FF: New Member:Jodha is only Mine-Updtd 2,3-Pg 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi All,

This is my first post in my whole life as of now and I have never been part of any forums before. It nearly took a month to join this forum though I was stalking the threads from the initial days of jodha akbar serial has started. I am fascinated by the analysis done by various members and fan ficton stories, I couldn't stop myself being part of the forum.

I love jodha akbar movie, when I heard this serial, I loved it from day one as it has the storyline of bad guy hero and goody heroine and which bound to have clashes, jealousy ( I am great fan of the hero who is passionately possessive about their heroine and get intense jealous when other men even think of looking at them)

So I thought of starting my post with the imaginary incident which could happen between jodha and akbar after marriage in no particular order.

Please let me know ur comments positive as well as negative. Thanks


Preface

Jodha is unwillingly married to Akbar, because of his family and Amer.
It is her intial days in Agra where jodha struggled to adjust with the new family , environment, culture and people as there is very little commonality
between her way of living,thinking and the mughals. To be true to herself she dont even want to adjust with her new place and people especially
her husband Jalal. Though she dont take him as her husband whole heartedly her upbringing make all the times prick her whenever she goes against him.
It brings her a little peace that she has her motibai with her which is great comfort among all the chaos, at the same time it also reminds her rajput life
with her parents what it could be if she would have married Suryaban, who wants to marry her for herself not because to possess or curb her self respect
and to show the world that mughals defeated Rajputs.


Jodha is only Mine


The day was very sunny, even the sun's harsh heated rays were not able to get jodha's attention who was standing on the terrace.
After she came to Agra, her heart always concerned about her Family . But as days passed, though little she knew abt her husband, no matter how cruel and power thirsty
he is , he is defintinely not liar or dishonest. His word are like promise.
Before marriage the only one thing she asked him is for the Protection of her family and the people.
Till now he is keeping her promise. she is very sure that they are in good hands.
He still doesnt stops her from her writing to them or following her religion,for that neither he accept nor he deny.
She was neither able to push him away as a monster nor accept him as a human.
For Jodha it is always black or white, she never encountered the people with black and white shades

Whever she thinks she is wrong that jalal is not a jallad he does have a kind heart, he always prove her wrong that he is the same old cruel self centered mughal.
whenever she thinks he is cruel he shows his gold of heart not willingly but his eyes speak that he does have love for his people, his subjects but it is very much biased.

Jodha's trail of thought has been interrupted by Motibai's voice, "Jodha, what were you doing under the hot sun, come inside the palace" and pulled her inside the palace.
"What have u done to urself jodha, it is only been days we left amer, but u already become half ur size and staring the amer's direction doesnt
help anyone, especially you , my dear, u already tanning a lot, i ll make the bath ready , u come and take a scented bath it will soothes your body and my mind".

"No motibai, i already had bath..why on the mid of the day u r pestering me..." "This u shld have though abt before standing under the sun,,, i am not going to allow
you to spoil urself.. give me 5 mins i ll make the bath ready".. told motibai and started to open her braids of the hair.

After few mins, jodha was in the bathtub, "Jodha , have ur bath..i ll go and get your dresses for change" and she left the bathroom and enter into jodha's palace.

(Jodha was given a separate palace in harem like ruqaiya. on entering her palace the first is to see the visitor's hall, then a hall for entertainment or reading, and
hall for praying, then it has hall for sleeping with that the bathroom is attached. (not sure much abt the original, but i see for that story to go). Among dasi's only
motibai allowed to enter into her sleeping dorm and her bathroom, ofcourse jalal enters in her palace as he doesnt need any permission.)


Motibai's was getting dresses for her jodha, she was selecting a blue lehenga, with the purple color chunari and about to go to jodha, she heard some sound and turned back.
She was startled seeing jalal at this time and in jodha's palace she shuttered and said her greetings to him.

Jalal : Where is jodha?
Moti : Shenhsha, jodha is having bath..we were not expecting ur visit, my lord, if so we wld be waiting for ur arrival.. cld u pls kindly pass
on the message to me so that i can deliver it jodha? (she dont know wat to do, she dont like him becoz of him only her precious princess is suffering)
Jala : a evil smirk on his face..hmm.. Motibai, u take my guards and go to the kitchen and tell them to make a feast tonite in rajput style and i want you to monitor them and
he gave a rock of his rings as a symbol of his order

Though motibai doesnt want to leave the place..definitely she doesnt have the courage to say anything against him..even she knows very well pleading is of no help.
She looked back at the side of the room where jodha is and with hesitation she left the palace with the guards.


Jalal's was controlling him very much not to enter into her bathroom. Though he is control is wearing out..whenever he hears the payals' sound..splashing of the water..
but still he knew if he enters she will be embarrassed and angered. Seeing her angry face is a thrill to him..the first time he was only mesmerized by her beauty
but the second time which made him to make her is the angry on her face and the sword on his neck. walla..wat a fiery lioness i have brought.. she is no less to me..
there was proud in his thinking i am the owner of this master pieced.. no one dares to even think abt it.


"Moti...where are u??? how long i am waiting... get me the dresses" jodha's impatient voice

Waited for a sec..with a naughty thought in his head and smile on his face..he took the dress moti selected and move towards the direction of jodha's voice

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The bath really did help her to soothe her body and mind..the scented of the bath moti made was very subtle but yet pleasant like her preference.. even after waiting for long
time there is no response from moti..with the growing impatience..she get out of the bath with her wet cloth.. and move towards her bedroom..


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In a fraction of seconds, both jalal and jodha were standing face to face each other in the bedroom ( certain distance from the bathroom, not visible from the entrance)
he was stunned by her beauty..he alreayd knew she is the most beautiful lady he ever set eyes on..but apart from her beauty there is something else in her
always attract him towards her.. he was not able to put fingers on wat it is it bothers him anything..it is like entering the battle without knowing who is the enemy..
He couldnt take the eyes off from her..her simple child like face..in that beautiful big eyes which speak volumes .. and the lenght hair which is dripping with water..
she covered herself till the chest part..and he could see the bare shoulders..and the wheatish complexion of her shoulders...


Jodha was shocked and he is the last person she wld be expecting at this time. She wants to run back to the bathroom to hide from him.. but she couldnt..for a split seconds
their eyes met..there is no hatred..no dominance..nor any negative feelings in it..it shows the pure his excitement of seeing her..she can feel his eyes over all his body
and she can feel his eyes rested on her bare shoulders.. but her body is not complying her mind's order of running..she was standing there..
as if he has bind her in his eyes...

After a few minutes she realised the state she was standing she wanted to show the angry but she couldnt , the words were not coming out of her mouth..instead of saying
anything she thought of grabbing the clothes he had in his clothes and ran away back..and move towards him

Without angry or even a single word, she was trying to take the clothes from him..he pulled her to him and hold her within his hands.. "ji..please leave me..t
i have to change. please give me my dress.." she was pleading...though she doesnt want to but she has to.. she felt some other eyes on her and looked towards the
entrance , she saw adham khan standing..


Seeing her eyes going towards the entrance..jalal saw adham khan standing there. Adham khan was seeing his wife.. he dont even see the shensha..his eyes were rest on
his wife's bare shoulders.. Jalal's blood was boiling.. if he was standing next to his hand he wld have killed him with his bare hands.. how dare he see his wife..
knowing her state..he came infront of her..pushing her behind him..his big sculpted body towers over jodha and she was hid completely behind him..

The movement brought th adham khan too to realise that shenhsha was also there.. that too..with the bloody anger in his eyes.. immediatly his crooked mind was planning
of some excuse.. "Sorry shenhsha ji..i am really sorry..ur badi ammi told me to inform ruquaiya and jodha regarding ur trip, thats why i came to inform her", i dint
expect u here..sorry, i will take my leave my lord"

"Wait Adham", roared jalal's voice..
"I dnt want anyone to enter jodha's palace.. even if it is ordered by badi ammi or ammi jaan, if i know the same thing happens i dont event investigate nor i consider
u as my badi amm's son i ll execute u at that place itself ..remember and never come near this place till u live "

"Sorry my lord, my intention is not inappropriate..but it will not happen again" without turning back he left the place.

But still jalal was burning inside..he never lose control like this, but why someone looking at her make his go wild.. he know he is possasive person
but when some sees of his possessions he always seen the proud in his eyes and pity that the others cant have it.. but today..even a glimpse of jodha
was seen by someone was intolerable to him.. if possible he wld ban all the men around her place..but why he is feeling it..she is already mine..
then wat cld be the reason for this unexplained wild behaviour.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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What it ended I wanted to read more...😭

Please update soon...😳

And your welcomed her dear...🤗

And it was an awesome start...👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all welcum to the forum dear..🤗...
U r a brilliant writer...👏 very well written..👍🏼
Plz do continue soon... Really lukin 4ward 4 ur writings..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to JA forum dear.🤗 And I must say, You have a grand entry.😆 Awesome update. It was really very nice.😃😃 Please don't finish it. I want to read more.🤪
Edited by Archi02 - 12 years ago
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u r a brilliant writer
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is called dhamakedaar entry!
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Originally posted by: Autumn_Rose

This is called dhamakedaar entry!

absolutly... keep it up buddy👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start , please continue .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi All,

Thanks a lottt for all ur wonderful replies.. i was jumping with joy seeing all ur support..

I am very very overwhelmed by all ur likes and replies...

Sure i ll update the story , i will be updating it on next sunday... 😊

Have a Great Week Ahead.. Bye..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: flowergirlz

Hi All,

Thanks a lottt for all ur wonderful replies.. i was jumping with joy seeing all ur support..

I am very very overwhelmed by all ur likes and replies...

Sure i ll update the story , i will be updating it on next sunday... 😊

Have a Great Week Ahead.. Bye..




Excellent first chapter👏👏👏 Too bad we have to wait a week to read the next one😭

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