FF ~A Midsummer Night's Dream~epilogue pg 45 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Savi_S

Nice update...

Thanks for pm...
Jodha is poisoned...
Eagerly waiting for next part...

Originally posted by: Arya75

Great work yaar...

Thanks for the PM...

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

O My God! Jodha is dead😲

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

nice...i hope jodha is alive and gets well soon...i dont like adam khan..i hope halal is strong enough to teach him a lesson bcoz here he seems to be more of a kid...

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

Very interesting dear 👏 ⭐️ 👏
Thanks so much🤗

I didn't liked Adam Khan or his wife's character. They seemed to be very creepy 🤢

Maham Anga is as usual a rock star, can anyone dare to comment on her 🤣

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣OMG that emo is too CUTE😆😆😆MAHAMANGA JI KA no comparison😆😆😆SHE EVEN controlled HUMAYUN IN THIS STORY😛and made him ADOPT her GOOD FOR NOTHING SON!😆😆

As far as our newly married couple is concern I hope Jalal will try to remove the misunderstanding and make Jodha to fall in love.

OH yes!! There will be lots of MU but finally LOVE CONQUERS EVERYTHING😳

Waiting for your update 😳

Priya

Originally posted by: virgo24

Hello manzilmukul,
Hey there 🤗You can call me Piu😳

Wow, the dream felt quite real until you also woke me up! Your choice of words bring your story to life, I can imagine each detail and felt I was apart of it. . . .I also liked the song that you sequenced in between the story--it set the mood.
Hhahhaha😆😆😆I am WICKED😛Love to burst BUBBLES😆..Sigh Jokes Apart Thanks so much for that praise😃FEELS GREAT!! Coming to the song...Its something CLASS APART!!I love that 👏👏Never heard anything that matches even close to Aaj jane ki zid na karo..I am glad that you found it blending seamlessly with the premise of the story😳

You kept repeating 5 years, 5 long years. I guess I will find out more as the story progresses about its significance. I am shocked that Jalal killed Jodha's father. How will love happen between Akbar and Jodha?

O yes!! Those 5 long years is going to be a major turning point in the course of the story.The story traces the journey of an ALTER Jalaal which unlike the show is human and has a heart which got captivated by the woman whom he could not have but fate pitches them together .As for The KILLING part ,it is going to come up later.Hope it holds your interest😳

I found it interesting how you included Jalal's father in your story. I am curious to know what role he will play in upcoming chapters of Midsummer Night's Dream. Going to start reading chapter 2!

~Virgo