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Poornima

@NimJ

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Mayu🤗

Thank you for this cute,beautiful happy happy os.Loved it.And I am really sorry that you felt bad reading our comments in your previous os.It just makes me realise how much we are
emotionally connected to ViTharv.

And this os is just ❤️...I am happy that one by one all my wishes coming true.Here it was them dancing in the rain and Vividha in Atharv's clothes.He he...The best part of being a writer na.Writing down what we want to see onscreen.Hopefully they show ViTharv having their 'happily ever after' in the show.

I would never getting tired of writing about Atharv and his love.This is why I laugh when people write Atharv will feel jealous seeing V-R together.There is not another jodi,that I know of,who share the same understanding as ViTharv...Vividha will never have to explain herself to Atharv,...That's the ViTharv we know of.And that's what you wrote too.I hope all this occurs soon in the show,but the cvs😆

ViTharv's life together is a beautiful dream .And Thank you again for showing them living the dream by your os

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Awesome writing
Great as always
Thanks so much!

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: NimJ
Mayu🤗

Thank you for this cute,beautiful happy happy os.Loved it.And I am really sorry that you felt bad reading our comments in your previous os.It just makes me realise how much we are
emotionally connected to ViTharv.

And this os is just ❤️...I am happy that one by one all my wishes coming true.Here it was them dancing in the rain and Vividha in Atharv's clothes.He he...The best part of being a writer na.Writing down what we want to see onscreen.Hopefully they show ViTharv having their 'happily ever after' in the show.

I would never getting tired of writing about Atharv and his love.This is why I laugh when people write Atharv will feel jealous seeing V-R together.There is not another jodi,that I know of,who share the same understanding as ViTharv...Vividha will never have to explain herself to Atharv,...That's the ViTharv we know of.And that's what you wrote too.I hope all this occurs soon in the show,but the cvs😆

ViTharv's life together is a beautiful dream .And Thank you again for showing them living the dream by your os

Nims baby🤗

Thankyou so much! 😳

Yes, I was really sad that you people gave such comments. But then even I realised that we guys are emotionally invested in the show. I just wanted to depict the strong Atharv and Vividha. 😳

That's the best part about writing the OS. I can easily pen down scenes I want to see. It was my ultimate wish to see them dancing in rains and Vividha in his white kurta☺️

Knowing Atharv and the understanding these two share, but Vividha is a girl who slips in guilty mode very soon. She needed that assurance from the man himself, for who she sacrificed her own soul. I go crazy thinking about what others say and how they don't see this soulful relationship. Certainly must be blind. Khair😆

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky
Awesome writing
Great as always
Thanks so much!

Thankyou so much Pinky🤗

Love,

Mayu

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kelly

@Africanqueenkel

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Mayu great story , just one thing show don't tell...

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Africanqueenkel
Mayu great story , just one thing show don't tell...

Thankyou Kells🤗

I know right?😳

Hopefully we will get what we deserve")

Love,

Mayu

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Nira Mukherjee

@M_Nira

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Mayu, my dearie... I can't tell you how much I loved this OS. You are an excessively brilliant writer and this OS just proved that once again. You have portrayed everything, every emotion with perfection- their hug, kiss, passion, intimacy, love.

I seriously want my Ajmer days back, Cvs needs to shift ViTharv and Sujata to Ajmer once he gets his memory back. This White kurta scene was beautiful. I really, really want to watch this scene on-screen--- ShiVik will burn the tv screen I can bet on that.

Another lovely scene was their conversation. I loved the way Atharv said that nothing was her fault and whatever she had done was just a "Sauda" nothing else. I hope phase 2 ends with her divorce, it's high time now.

Family planning...the thought reminded me of Ang Laga De and I desperately want a Ang Laga De part 2.

Beautiful OS Mayu as usual. I loved it, I enjoyed it. Thank you, thank you so much for writing this... ❤️

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

omg that was such a beautiful os...with no drama and more of Vitharv romance...they have truly crossed all hurdles in their relationship and feel sooo comfortable that they can change in front of each other...this shows the deep bond between the 2 where it does not have to be physical attraction all the time...love this one to d core dear...superbly written...

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: baubles
Mayu🤗 So sorry for the delay..my maasi had been here so I've literally been spending the all my time with her, so couldn't get my hands on the laptop much.

Beautiful OS as always dearie...and this one is probably my favourite of them all. I say this for almost every OS, but can I just watch this play out on screen? ShiVik will set the screen on fire!

Once again I'm in awe of how well you describe their love, in the simplest of words and actions. A love filled hug, a kiss, the desire, passion, the intimacy..it's all so real. There is no room for awkwardness or hesitation..the comfort level they share is endearing.
The white Kurta scene is something I would love to watch on Vitharv...I've watched it in so many shows, but I bet Vitharv would make it ten times hotter.

I loved how Atharv reassured her that she had done no wrong and nothing was her fault. It was the circumstances that weren't in their favour. The divorce has to come through in the show as well now, just like it did here...she's so tied up cos of this on the show.

Loved the family planning part..chalo, there was something their thoughts matched on😆 Would be nice if they got started on the process too.

Felt so good to read such a happy OS, filled with love! Thankyou so much for writing such a beauty!

Soumya🤗

Thankyou so much honey😳

Awww<3, This time I will forgive you commenting late. 😳 Hope you had fun with your Maasi❤️

I love writing stories and thankyou for the kind words. The white kurta scene they better show, it will be SENSUOUS!☺️

Yes, its high time they show the divorce and ViTharv Reunion!😳 I am hoping that Atharv will help her overcome her guilt. He will help her deal with all that she was put through. He will never leave her side, take revenge from all those who put his two women in pain. I need Atharv Sujata now!😳

I had to pen down a happy OS since I am ViTharv deprived. Had to cheer up the fandom!❤️

Love,

Mayu

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Ultimatevikku7
Wow ! Mayu...I wish that it never ends...
You keep writing...😳 I wish that this scene comes soon...waiting for watching this...😳
Ravish and vividha's divorce and atharv & vv living happily ever after...
Jaise fairy tales mein hote hai...😊

Zuhu🤗

Thankyou so much😳

I shall forever keep writing:)

I am hoping we get that Fairy tale ending! It will bring me immense happiness!❤️

Love,

Mayu