JodhaAkbar Os Najre Karam Updated Part 2 pg 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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(((hi guys...this is not my first writing...but first one for Jodha Akbar...do comment and like)))


"Inayat karu ya ibadat karu...
ye kashmakash to suljha dijiye...ke aapse ya in noore najron se mohabbat karu..."

as the lines touched her heart, she ran away from the gulshan baag...

her heart was thumping loudly...the husky voice made her cheeks crimson...
she ran inside her room and hid herself with the soft white sheets in her king size bed...her breathing was faster than ever...
she never thought her heart will sing the name which she used to hate once...
the soft wind swayed in a majestic motion in the room...the white curtains were moving with the wind as if they were dancing and celebrating her joy...
suddenly a light weight and jumping movement at her shoulder caught her senses...
Saheli!!...she voiced the name happily and lovingly captured the little white pigion in her hand...
the innocent bird replied with its soft voice...she kissed the bird dearly...
"unhone hamse ijhaar kiya"...she whispered softly to the bird and giggled...
the bird inched closure to her cheeks and pampered her as if it was caressing her friend...
"kaash ham itne khuskismat hote ke aapki saheli ki jagaah hame milti"...the deep voice made the bird flew away and she hid herself in her ghunghat...
"aap...yaha!!...she murmured and blushed...
" aapki chupti nigaahen hame pukaarti jo hain"...his voice was so closure to her ear, that she shiverred in his presence...
" aapne hamare sawal kaa jawab nahi diya" ...he embraced her in his majestic folds of arm from behind...
" kya aapne hamari najre nahi pari?" she shyly whispered in his embrace...
he turned her arround and cupped her face with utmost care...
" Jodha!!...aapki najre hamse kabhi kuch nahi chupati...par ham aapke komal labzose sunna chahte hai...kahiye naa!!"...
his dark intense gaze washed away all her insecurities and she closed her eyes and whispered -" aajse ham Jodha ki har ek saans aur har najar Akbar ke naam karte hai"...
as her voice echoed through the room...she felt his breathing in her lips...before she can open her hazel eyes, her lips was caged in his...
their togetherness and love reflects through the night and the royal heart of Shahenshaa Akbar was now gifted to his precious love and wife Jodha...

(((so friends comment and like...need ur views...))))

guys add this id (samsona) if u want pms...i will updt more later..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That's my 2nd hand id. I didn't wanted to comment with this id. But...your update forced me to do so. It was just suparb. Really heart touching. And mashallah, you're very good at hindi. Love u for such a beautiful update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kishore02

That's my 2nd hand id. I didn't wanted to comment with this id. But...your update forced me to do so. It was just suparb. Really heart touching. And mashallah, you're very good at hindi. Love u for such a beautiful update.



what is ur real ID?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg this is sooo awsum!!! plzz dnt end it here nd continue wth this story!!
amazing work i must say..congratulations 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome
Loved it

Write some more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annarichard

omg this is sooo awsum!!! plzz dnt end it here nd continue wth this story!!
amazing work i must say..congratulations 👏 👏



thanks a lot...will updt for sure..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -kitty-

Awesome
Loved it

Write some more



sure...thanks for appreciating..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great os plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Sona!It was a Beautiful Piece of Writing!!! 👏 👏 And I really l❤️ved it alot.!!
Now One thing I haven't watched the show. 😆But Still your beautiful writing is irresistable So I came to read and I can clearly imagine everything.!! 😳
And Another thing is I like Rajat Tokas ALOT❤️ from Tere liye times. 😉 But I didn't realized that show started from last week but I watched ending scene of an epi in which Our Daddy Dearest Chanda Papa was sitting in front of Akbar.😉 🤣 🤣Haha,It's a Balaji Telefilms show ofcourse. 😛 😆
I really love this alot and Would love to read more of their romance,PM me if you update.☺️ 😳 😆
And I'll try to catch the show also at 8 from tommorow. 😉 😊 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow first os on JA,
loved it.
.do write more!!
n plzz pm me nxt time😳

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