JodhaAkbar Os Najre Karam Updated Part 2 pg 7 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww that was beautiful😳
lovedd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woooww..this was soo darn good re...just loved it ! every dialogue was just soo intense..perfectly suitin JA..awesome one..do right more..loved ur writing..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
I am back with this os...thanks a lot for such heart touching response...I m updating this after a while...thank u all...i nvr thought i will get such response...do read my new os Noor e mohabbat as well..
send me buddy request at "Samsona" for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wuhoo I'm really happy to know you are continuing this.😃See I'm Dancing also. 😆
And Maine Abhi tere PM ka reply kia hai.😳Check kar.😛😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dat's gr8. Mujhe pm karna maat vulna
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Next part-

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''Har najar tera didaar chahe

Har karam kurbaan teri ibadat me

Ye kaisi bekhudi samayi tere aane se

Ke Chaand bhi mar mita tere mohabbat me''

"To aap bhi hamse mohabbat karti hai begam!" Jalaal asked her while inhaling her blossoming aroma…

"Ham…hame jaane dijiye…choriye ." Jodha blushed hard and tried to escape from his strong embrace.

"Aap bhul gayi ki Jalaal ke marji ke bina hawa bhi yaha se bhaag nahi sakta..aur aapto hamari Jaan hai…apko ham kaise kahi jane de?" Jalaal embraced her more closely and kissed her forehead.

"Jodha bataiye naa! Ham aapki labzo se ye baat sunna chahte hai" Jalaal caressed her maangtika and Jodha closed her eyes feeling blessed…

"Ham…hamare ishwaar ki saugandh ham hamare patiko hi apna parmeshwar maante hai" Jodha whispered so softly…

"Nahi Jodha! Hame ye sunna hai ke aap hamse mohabbat karti hai" Jalaal pouted like a stubborn kid..

The curtains were flowing with soft sweet air as if they were also eager to hear those words from her..The little pigeon was staring at the divine soul mates as if it was also wanting to listen to her heart's rhythm..All of a sudden a heavy wind started to flow and a white long satin curtain fall over them…Jodha lost her balance and fell on Jalaal.. Jalaal fall down on the rosy pink bed and Jodha accidentally fall over him..

Her pink rosy lips brushed over his strong lips. Jodha was shocked…she closed her eyes with utter shyness. Jalaal felt an unknown flame within him which was burning yet so soothing at the same time.

Jodha somehow managed remove the curtain escaped from his grip and was about to run away..but Jalaal again grabbed her hands and pooled her on his strong chest.

"Abhi jo aapke chehre me gulaal se gehri rangat dikhi thi kya wo haya ki lakeer hamare mohabbat se nahi rangi thi?" Jalaal gazed deeply in her eyes and huskily asked..

"boliye naa Jodha…hamare dilko aur mat intezaar karwaiye..kedijiye wo shabd jispe hame aitbaar nahi thaa kabhi..par aapne hame uspe aitbaar dilaya..jo mohabbat hamare liye ek naamse jyada kuch nahi thaa, usko aapne hamare rooh tak pahuchaya hai..to fir ye khamoshi kyun!., Jalaal's eyes was full of passion and undying love for her..

"

Jodha forgot to breath. She forgot her shyness and his love was the only thing which was portraying on her soul.

"Ham aapse aur sirf aapse prem karte hai..Jitna shraddha se ham Kaanha ko poojte hai utna hi gehrayi se ham aapko apni pooja me maangte hai..haan ham aapse prem karte hai.." Jodha finally voiced the lines with an unending depth of love.

She closed her eyes with joy and covered herself in his embrace.

The flame within his heart was now glowing with love and passion..Jalaal cupped her flushed face and kissed her forehead with care…he then kissed her eyelids with love..then he started to forward towards her lips with passion..

Jodha felt his breath on her lips..she opened her eyes with shyness and shock..her black orbs met his brown mirrors…Jodha's eyes were evidence of shyness..She blinked countlessly and gazed at the candle, the only light source of the room beside them and which was softly warming and enlightening the room.

Jalaal understood shyness and her blushing red face was potraying her wish..Jalaal blew off the candles and the only light source on the room was now the soft moon light in between the curtains.

Her face was glowing with love and shyness and she again closed her eyes gracefully.

Jalaal captured her lips and the moon light also darkened slowly as if the moon was also feeling shy with their flame of love and passion..

DO COMMENT AND LIKE>>😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
guys i am again requesting to buddy me at samsona if u want pms..i cant send you pm by this id..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Res.😊😳😳

**Edited**

Uff Uff Sona!!Tu hum Sab ko blush karake maarna chahti hai kya.😲 ☺️ 😡
Mai ye Especially Pink colour se type kar rahi hu,Bcoz the update was so DAMN HAWTTT☺️It left me all pink and ☺️ ☺️
You know what The First update of this OS is itself so Tempting,Exciting and Beautiful that it made me to start watching the show and Now as You know I'm a MAD Akdha fan.😉 😳 😆Toh Is Paagalpan ke liye tu hi jimmedar hai and teri Superb Writings.😡 😡 😆Though I started watching bcoz of Rajat Tokas Magical Presence being his fan but Tera ye OS bahut bada reason tha which got me so excited to watch the show.😉 😳 😆
And Coming to this Part,I just want to come and kiss your hands for such a Beautiful piece!❤️LOL I mean it really!😳The passion betwn them and The magic of your Beautiful words is enough to make My Mobile Screen Burn.☺️ ☺️ 😳
I could imagine Jalal and Jodha infront of My eyes clearly just like watching the show and then All these scenes happening in front of My eyes.😳 ☺️ 😆
I mean,I was imagining Our Rajat aka Jalal speaking all those words in Jodha's ears that How He,for whom Mohabbat was just a Mere word,How she came into his life and became his Mohabbat,His life...😳You wrote the dialogues so Beautifully and They made much higher and realistic impact coz of being in Hindi!!And Then When She accepted her love,that was Just "WOW"!! 👏 😳 ❤️
And about that last kiss part,It left me all ☺️ ☺️ 😆But Still the delicacy,Beauty and In your words the "Nazakat" in which you wrote the passionate scenes made it all the way more Beautiful rather than making them vulgar.Really Hats Off for Such Wonderful Writing Dear.😃 **Clap-Clap** **Star**
Loved it totally.❤️
Thanks for the PM.😃
Edited by janvie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Updated My comment on the same page.😊😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awww that was sweet
loved it

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