RuNak - SS - Entangled Updated chapter 6- Pg 8 May 20 - Page 10

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Posted: 5 months ago
#91

Originally posted by: Anusha16


Finally read the Chapter....


So it's Ani's truth vs Arshi's Classism huh?? Good on Ani for putting his foot down.


Waise Good on you for Capturing TMW's dynamics and inner thoughts much more strongly than the show. Loved how she was exactly like I predicted her to be.


Interesting that the Shyam Da here shares a much different equation with Ani than in the show. Wonder what you are planning to do with him?


I also really hope Jhanak's obstinance is cured soon and she accpets her marriage. I don't want to see another Tyaag ka murthi please!smiley19


Please do some Ani and his parents convo yaar. Sorely missing from the show rn.


Nice Chapter.

Thanks Anusha for your feedback.

@green - This was needed for my own sanity. In show whenever I see her hating J like that, I am always confused as why?? reason kya hai.. So I have to give one here... These putting logistic till I am not satisfied, make my story go very slow.


@Blue - not planned much, but there will be some curve to his character.


@Pink - That will be the journey. Ani will be strong though to handle her Na nasmiley36


Parents - will defo will be different than show.


smiley31

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Posted: 5 months ago
#92

Originally posted by: tellyme

Thanks Anusha for your feedback.

@green - This was needed for my own sanity. In show whenever I see her hating J like that, I am always confused as why?? reason kya hai.. So I have to give one here... These putting logistic till I am not satisfied, make my story go very slow.


@Blue - not planned much, but there will be some curve to his character.


@Pink - That will be the journey. Ani will be strong though to handle her Na nasmiley36


Parents - will defo will be different than show.


smiley31


Noice. Jab bhi time ho please do continue. smiley31

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Posted: 5 months ago
#93

so so good. Very captivating writing. I kept going till the last chapter smiley20

Loved chapter 4 especially, with Ani and Jhank's room cleaning scene. Uff 🔥!

I like this Ani you have created. Very clear in his mind and equally rebellious!

Liked, how you have given clarity on Bipasha'a character...

Are you going to dive into Ani and Arshi's relationship dynamics before Jhanak comes into Ani's life?

Keeping wife's name a secret from Arshi, was a nice surprise. Arshi here seems to be as dumb as she is in the show smiley2... cannot put two and two together!


Excited to read the next chapter! Please do tag me when it's up!

Also please use the title you had in mind. Please don't throw it away for my single scenario! Similar titles... how does it matter...

Please keep writing and tell us more and more of this beautiful journey of your version of Runak! smiley27

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Posted: 5 months ago
#94

Originally posted by: vira76

so so good. Very captivating writing. I kept going till the last chapter smiley20

Loved chapter 4 especially, with Ani and Jhank's room cleaning scene. Uff 🔥!

I like this Ani you have created. Very clear in his mind and equally rebellious!

Liked, how you have given clarity on Bipasha'a character...

Are you going to dive into Ani and Arshi's relationship dynamics before Jhanak comes into Ani's life?

Keeping wife's name a secret from Arshi, was a nice surprise. Arshi here seems to be as dumb as she is in the show smiley2... cannot put two and two together!


Excited to read the next chapter! Please do tag me when it's up!

Also please use the title you had in mind. Please don't throw it away for my single scenario! Similar titles... how does it matter...

Please keep writing and tell us more and more of this beautiful journey of your version of Runak! smiley27

Thank-you for your motivating comment.smiley31

I will defo tag you in my updates.smiley1

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Posted: 5 months ago
#95

Thank u so much for tagging me Dear smiley31smiley27

Fabulous OS smiley32 I love it smiley27

Whatever makers doesn't do till the date. U did here smiley27 eagerly waiting for next part smiley42

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Posted: 5 months ago
#96

Originally posted by: 1PariGupta

Thank u so much for tagging me Dear smiley31smiley27

Fabulous OS smiley32 I love it smiley27

Whatever makers doesn't do till the date. U did here smiley27 eagerly waiting for next part smiley42

thank you so much. smiley31
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Posted: 5 months ago
#97

Originally posted by: tellyme

thank you so much. smiley31

U r most welcome Dear smiley31

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Posted: 4 months ago
#98

Originally posted by: Anusha16

when will u post next part

Welcome to the club! I am one too... so may FFs I left incomplete as I was slow smiley37


Hopefully we both finish what we set out to write!smiley42

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