SS:Jalal Pehele Hamare Kaksh me Ayenge!Updated Prt Pg17 11/4 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
update it soon...i am eagerly waiting and u r an excellent writer👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
part 2 is amazing...keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Wow...wat an update....ausummm blossom...👏👏⭐️

lol...jodha screams so loud..😆..jalal shut her mouth...😳

she bite him...😉...n da most romantic "hum aapke shauher hai aapko pakad bhi sakte h or aapke saath so bhi sakte hain" ☺️☺️

it blew me away...

hey dear update soon...n pm me when u update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ApurvaLovesARVI

Authour's Note:

Because of many requests of Continuing it, I posted the secong Part. Hope you enjoy it, Knowing it is utter Crap!


it was really good post the 3rd part also plz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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am new to IF., I donno much about it., But ur writing is really good...,👏 plz pm me when u update it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayesha_Kreya

Wow...wat an update....ausummm blossom...👏👏⭐️


lol...jodha screams so loud..😆..jalal shut her mouth...😳

she bite him...😉...n da most romantic "hum aapke shauher hai aapko pakad bhi sakte h or aapke saath so bhi sakte hain" ☺️☺️

it blew me away...

hey dear update soon...n pm me when u update...😊

I am glad you liked it !!! ^__^
Your comment is enough to encourage me... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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But no! She couldn't let go of Jalal this easily. She has to do something, Thinking so Ruquiya stormed away from there leaving the Couple-in-Awkward-position on their own.

Jodha felt something rising inside her, a new feeling! But what?

Jalal and Jodha were lost in each other's eyes, to unconscious to notice Ruquiya throwing glares and storming away.

"Jalal ki ank…Jalal !" Jodha's mind came crashed down to reality

She pushed Jalal, rolled, freeing herself from his tight hold and ran away from there.

To which Jalal smirked and ran behind her to catch up, no way he is going to let go of Jodha so easily.

Jodha ran as faster as she could in the heavy lehenga as soon she came to know Jalal is behind her. They raced in the corridors and even the Sabha. Moving back and fore the chairs.

Crashing through the vases and antique pieces they were still running. Jodha would have laughed hysterically if she hasn't been the one chased. And Jalal for once forgetting that he is a Shehen Shah chased Jodha wherever she ran. But he admitted that Jodha ran fast than a normal women.

This Tom and Jerry chase was witnessed by Sharif uddin and Co and even Maham Anga. Who were Hell shocked on Shehen Shah chasing Jodha Begum, They concluded that they were absolutely correct when they said that Jodha is no other girl, No other could make Shehen Shah run like that

Hamida Banu was searching for Jodha when she spotted her coming towards her running. What went wrong? She thought. But soon she knew when Jodha raced pass her and she saw Jalal following her behind and she was Left wondering why are these too behaving like maniacs.But soon enough she laughed at their antics, No Begum made Jalal do like that. He was grown mature even as child. But the child inside him never died.

Jodha stopped abruptly when something caught hold of her. It was Jalal, he catched her. Now what?

They were near a less visited place, now no way Jodha could escape. Jalal stepped forward, Jodha stepped backward. For every one step of his she will move 2 steps back.

Finally her back touched something hard, The Wall!!

Jalal decreased the Distance between them yet again! Is it his favorite Hobby?

"H..H.Hu..Hume Jaane dijiye" Jodha gulped

He smirked "Itni aasani se nahi"

"Kya chahiye apko?

"Hmmm Aaj pure Din ka Khana aap hume khilayengi aapne haatho se" "Manjoor hai?"

She paused to think, this is was not such a big deal than sleeping with Jalal, if he didn't do anything to insult her.

"Hume sweekar hai"

He gave a Triumph smile

"Lekin hamari bhi 1 shart hai" This was the Jodha he knew, never accepting Defeat

"Kya?"

"Aaj aap Harem me aayiye, Shehen Shah ki tarah nahi, chup kar"

He didn't knew what she wanted to do , But surely it wasn't to insult him, He knew Jodha wouldn't insult back if he hadn't done anything.

Let's see what she has got to show

"Hume Manzoor hai"

"Ab hume jaane dijiye"

Jalal closed the distance between there faces and moved more closer …

Jodha pushed him and ran away this time not followed by Jalal as he was busy feeling Triumph on the fact that he is going to be fed by Jodha, Whole day!

He glanced at the running form of Jodha and smirked Today he will totally enjoy his food.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely
eagerly waiting for next update
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Lovely tom nd jerry chase. Continue soon

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