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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: roshni_12



Yayyy !!!! Well i'm quite sad to wait 2 weeks but i know it'll be worth it lol and thanks for updating so soon beintehaan chejuuu !! Will be waiting😉😳


You're welcome!! No bother 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its so gud and gripping... exactly how we all feel abt them... come on with the next update dear... thanks for this...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babithaj

Its so gud and gripping... exactly how we all feel abt them... come on with the next update dear... thanks for this...


Thank you! Really glad you liked it 😛 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshni_12


Yayyy !!!! Well i'm quite sad to wait 2 weeks but i know it'll be worth it lol and thanks for updating so soon beintehaan chejuuu !! Will be waiting 😉😳

Actually you choose! NiVi TS update first or Beintehaan?? 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: ChejuuSidNi

Actually you choose! NiVi TS update first or Beintehaan?? 😛

YAYYY MY CHEJUUU IS BACK !! 🤗 well I really wanna know what happens next in beintehaa 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshni_12

YAYYY MY CHEJUUU IS BACK !! 🤗 well I really wanna know what happens next in beintehaa 😳

Yeah your Chejuuu is back😆cuties alright I wil try to update beintehaan as soon as possibe😉now are you happy? 😆 by the way are you on twitter or anything??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is so good!!!loved it❤️👏 How do you manage to write so well??? loved it and love you loads!!!!!👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChejuuSidNi

Yeah your Chejuuu is back😆cuties alright I wil try to update beintehaan as soon as possibe😉now are you happy? 😆 by the way are you on twitter or anything??

Yess of course i'm happy 😆 😳nope i'm nowhere yet lol but was thinking of making an account on twitter 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
First of all I dedicate this last part to Summayya 😛 she made me get ideas so love you! ❤️🤗
Part 2:

Nia got up quickly and got ready.

She was wearing a beautiful black dress.

Ravi kept on knocking on the door thinking that Nia was already gone.

He was about to go when Nia suddenly opened the door.

"Sorry yaar, actually I overslept my bad",Nia blurted out.

Ravi smiled at her. He was admiring her dress.

"Am I looking good?", she asked.

"Never looked better"

Nia smiled.

"Oh actually just wait a second. I need to zip my dress.", she was finding it difficult to zip her dress.

Ravi saw this and turned her around. He zipped her dress leaving Nia with a smile.

"Black suits you",Nia said.

"Thanks",Ravi was happy. It was the first time he heard her complimenting him.

They then walked to the car and got in.

On the way Ravi put his hand on her hand.

They looked at each other and smiled.

At the party

The music was on. Ravi put his hands out to Nia for a dance.

They started dancing on the song.

After the dance everyone started clapping for Ravi.

"Lets watch the trailer of Ravi's new film", one of the men said.

The video started playing.

In the video they showed Ravi close to a girl. Nia saw this and felt pain. She didn't realise what the feeling was. But as she continued watching she got angrier.

Ravi was smiling at the trailer. He took a glance at Nias expressions and saw her angry.

He put his hand on her shoulder.

"All okay?", he said softly.

"Yeah", she said with a bit of hesitation.

Everyone was celebrating but something was annoying NiVi.

Nia went out on the terrace and sipped her glass of wine.

Ravi came over to her.

Nia saw him and walked away.

"Arre whats wrong with her?", he asked himself.

Nia continued drinking until it was time to go home.

She was drunk and Ravi got worried about her.

She could barely walk.

"You're coming with me", Ravi said as he took her in his arms and placed her in the car.

"You know Ravi I have always admired your acting", Nia complimented him. She was in a drunken state.

"Thanks"

"Not just that. The thing is you are not that bad. Your always talking there and there but why you never talk about me", Nia said while pouting.

Ravi looked at her admiringly.

Ravi continued looking at her when suddenly boom!!!

There was a car crash. Nia was injured on her forehead and so was Ravi.

Nia became unconscious and Ravi carried her out of the car and put her into the ambulance.

Next morning:

Nia was lying on her hospital bend with a plaster on her forehead. It was a deep injury.

Ravi came in. He had a bandage on his leg but he managed to walk.

He came to sit down beside her. Just then Nia started to get up.

Ravi holded her hand and made her sit down beside him.

"Are you ignoring me?", Ravi asked.

Nia didn't answer.

"Dekho since yesterday I have been noticing you are angry at me"

"Am not angry at you", Nia gave a firm answer.

"Then what? You just like to make angry faces when you are bored?", Ravi was being sarcastic.

"Just tell me, do you have a problem with me", Ravi wanted to know.

"Yes I do have one!", she started sobbing.

Then she said "why do you have to act with other girls? Why hug them so tight? You never hugged me so tight before when we were shooting", Nia blurted out.

Ravi was shocked. Then he started laughing.

"Itni si baat? Meri bachi",Ravi said.

"Its ok I will give you a hug now", Ravi said playfully.

"I don't need your hug",Nia made an angry face.

"Arre why do you not understand? You are special to me..I even forced myself to walk here just to see if you were ok. But you don't understand again yaar. Ki I love you", Ravi said softly. He whispered "I love you"

Nia looked at him and then looked at his leg. It was bandaged. Nia just realised what Ravi did for her.

"I love you too", Nia said in a quiet voice.

Ravi hugged her and kissed her forehead while Nia said "I love you my duplicate Siddarth"

"Duplicate Siddarth?"

"Because you are exactly like Siddarth", she chuckled.

Ravi gave her a smile and then they kissed.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
First of all thank you for dedicating it to me, you are very welcome love you too 🤗❤️

Cheju this is so cute ❤️ I was smiling all along, it is written beautifully and described 👏
I was smiling all along as all the flashbacks were coming right before me remembering it, those moments are really special if you know what i mean 😉😉 and sidni also made it special so Thank you cheju

Love 👏⭐️❤️

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