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sana2511

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

its awesome nisha too gud...

keep continue dear...😊

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Asandhimitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ---Nisha---

thank you!! Dreamy was what I was going for. Seems like it worked.

I wasn't planning on another part. wouldnt know what to write. It was just suppsoed to be a one time...how they meet OS.

But , you've to continue now...please...I want to read more scenes like the dream scene n the after puja scene .

Lovved the firce interaction between the two future lovers .

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Harshil Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

awesome Nisha great start

continue soon

plz pm me for the next parts of this story

or any story you write on JODHAA AKBAR

THANK YOU IN ADVANCE

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: LuvMishalRaheja
But , you've to continue now...please...I want to read more scenes like the dream scene n the after puja scene .
Lovved the firce interaction between the two future lovers .

Okay how about this...I will write OS's about Jodha-Akbar encounters. I don't wanna write an FF...I always start off really good but then I leave in midway because I get too lazy or I loose interest in the TV show. So to avoid that I am only going to write OS's.

Anyways, the next encounter could be during the jaang scene as Akbar swore today in blood.

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disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Nisha!So this is what you were telling me about yesterday!

Beautifully written dude! 👏

You have impeccable diction. 👏

I just cannot get connected to a story,unless the writer's english/hindi(english mostly!my hindi is comparitively weaker :p) is good.Its so rare to find good writers in IF,you know!

As i began reading,it did give me a sort of dark haunted feeling which was beautifully mixed with romance!The kind of stories i love reading! 😳

One part of Jodha wants to know who the 'man of her dreams' is (figuratively ) .Yet another part loathes the fact that she somehow longs for him.

Beautifully described!

There have been only a selective few writers i have genuinely liked here on IF,you certainly are one among them now!

the story just gripped me!

The climax,cherry on the top,my friend!

p.s : Im hoping u must have written a few more one shots,anonymous ones maybe?Links please! 😃 I stalk the writer,once i like him/her 😆 dont mind me 😛

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---Nisha---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: disha15
Nisha!So this is what you were telling me about yesterday!

Beautifully written dude! 👏

You have impeccable diction. 👏

I just cannot get connected to a story,unless the writer's english/hindi(english mostly!my hindi is comparitively weaker :p) is good.Its so rare to find good writers in IF,you know!

As i began reading,it did give me a sort of dark haunted feeling which was beautifully mixed with romance!The kind of stories i love reading! 😳

One part of Jodha wants to know who the 'man of her dreams' is (figuratively ) .Yet another part loathes the fact that she somehow longs for him.

Beautifully described!

There have been only a selective few writers i have genuinely liked here on IF,you certainly are one among them now!

the story just gripped me!

The climax,cherry on the top,my friend!

p.s : Im hoping u must have written a few more one shots,anonymous ones maybe?Links please! 😃 I stalk the writer,once i like him/her 😆 dont mind me 😛