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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey I am back with another OS on ViTharv!❤️

This scene is out of the context. This is a scene I so want to see, but I guess we are not getting it, so I decided to give a vivid account of the scene!😳

The premise is that after clearing all the mess, putting Kailash Kashyap and Ankit behind bars for the crimes they committed, things had come back to normal. Sujata had wholeheartedly accepted Vividha back, these two were engaged and were getting married in a few weeks. Atharv's factory was now coming back to normal, his lost glory slowly re surfing and the two most precious women were by his side.😳

ViTharv OS- The Date!

Vividha and Atharv returned late from their date. It had been their frequent routine now. They had spent so much time apart from each other and they had faced enough hurdles in their life. But they had crushed all odds destiny threw at them. They had fought their destiny, they had fought the society. There love emerging stronger than ever. Their love stood tall against all odds, their love witnessed every possible obstacle yet it came out strong, winning with flying colours.


They had enough for the day. They had enjoyed a nice dinner, they even danced in the rains. When they came back home, it was pretty late. Vividha wanted to go back home. But as she was leaving, Atharv grabbed her hand pulled her closer. She landed with a thud on his chest.

Atharv: "I love you..."

He then passionately kissed her. They parted to breathe. It had been the most simplest of confession from the man himself. Earlier he had the fear of losing his most prized possession, his love, his Vividha. Today he had conquered his fear, he had nothing to lose. She was all his and he was sure of this! His mind had played its games, but not anymore. His heart and soul knew, she was his for eternity. Nothing could change this very fact.

She was in awe of what she had heard. There was a time, when she had begged him to say these very words. He had regretted it later, fearing that destiny would play the same game it played with his mother. He had come a long way since then. She smiled remembering her confession, it was beautiful and the kiss, the most passionate. There were few words spoken, but both knew the gravity of the love! The despair in her voice, the longing in that kiss and the yearning to be with him. She loved him heart, body and soul!

Vividha: "Ab ghar chalein?...Bahut bheeg gaye ho tum...jaldi jao aur change karlo..."

Atharv: "Aap bhi change kar lena..."

She nodded while she was walking towards her home. He held her hand again.

Atharv: "Aapka ghar yahaan hai..." he said pointing to his house.

Vividha: "Haan...lekin shaadi ke baad na...abhi to I am single..."

Atharv: "Haan...lekin ab sab lights bhi band hai...sab so gaye honge...aap chaliye mere saath..."

She smiled seeing his concern not only for herself, but for her family too. She gently clasped his hand and went to his room.

Atharv: "Ye lijiye..." he said handing over a towel to her.

Vividha: "Atharv, thankyou...par mujhe kapde chahiye..."

Atharv: "Ye chalega..." he said holding a pair of his baggy tracks and his signature white kurta.

Vividha: "Hmmm...par kuch jyaada lamba nai hoga..."

He chuckled at her innocence.

Atharv: "Aap change kar lijiye...main bahar jaake change kar loonga..."

Vividha held his hands.

Vividha: "Uski koi zaroorat nahi hai...bahar bahut thand bhi hai...mujhe koi problem nai hai tumhaare saamne change karne main..."

As he changed in his vest and his favourite black tracks, he helped her change. They had come so far in their relation, there was no room for awkwardness, no room for uncomfort, no room for misunderstanding and no room for societal norms.

Vividha stood next to the window, enjoying the rains pouring down in the backyard. She remembered how they had been brutally separated. How they found their way back to each other. The cool breeze made her shudder, and enjoy the breeze too at the same time. Atharv witnessed his beauty in white. He gently wrapped a shawl around her shoulders. He pulled her in an embrace.

Atharv: "Kya soch rahi hai...mere baare main..."

Vividha: "Nahi...kya tum mujhe kabhi bhi maaf kar paoge?"

Atharv: "Maafi...kis baat ke liye..."

Vividha: "Maine tumse kiya huya vaada toda..."

Atharv: "Nahi...aapne koi vaada nahi toda...balki aapne saare vaade nibhaaye hai..."

Vividha: "Nahi Atharv...maine tumse vaada kiya tha...main shaadi kisi aur se nai karoongi..."

Atharv: "Wo shaadi nai thi...sauda tha...mere jaan ka...aapne sirf meri jaan bachane ke liye...apni zindagi daav pe laga di..."

Vividha: "Haan...lekin vaada to toda na maine..." she said now sobbing. Atharv gently shushed her and slowly kissed her forehead.

Atharv: "Aapne koi vaada na toda hai. Aap meri shakti bani jab main gira huya tha...aapko guilty feel karne ki koi zaroorat nai..."

Vividha: "Par..."

Atharv: "Sshhh..."

He very tenderly cupped her face, and wiped tears which were trickling down her cheeks.

Atharv: "Aapne yeh sab kyun kiya jaanta hoon main... aaj aapka aur Ravish ka divorce bhi ho gaya hai...ab sab theek ho gaya hai"

Vividha smiled whole heartedly. She slowly raised herself upto his level, and took his lips in a passionate kiss; slowly easing them open as they both drowned themselves in each other, their tongues fiercely battling, their love shining through. They parted to breathe, staying in the embrace feeling the emotions running high in both of their hearts.

Vividha: "Sahi kaha tumne Atharv...sab theek ho gaya hai...kuch nai badla hai...na hamara pyaar, na hamara saath aur nahi hamari kismet..."

Atharv: "Waise family planning karni hai ki nai..." he said.

Vividha: "Haan...mujhe bas ek cute si baby girl chahiye..."

Atharv: "Beta nai..."

Vividha: "Nahi...main jaanti hoon I want a baby girl..."

Atharv: "Koi to ek baat hai...we think alike..."

Vividha: "Hmmm..."

Atharv: "To shuruat kare..."

Vividha: "Bade besharam ho..."

Atharv: "Haan...lekin sirf aapka..."

Vividha smiled at his innocence and at his naughtiness. This is what made her fall in love with this very man. If she would say she is uncomfortable with something; he would never go against her wishes. He had vowed to protect her, honor her and cherish her, in sickness and health. In the good, bad and the ugly, in the highs and lows of their respective lives.

Vividha: "Tum jaante ho...jab tum mentally instable the...tabhi tum mujhe hamesha special feel karvaate the...tumne mujhe tumhaari favorite doll kaha tha..."

Atharv: "Mujhe kuch yaad nahi...aapko doll..."

Vividha: "Tumhe kuch yaad nahi...tumhe uss halat main dekh ke roz thoda thoda marti thi...roz thodi thodi tadapti thi...roz thodi thodi toot thi..."

Atharv: "Jaanta hoon...mujhe kuch yaad to nai aa raha...par agar main takleef main hoon...to aap tadapti hain..."

Vividha: "Atharv...baarish ruk rahi hai...chalo na wapas ice gola khake aate hai...dekho meri jeebh ka rang abhi bhi multicolored hai..." she said sticking out her tongue.

Atharv: "Haan...par meri green hai..."

They both smiled in union.

Atharv: "Kaafi late ho gaya hai...chaliye..."

Vividha: "Atharv...please"

Atharv: "Nahi..."

She mocked him and was angry. He exactly knew how to calm down his woman! He gently tucked a lone strand of hair that was falling on her face and hugged her tight. How could she still be angry on this very man she loved heart, body and soul. He shifted her hair to one side of the neck, and pecked her nape. He broke the hug to see her smiling.

Vividha pulled him closer, not leaving even space for air to pass in between them. She kissed his eyes, kissed his eyes, kissed his cheeks, kissed his neck, and his she kissed his chest too. She enjoyed seeing him like this; her touch affected him as much as his touch affected him. He was anticipating another move from her side, but she stepped back to take a good look at him, his excitement, his longing and his desire.

He opened his eyes to see her staring at him. He grabbed her and hugged her. They stayed there, in complete silence; she rested her head against his chest, listening to their hearts beat in rhythm with each other. He could clearly hear her heart racing, her beats getting faster, all he did was crush her against his chest, tighten his grip around her waist, and stood still until, her heart was back to normal. She slowly raised her head from his chest while they stood there, their eyes speaking. Speaking a thousand unsaid words, a thousand unsaid feelings she spoke first.

Vividha: "Atharv sab theek ho ga na..."

Atharv: "Haan, iss baar sab theek honewala hai..."

As they kept looking at the resumed rains, making plans for the future, destiny adored its two beautiful children. Atharv and Vividha were together finally! They both had finally found peace with each other!

The End!


I hope I have lived upto the expectations of ViTharv fans!😳


Positive criticism welcome!❤️



Love,

Mayu

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prabharajani thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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mayu beautiful OS

kaash yeh pal, yeh ehsaas kabhi khtatam na ho

i wish this love and write up goes on, i read to many times from yesterday to today so many times

beautiful are their kisses, lovely is the camaraderie they share with each other

atharv and vividhas love story is eternal and magical

vitharv kisses are best,imagining vividha in atharvs kurta is most enticing, vividha kissing atharv on his eyes, nose, neck muaaa reminds me of ang laga de

hope they make anglagade part 2

thks mayu for giving us such lovely moments

love u and hugs for u🤗🤗
Edited by prabharajani - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu🤗 So sorry for the delay..my maasi had been here so I've literally been spending the all my time with her, so couldn't get my hands on the laptop much.

Beautiful OS as always dearie...and this one is probably my favourite of them all. I say this for almost every OS, but can I just watch this play out on screen? ShiVik will set the screen on fire!

Once again I'm in awe of how well you describe their love, in the simplest of words and actions. A love filled hug, a kiss, the desire, passion, the intimacy..it's all so real. There is no room for awkwardness or hesitation..the comfort level they share is endearing.
The white Kurta scene is something I would love to watch on Vitharv...I've watched it in so many shows, but I bet Vitharv would make it ten times hotter.

I loved how Atharv reassured her that she had done no wrong and nothing was her fault. It was the circumstances that weren't in their favour. The divorce has to come through in the show as well now, just like it did here...she's so tied up cos of this on the show.

Loved the family planning part..chalo, there was something their thoughts matched on😆 Would be nice if they got started on the process too.

Felt so good to read such a happy OS, filled with love! Thankyou so much for writing such a beauty!

Edited by baubles - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mayu 🤗
Just loved the OS, Vitharv are so ❤️

I just love the scenes too where Vividha reacts to his touch n feel and he stares her.

Balcony scene he did when he asked for a kiss, he was just enjoying her nervousness and his affect on her. He did the same in library too.

Your white kurta sequence reminded me of Maaneet's Roop tera mastana sequence and that was still booming romance but this one is a calm one already soulmates.

I so wish they show us some sequences like this after Vitharv reunion as we have to go a long way to go...

waiting for another one from you
Edited by Shweta13 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow ! Mayu...I wish that it never ends...
You keep writing...😳 I wish that this scene comes soon...waiting for watching this...😳
Ravish and vividha's divorce and atharv & vv living happily ever after...
Jaise fairy tales mein hote hai...😊
Edited by Ultimatevikku7 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry Mayu for replying you late.
Mayu once again lovely OS & you have written it very beautifully. 🤗
Well i wish this could be happens soon. Vitharav are magical couple but here you created magic with your writings.👏

The way Vividha kisses Atharav chest, forehead, lips,& neck & hugs him, it's reminds me of ang laga dena sequence.

The trust they share no one can share. When Atharav helps Vividha for changing her clothes & makes her wears his long white Kurta & his baggy tracks reminds me of song Roop Tera mastana. And you depicted it so well. Its found too hot

Now phase 3 is approaching sooner I want Ravish & Vividha divorce, KK & Ankit should be puts behind bars & ViTharav reunion.

Keep continues with your writings. I loved it ❤️



Edited by harmanjot - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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If i can i love to frame this OS and keep it with me for my whole life.Love it
I dont have words to describe the beauty of this OS loved it to the core.
Happy Vitharv.Keep rocking mayu.
I wish i can read your OS daily but i know its not possible.Will Eagerly wating for your new OS
I hope u will come with next dhamkedar OS soon.👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: prabharajani

mayu beautiful OS


kaash yeh pal, yeh ehsaas kabhi khtatam na ho

i wish this love and write up goes on, i read to many times from yesterday to today so many times

beautiful are their kisses, lovely is the camaraderie they share with each other

atharv and vividhas love story is eternal and magical

vitharv kisses are best,imagining vividha in atharvs kurta is most enticing, vividha kissing atharv on his eyes, nose, neck muaaa reminds me of ang laga de

hope they make anglagade part 2

thks mayu for giving us such lovely moments

love u and hugs for u🤗🤗


Prabha Di🤗

Thankyou so much😳

I was mesmerised just by thinking about this, I had to pen it down. 😳 Yes, I can just imagine Vividha in white kurta, their talks and their romance is out of the world. Its an expression of love, why don't some people understand it? Its very natural to share intimacy with your partner❤️

You also read it many times na? I knew it, their kisses and hugs just come natural to them. All you can do is get carried away in their land!☺️

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shweta13

Mayu 🤗

Just loved the OS, Vitharv are so ❤️

I just love the scenes too where Vividha reacts to his touch n feel and he stares her.

Balcony scene he did when he asked for a kiss, he was just enjoying her nervousness and his affect on her. He did the same in library too.

Your white kurta sequence reminded me of Maaneet's Roop tera mastana sequence and that was still booming romance but this one is a calm one already soulmates.

I so wish they show us some sequences like this after Vitharv reunion as we have to go a long way to go...

waiting for another one from you


Shweta🤗

Thankyou so much😳

That's the best part. They react to each other's touch~ That's just beautiful!❤️

Both love teasing each other, now don't they? These two give you legit feels☺️

Yes, after I penned that down, it took me back to Geet wearing the kurta, two times.😳 Phangirl mode activated")

I have many sequences in my mind, but only if CV's are so grateful to us ViTharv fans😆

Maybe I'll be back with a new one in New Year break. Now busy. 😳

Love,
Mayu


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: saharsonu

If i can i love to frame this OS and keep it with me for my whole life.Love it

I dont have words to describe the beauty of this OS loved it to the core.
Happy Vitharv.Keep rocking mayu.
I wish i can read your OS daily but i know its not possible.Will Eagerly wating for your new OS
I hope u will come with next dhamkedar OS soon.👏


Sonu🤗

Thankyou so much😳

Do frame in a rosewood frame. 😆

We are so ViTharv deprived it shows when you want to read an OS daily😭 But yeah it's not possible

New OS will come around in New Year break. Right now I am busy.

Love,
Mayu

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