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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dabangg Entry !! 😆
Wah wah.. Mast tha yaar...
Welcome to Inda forums and Welcome to the JA forum..
I am Andrea. call me Andy. 😃

I want you to continue because even I like posssesive hero's! 😆😉😉

Love Andy. XOXO
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start... Plz pm me when u update. It's totally awesome.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice idea..Loved the naughtiness,possessiveness,cuteness and sheer romance :) Continue Soon :D
Please continue soon :))
Add me in your PM list :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u all for the encouraging comments. Please find my next update and let me know ur comments.


Jodha is only mine - Part 2
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Still he was shaking with anger..if his anger could take a form definitely it wld be a wild storm which cld destroy not only the palace but the whole hindustan itself.
He is not only feeling angry on Adham khan but also on jodha also.
How long does it take for her to come out .. Jalal is never even used to the word patience it was others who used to be patient with him
the wait is wearing out his patience... and he rushed into jodha's room...


There she was standing infront of the mirror as a statue staring at the sindoor in her hand (she is holding the vessel for holding the sindoor)

What does this sindoor signify that i am his wife and he is my husband... does he really know what is to be her husband..can she be really live as his wife??
what is the meaning of their relationship..he married her to humiliate the rajputs and to punish her for keeping sword on his neck
she married him to save her amer,brothers and family. He never allows her to forget that she is living this luxurious life due to his generousity towards rajputs

What is the purpose of wearing the sindoor, without putting in on her maang, she kept it on the table when she looked up she saw jalal's reflection in the mirror.
He hasnt gone yet..still he is waiting here.. she wasnt aware of that..anyways he is waiting or not waiting.. doesnt make any difference to her..

But what is there in his eyes, angry or sarcasm, she looked puzzled and about to turn to face him..before she turns fully he closed the distance between them and planted his palms on her shoulders and turn her to face the mirror..
She tried to get away from the hold but his hold is very grip she even cldnt move a bit.There is no point in trying , instead of losing by trying she stand in the same position.

He and her in a single frame of the mirror, we look so perfect for each other, if he is an example of perfect man she is epitome of grace,
still we are so different..he doesnt believe in heart..he never loved anyone..for him everything starts and end with the mind. for a second she forgot that he is her enemy, there standing is the man who married her.. respecting her feelings he never touched her... does he really dont have a heart?? or he pretending
to be heartless?? does he really donno that he has a heart??


"I hear u the rajput laides after marriage wear sindoor, but why this begum is not wearing it" stressing the rajput with a sarcastic tone.
"cld it be the reason, that my lady loves me a lot that even sindoor she wants me to put it on her maang..." with a naughty smirk on his face he questioned her..

His voice broke the trail of her thoughts ,she slumbered and realised wat he told and replied "wat???, with ur hand i want to wear sindoor...
r u out of ur mind, defintiely it will not happen.." but he alreayd did that during their marriage he put sindoor on her maang, her heart was contradicting wat her mouth was telling, as if he heard her thought , he replied with a smirk on his face "after leaving amer..my dear begum..ur memory is fading i guess..i have already put sindoor on ur maang, dont u remember??" he too was hinting at the wedding...

she bowed her head with embarrasement and bite her lips to hide the trembling of her lips

His eyes softened and rest on her lips ,in a split second his voice changed from the silky sarcastic tone to a hard harsh tone,
" Remember one thing jodha clearly...u like it or not.. i am ur husband and u r my wife.. u r going to follow all the customs to be a married woman.. i dont know y u ppl wear this,but for me it is to show the whole world that u r mine and only mine.. ur body,mind,soul and heart" telling he took the sindoor and put it on her maang.


"For a person who dont have a heart u r talking abt heart, that is ridiculous", she want to hit him back with watever means possible.
he turned her towards him and holding her shoulders tightly "nowadays u r forgetting a lot, i dont have a heart..but i am talking abt urs..ur heart is only mine..the thoughts , feelings watever u have in ur heart should be mine and about me only, may b i should teach u a lesson to remind u that"
and he crushed his lips on hers

"Now u and ur heart will remember me isnt it??" in a caressing voice told jalal.


before leaving the place he Saw Jodha's shocked face, "Oh i forgot the reason why i came to ur palace , u really do have the talent to make me forget the other things
i am going to amer to discuss some political matters" and he paused. hearing amer's name... jodha's face brightened.. she was very anxious to request him to
take her with him but she has too much pride to ask that..

seeing her anxious face..with a sly smile "I thought u wld also like to accompany me..but it seems u r not interested , hmmm though i was expecting u to come with me..i am happy that u r well adjusted to agra so i.." jodha hurriedly interrputed.."Ji i also want to go to amer"

"Jodha, it is no u r going to amer..u r coming with me to amer, remember the difference, but there is one condition, then only i can take u with me"

"Wat is the condition" in an anxious voice

"There u have to be my wife" pausing to see jodha's pale face.. "u will follow my words..u will never do or say anything against me..
we will be staying in the same room but as i promised till u agree i will not come near u"

"Ya sure..i ll listen to ur words, please let me see my family" she pleaded.

"After marriage, i am ur family they are u maikey..remember this, ur loyalty shld be with me"

"OK...sure..Thanks " she told in a small voice.

"Get ready we are travelling in a week" and without waiting for her reply he left the palace.


Everything happened as if a whirlwind, she felt like a left in the storm, she turned towards the mirror saw herself. maang is covered with lots of sindoor, her hair has come out of her braids, her lips..the lips he touched with his.. she touched the lips with her fingers she felt a tingling feeling which was going through her body, it is a feeling she never experienced before..she thought he kissed to prove her that he owns her..but..but the way he kissed her it was as if he was brushing her wound to heal it, there is no anger, hatred or even dominance..though he crushed her lips, there was caring in it, to be honest with herself, when he was holding her and kissed ,she felt relieved she felt at home. Her own thought made her angry..wat i feel at home with jalal..he is the one who broke my home. i think staying in this mughal palace making me crazy.

But somewhere her heart is torn into the argument, one part of her she started feeling at home ,not with the mughal palace but with her husband, but another part of her heart doesnt want to accept
and acknowledge it.











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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update :) Really liked Akbar's jealousy and possessiveness :D jodha's antics are quite cute..
OMG They Kissed :O
Really cute update :) They are travelling to Amer..Will be staying in the same room :D what more could I have asked for..Please continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I always wanted to write an update to make jalal jealous..

hope u all like my updates 😊



Jodha is only mine - Part 3
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Note: It is Still 5 more days to go, to travel to Amer.

Jodha is started getting used to her life in agra , in the mughal palace. But she is not able to get used to her husband Jalal.
Day by day he showed her different diferent faces, one day he will be the shensha who doesnt think another second to execute a person,
another day he will be competitor or adamant friend to give counter attack to ruquaiya in her chess games, another day he will be loving son who in search of compassionn in maham anga's lap.

With her,she really cant understand him at all why does he marry her...if humiliating the rajput is his intention, he wld have easily put her in the harem as one of the concubine and she is helpless but he didnt , may be if that is the case, definitely she wld have used the poison given my her mom the moment itself.

But why does he care abt her life or death... ?? if his intention is to conquer her...he cld have forced himself on her..but he dint do that also, though she was vehemently opposing him...he left her untouched telling her, he never touch an unwilling women even if she is his begum.

Is his intention is to hold her as a prisoner in his empire and destroy her self-respect? Or make her to come down on her kneels??

She was not able to come to a conclusion abt him..she was unsure whether she can ever understand him at all.

If someone wld have told her that she wld b living with mughals she wld have laughed at their face..but today..
she is living with them as if she has been trained for it.

In the short course of time, she thought she was lucky enuf to find alteast two companions in this big lonely mughal palace .

The first person is Hamida Banu, the ammijaan of Jalal. She is a very kind lady and very importantly she respects other religions too which is very rare in this palace.

Though jalal respects her ammijaan and her words, there is always a distance in his attitude towards her. She was craving for her son's attention and affection.
Apart from these reasons, there is two more reasons why she prefers her company, one is, this is the place where jalal hardly visits so she can stay here without getting a shock of he appearing out of blue behind her with the smirk on his face. And the other main reason, why she frequents her mother-in-law's company is to know
more about her husband's childhood and his life before she comes...she couldnt understand why she wants know abt the person whom he hates the most..may b she wants to know abt his weakness and to play with it... but she never had play with anyone's weaknesses.. but why..the question still remains unanswered..


The other person with whom her frequency matches is Abdul, one of the ministers in the mughal court and a best friend of jalal. The one person who can tell his view to jalal without the fear of his head being chopped off as if he never bothers abt his head at all.. The loyalty he shown to his friend and his king is tremendable..
Above all the common factor between her and abdul is they both love literatures.. he even read the rajput's histories.. when she raised her eyebrows with surprise he replies.."i admire the courage and generouity the rajput king's shown, but our king jalal is the best and he is no less to any rajput king in his intelligence,
and genreousity" he always taken his king's side irrespective of watever it is, end of the conversation they both will be laughing about the stubborness of each other's points.
No matter whatever topic they have started, it always end in Jalal. If only abdul wasnt here she would have forget to smile at all..those were the times where she dont remember other than laughing and playing... she let out a sigh in vain.

Abdul : Malika, are u alright ??
Jodha : How many times i told u bai sa..to call me jodha.. if u r not going to call me jodha i wll not talk to u at all... she turned to walk away from the place.
Abdul : Ok ok.. Mali...Jodha... it will not happen again..ok happy now..
Jodha : Mali...Jodha is not ok..only Jodha is ok baisa.. seeing his hesitation she was smiling..
Jodha : I have a doubt baisa..if ur king is illiterate, then who wrote the threat in the amer's jail.. she was curious she want to know more about that incident , the first time she encounterd her future husband face to face.
Abdul : With a naughty smile on his face, It seems u remember me telling "Our" king is illiterate, but u dont remember ur baisa is literate.. isnt jodha??

forgetting such a small mistake how come she can do that..even if she wld have done that, do this baisa has to tell it loud to embarras her..
Jodha : baisa..u na.. and they both broke into a laugh


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The sight of jodha has become very scarce nowadays..she never come to his palace and his duties more than ever needed his time..
Whenever he comes to jodha's palace either she is in her mom's palace which he hardly goes...

He was growing restless with jodha's absence..today i am going to find her no matter where she is , even if she is in ammijaan's palace..
u thought u can hide it there forever..which means u still u dont knonw me at all..
i didnt marry u so u cld live a peaceful life here.. it is to show u that i am the mughal is the master of u the rajput.

As a lion attacks its prey he was going to ammijaan's palace.. on the way he heard a mild smiling sound.. the momemt he heard it..he knows it is Jodha..
Though he never heard her smile..something in him tell it is his jodha's smile. A smile sat on his face, all his restless was gone he felt happy but he couldnt understand why he felt happy.. he shld felt angry that she is happy here.. but his mind is very far from those petty discussions he moved towards the smile's direction.

It is jodha..but she was laughing with Abdul.

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Jodha : Baisa.. i forgot to give u onething..today is raksha bandhan.. on this day we used to tie the rakhi to our brothers.
U too are a brother to me, do u mind if i tie this on ur wrist..she asked with hesitation
Abdul : Jodha, u dont need to ask permission for me.. the way u consider me as ur brother i too see u as my sister only. I have only one complaint with my sister
that she hates my bahanoi (jalal) and she should try to understand him, telling he extends his arm towards her

Jodha laughed and tied a raki on his hand.. and touched his feet for blessings..


"What is going on here???? what cld be the reason the malika-e-hind is bowing to a minister??" a harsh voice echoed the whole place.

Jalal was standing a two feet away from them.. how come he came here.. at this time. this is the time for his sessions with the scholars
to know and discuss about the literature

Jalal couldnt tolerate that his begum dont have time for him..and the smile, she never give him a mild smile itself
Whenever she saw him either she will show hatred,angry on her
but she has time for his minister (he dont want acknowledge him as a friend at this momemt)
when he first saw her...she was holding his hand..how dare she can touch another man..no matter whoever he is.


"Shehnsha ji, u here.. ur session with the scholars are over", abdul asked calmly..

"I asked a question, abdul, what is going on here..why malika held ur hand and bow down to u", he stressed the word malika.

Abdul was amused seeing his master's reactions.

"Shensha, did u see me holding her hand..no isnt it..Malika was holding my hand, so u shld ask Malika only", with a pleasing tone he replied stressing the words malika.

"I dont expect a question for a question abdul... answer me now..else i dont think twice to chop ur head off" , he placed his hand on his sword.

There is no reply from Abdul

Seeing the interaction, jodha was scared to death..if jalal in anger wld do something to abdul which he mite regret later.She knows how much he care for him.

she hurried towards jalal and placed her hand on his hand which rest on the sword.. "Ji, today is raksha bandhan, sisters tie the rakhi on their brother's wrist, it is
a custom we follow" she hurried her explanation and looked towards abdul's direction. "please tell him baisa" she pleaded .


"Baisa...???" He felt relieved, or he felt as if something which was burning on his chest was cooled down or somehing which was heavy on his chest he felt light
jalal looked her who is standing close to him and her hand on his. With the fear in her eyes..the fear he didnt see it when he brought her to
mughal palace as a pawn..but he saw the fear in her eyes when someone whom she cares might get hurt.. He dint like that she cares someone else..
she should only care abt me.

Jalal looked at abdul's wrist and see his face. Abdul was smiling. "Ji, now i am not only ur minister , i am ur begum's brother too, still do u want to chop my head,
I will be very glad to give my head for my kind, my sister and my sister's husband" he said with the smuck on his face.


Jalal looked at Jodha, " Malika, even u consider abdul as ur brother. u have to remember ur husband is the emperor of hindustan
and u r the empress, u shouldnt not bow to anyone except the god and me" he said with the final note and take her hand started walking towards her palace.


Abdul, " My king defintely had fallen head over heals for my sister, poor him he doesnt even know abt it" he laughed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update yaar... I think I'm in love with this ff. thankx for the the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome as usual...

But please update the title of the story...

(Go to your first post and at the end you wil see edit button press it and you can edit the post)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really liked Akbar's jealousy and possessiveness
loved
loved the bond between abdul and jodha
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thanks for the comments.. i am very glad u all like it. 😊

Thanks Arya75 for the info..i have updated the title.

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