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IPKKND_Pyaar

@IPKKND_Pyaar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Great update..

Loved to see the others aspects of the story as well..

Jodha and Hamidha's bonding was pure..

Looking forward to more..

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Alakh

@Autumn_Rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Thanks a lot.😊 Maham Anga's wish to marry Adham to BAkshi Bano after winning war at Malwa😆 It was shown in today's ep!!

Edited by Autumn_Rose - 12 years ago

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apolloartemis

@apolloartemis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Jodha and Ruq's equation is off to an explosive start! And Adham Khan- how disappointed must MA be with such a son!
Good job and thank you for the pm!

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

really good dear. again it increased my curiosity as what can be the next. just a suggestion, why don't u give precap of next chapter just as they show on TV?

anyway, waiting for next part...

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

last part nahi samajh aaya...what did adham khan do?

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Alakh

@Autumn_Rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: aanchal_c
last part nahi samajh aaya...what did adham khan do?

He did not send a full report, Jalal obviously smelled a rat.. He wants to catch him red handed.. will let u know in the next chapter😊

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Alakh

@Autumn_Rose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha
really good dear. again it increased my curiosity as what can be the next. just a suggestion, why don't u give precap of next chapter just as they show on TV?

anyway, waiting for next part...

Hey thanks.. will try! 😊

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Asandhimitra

@LadyMacbeth

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Please update soon, you really have a good writing hand. 👏

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: LuvMishalRaheja
Please update soon, you really have a good writing hand. 👏

ha yaar jaldi update karo

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Dear Rose,

I am not in general much interested in FFs, but this one promises to be the exception. It flows smoothly, the style and syntax are near flawless, and you have managed to keep the characters both recognisable and credible.

My felicitations, and I am looking forward to enjoying myself as you proceed with it.

Just a couple of points, if I may, by way of a constructive critique. Jodha would not refer to her husband as Jalal, either in private, or even more so to outsiders like Ruqaiya. Also the tone (not the content) of her retort to Ruqaiya does not jell with Jodha's character. It sounds like a catfight, and while that might be Ruqaiya at times. it is not Jodha. A smooth, dignified, non-confrontational but effective putdown, like the one in the bazaar or in the jaziya scene, would have been perfect.

It is the same with her squeaking at Jalal that he should not touch her. Apart from the fact that he is her legally wedded husband and she did not marry him with any such condition, it sounds like a petulant schoolgirl, not a queen. It was done very nicely and delicately in the film.

Lastly, I see that 'smirk' is an expression of choice in the IF, and I wonder why.

Once again, I really liked this FF, and I hope you will take my comments above in the spirit in which they are offered.

Shyamala Aunty

Chapter 3