'PAAKEEZAA'JA ff PART 4 PG13 - Page 4

Great update. 😉 Romance deepening. 😉

wow so good
update soon :D

update soon...ur story is better than akbar and jodhas real life.

Originally posted by: ApurvaLovesARVI

Too..Short..Please Update soon...Jodha out alone for the first time.!! Loved this Update...

thank you :)

Originally posted by: sweetshera

Lovely start. JA are happily married. continue soon.

thank you :)

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

update soon...ur story is better than akbar and jodhas real life.

oh my god !! you really think so ! thank you thank you soo much :) :)

Originally posted by: Bamonforever

Great update. 😉 Romance deepening. 😉

please update soon. 😃

thank you !! it will deepen more as the story progresses ;)

Originally posted by: magicbook

hey friends i am new to this forums !!!! jodha akbar was is and will always be my favorite movie and also i am a huge fan of rajat tokas and now that rajat tokas plays the role of jalal 😛 what more could i ask for 😉 well i am trying my hand at writting , i am not so good at it but anyways do let me know if you like it and should i continue

chapter 1

She snuggled more into the royal silk spread missing the warmth that keeps her cozy all night ...she roamed her hand over the empty space beside her where her husband jalal was supposed be ...it was wee hours of morning ...she could not sleep the whole night because she was used to him now his sweet whispers and caresses ... but she tried to put herself to sleep ...after a while she felt movement beside her... the familiar scent of "attar" made her realize that it was him she turned quickly and placed her head on his broad muscular chest

jalal:" app abhi tak nahi soi?"

jodha :" nahi hum toh so rahe hai" she answered with her eyes closed

jalal chuckled at her attics and moved a lock of hair that was on her face and tucked it beside her ear and kept admiring her beauty so serene divine and peaceful

jodha:" shehenshaaji " she wispered

jalal:" hmm boliye jodha "

jodha :" sujamal bhaisa ke bare mein aapko koi khbar mili " she asked fearing his answer ...sujamal was a very dear cousin brother of jodha who had gone missing mysteriously a few weeks ago

jalal:" ab tak toh nahi , par jald hee mil jayegi ...hum par yakeen haina aapko"

jodha opened her eyes and lifted her head from his chest and looked deep into his eyes

jodha:" apne aap se bhi ziyada " she whispered lovingly and then placed her head back on her favorite place that is his chest

jalal: " achaa yeh bataiye ki humari shezaadi kaisi hai?" he asked caressing jodha's huge belly

jodha :" humara SHEZAADA bilkul theek hai " she wanted a baby boy while jalal wanted a baby girl so since they came to know about the pregnancy they both always had these cute little fights

jalal would love to tease jodha about how him and his daughter would team up against her that would leave jodha's cheeks all puffed up and red with anger

life couldnt be more perfect for jalal ...for him jodha was the best thing that happened ...jalal sometimes wondered how did they end up like this ...jodha only hated him to the core when the first met and he ,... he only lusted her ...wanted to win her like a battle ...but fate had chosen them ...never did they thought that they would fall in love ...he did not even believe that love existed ...jalal looked down upon his wife sleeping peacefully in his arms ...he thanked almighty for giving him jodha ...he remembered the first time he saw her at amer

precap:" FLASHBACK OF THEIR FIRST MEETING"

so this was my first part plz like and comment

Beautiful Update.

ab update kar hi do yr...our intejaar kiya nehi jata