bhi toh nahi''
"Yoon iss tarah hamre Shayan kaksh me aa jana aur iss tarah hame kaid karna"
"Hum aapke shauher hai, aapko pakad bhi sakte hai aur aapke saath so bhi sakte hai" Jalal smirked he so enjoyed to tease her
She opened her mouth to say something but then closed it. Loss of words! Ahaan
Giving a Huh! she started walking away
''Kahan jaa rahi hai aap aapne shauher ko chodke"He stopped her by holding her wrist
"Hamari marzi hum jaha jaye"
"Aap apne shauher ke pass nahi ayengi' He started to decrease the Gap between them
Soon they were so close that they were was only space for air to pass
"Hum aapke saath kuch bhi kar sakte hai'' Jalal breath was fanning on Jodha's neck
With all might she pushed him and started running away
Jalal fell on Bed and due to him holding her wrist she too was tugged and landed on Jalal's chest
"Dekh liya, ab aap humse nahi bhaag sakti" He carassed her face
Jodha scrunched her eyes. Their breaths were mixed toghether
Being so close to Jalal, she discovered a new feeling, She didn't no what was that, But she, somewhere in a small corner of her heart enjoyed being like this with Jalal.
Something fumed outside, who was none other than Ruquiya who has witnessed the whole scenerio
Till now if she thought "Jalal had a Heart and it was starting to beat for Jodha" was not True, What she saw confirmed that Jalal has a heart and that craves for Love.
Which is unfortunately not her, It's Jodha
Edited by ApurvaLovesARVI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Authour's Note:
Because of many requests of Continuing it, I posted the secong Part. Hope you enjoy it, Knowing it is utter Crap!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
loved it. but too short. update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
One more rishbala fan now attracted to akdha...hmm pleasant surprise is this hot couple...lol...i am at present very much enjoying this serial...and soothing my hurt emotions due to damage done to mine other one...the right Kameena i love him...but yys jalal...huh...it seems am falling for him too...very nice rima...and i find so so many rishbalians here...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

One more rishbala fan now attracted to akdha...hmm pleasant surprise is this hot couple...lol...i am at present very much enjoying this serial...and soothing my hurt emotions due to damage done to mine other one...the right Kameena i love him...but yys jalal...huh...it seems am falling for him too...very nice rima...and i find so so many rishbalians here...

Yes!
I was in Love with Right Kameena
But I am fallling for Jalal too
[Love Dobara😕]
Yeh many are there, as That show is destroyed by ******
And AkDha is becoming sizzling...Toh Love Story crave karne wale yahin ayenge na
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
It was awesome..
And very well enjoyed now waiting for PART 3

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