Imaginary story lines...part2

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******ME.WALLIA n....BABE...all came..bck home with new born JASSI...

AMRIT is busy changing JASSI's napp...BABE .....also...sitting beside singing....song....

MR.WALLIA....looking outside through the open window .....rain is coming inside.....but MR.WALLIA...is not noticing anything...

BABE:son wht r u doing cant u see rain is coming inside making evrything wet.....whts wrong son ...r...u...ok...

MR.WALLIA:BABE....by saying this he put his head.....on BABEs shoulder.....n...continue...wht sin i hv done tht i got this punishment my 1 child is not with me.....

BABE:its not ur fault....jo hota he achey ki liye hota hey....

it was u hv been pointed by god to sv the stranger.....

thn the phone rang...

MR.W:hello...

HELLO:its me the .....ur child is ok....my RHEA...means....ur daughter is ok dont worry......

b4 saying anything the phone got cut...

BABE: who?

MR.W:its them ..thy named my daughter RHEA.....SHE IS OK...

BABE:wht will be this 1s name...

MR.W:it will be JASSI..AKA ...JASMEET WALLIA...

BABE: u should go n see hr tomorrow....

MR.W:ya we will be....

night passedaway mr.wallia...was looking at her cute JASSI....n...thinking about RHEA...

AMRIT:up thik to hey...

MR.W: hah...i m alright..

AMRIT: u hvnt sleep??is there any problem...any problem with money...

MR.W:no problem....sleep...

nxt day early morning MR WALLIA went to the hospital...alone...saying to AMRIT tht to collect JASSIs....birth certificate....

MR.W : DR.WHERE is my baccha...n...thm..thy r not on that cabin thy were....

DR.:sorry.....sit down...how is UR WIFE N CHILD..

MR.W: thy r fine!...is my child...ok....

DR.:ya ok...come...

thy went n see RHEA.. n....her new dad....

WITHIN THIS 1 MONTH MR WALLIA n babe visited hospital to see RHEA..

amrit knew thy r going to mandir....

1 month later thy moved to there plc with RHEA...N few days later thy call MR.W tht thy r living for us for RHEA S TREATMENT....

1 month passed...thy got no news from....RHEA....

phone rang.....recieved by amrit..

AMRIT :hello....

HELLO:i m speaking from....hospital...is there MR.WALLIA...

AMRIT:BABE..hospital phone...whts wrong...

b4 saying smthing....MR.WALLIA HOLD the phone...his face turn pale...he drop the receiver...n.....went outside...

AMRIT ,..N BaBE.....dont know wht happened...

After mr.w came bck home amrit asked why there was a call from hspital...

MR.WALLIA:nothing DR. WAS ASKING ABOUT jassi.....

MR.WALLIA...came near BABE....she is no more...babe..

BABE: wht....

MR.W:ya hspital called was frm dr...SAYING rhea operation failed she ...

thy r not coming bck .....

r thy speaking the truth...nxt part few minutes...later.....

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ALICE thumbnail
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.............PART 3........................

Actually RHEA is not dead....her parents who hv adopted her lied to MR.WALLIA...thy hvnt been to US...cause thy dont need to RHEA...was totally alright....

after mr. naths wife caming to know about RHEA....she told...her husband to do this drama...cause...whn AMRIT will know she will smhw smday take her bck...she dont want to lose her....so mr...stranger.....planned this DR. also dont know the real part.....

the story behind the sad part??

22+ yrs later......RHEA......came bck in GULMOHUR.....rhea 's parents dont hv tht much money thy tell about to MR.WALLIA...it was a lie...so

JASSI HV NOW A SISTER.....

both of thm dont know about it...thy hv same nature....

OLD JASSI behaved b4 like this.. now she hv changed.....but her sister need a mind makeover dont u think so..

u hv liked it or not is it borring...or garbage.....do comment...dont say garbage.....if u like it another part will be written....

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Posted: 20 years ago
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nice job.. plz do continue!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: usachick821

nice job.. plz do continue!

--a agree... its really funny...😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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**************************PART-4**************************

1 day RHEA..listened....her past history secretly behind the door while her parents where talking about it at night......thn she entered the room...n....thy got pale....n......

MRS.ADOPTER:RHEA u need smthing u r still awake......

RHEA: wht were u saying was true......

MRS.AD: yes..

RHEA: [shocking] wht....

MR. ADOPTER: COME RHEA i will let u know.......thn he told everything.....sorry 4 my wife i told a big lie.......plz punish me ....

RHEA: no dad i cant punish u ..u hv saved my life...n...u ..n...mom hv loved me all this times....u hvnt let me cry 4 a while....i wont leave u but i need to find thm i need to say thm the truth.....n...i will...come bck i promise....

MR. ad: but beta no....

MRS.AD: LET HER GO LET HER FIND HER ROOTS....

MR.AD:bringing his diary gave RHEA an old address...its there house addrss where thy used to live tht time now i dont know.....let me come with u.....

RHEA: no i will go alone...dont think i m angry with u....i will hv a connection with u.....i will sty there on my friends place....dont worry..

MR AD: i hv a pic of ur family which MR.WALLIA hv given me tht time 4 u..

...........story continue......RHEA moved to the place at her freinds place....here with her friends hhlp RHEA find out about her family...it was not impossible...cause...JASSI...after become JESSICA is popular n hv become newspapers hot hdline 4 many time 4 many reasons .....so...rhea planed..

RHEA dont want to go strght...she 1st want to is there anything she dont know.....thn she decided to become a model in sm add..or...smwhere n she will later enter GULMOHOR.....where she will face her own sis JASSI......

after her ad on a ......well ANGEL CALL HER.....

after hearing tht ANGLE is jassis FIONCES sis she got interested....now hearing ANGLES evil plan RHEA wanted to move with it just to know whts going on...if she say no she loose the oppportunity to enter GULMOHOR n...also wont be able to save her sis.....

according to ANGLES plan RHEA was moving....... now hearing MALLIKAS evil plan RHEA changed her track....now she know who r real devils ....she also misunderstood RMAN on the bus seeing with the model...but she dont hv this plan but hearing MAALIKAS plan....she make her involved....she su a case against RMAN..now MALLIKA....ANGLE..will be exposed........

later RHEA open the envelope of truth infront of everyone.....now MALLIKA...n.....angle IS exposed.....after sm misunderstanding RMAN...n... JASSI is together again.......to drm birds.....

RHEA ...n...CJ hv a connection......RHEA ctually 1st work 4 CJ in a add ....thn CJ proposed her to go inside GULMOHOR to get information.....about JASSIS enemy cause 4 PURABS word he wants to hlp her frm bck....n...secretely....he dont want her to know about it......he hv lied to RHEA...afcorse he would RHEA is only his employee....he is not tht stupid.....he has his own way....stile....later frm behind he will take revenge on JASSI...

RHEA got united with her own family.....but she leave cause she dont want to hurt thm who were her parents all this days.....

so MR.WALLIA family didnt stop her..n.....told her to shift here with thm...RHEA promised sooner she will....

b4 her leaving JASSI ...N.... RMAN gave her a farewell....where MR. RAJ met her he liked her alot.....4 her clever steps to save...JASSI-RMANS life....is it a likeness or not MR.RAJ still dont know.....cause JASSI is still in his soul....but he really hv liked her.....n...RHEA too.....RHEA...N....RAJ planned to do a business together.....so RHEA WILL COME BCK....

now guys.....wOULD u want to hv RHEA--RAJ ... pair.....like ARMAAN--JASSI pair....?? let me know.....

I hope i hvnt bore u....if u want there will a continue part.....

now bye i hv to clean my room....

sorry **T....n....D**.......IF in my story if there is any .....resemble....with u r story track....i hv taken the idea of RHEA ....suzzesh part of harasement case......only....i think so...

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Posted: 20 years ago
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no u dont bore.. Plz continue

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