SidNi TS : Tumhare Ishq Se Bani Hoon Mein updated part 1 pg 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: skinnypal

Wow you are writing in the current storyline! That's awesome! Excited to read Abi.. after a long time something from you 😳 Please update this soon and not like your FF 😛



haan Pal😛 thank u😃
not like my FF😆😆 OK👍🏼😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NiaDiva

super excited to read



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhuharini


np prathe.. take ur time ya😊

unresses pg 3😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 1:

She can't believe her own eyes... "Is this you?" she said slowly while tears brimming in her eyes. Her heart beats raced and without wasting the time anymore, she ran directly towards his place. She circled her arms around his neck and hugged him tightly. "Why u left me Siddharth?" she sniffled resting her head on his shoulders... "You should not leave me again... I won't allow you and I can't..." she cried again pulling him more that clearly shows to anyone that how much she missed him and craving for his love.


"arey arey madamji... aap galath soch rahoon. Mein aapki Siddharth nahi. Mein hoon Bajrangbali ka maha bhakth Raghu" he spoke in a totally weird slang.

She parted away from him immediately and looked at his face keenly...

"Raghu??" said she gave him a questioning look.

"haan ji, mein Raghu. Aap kaun chahiye?" he said raising his eyebrows.

She wiped her tears, "NO... U r lying to me. These eyes are my Siddharth's. I can't be wrong" she said confidently looking at his eyes.

"Acha? Ye mera apne aankon ji" he said touching his eyes protectively.

"Siddharth... mein tumhari Roshni. You can't forget me ever" she raised her voice clutching his collar with teary eyes.


"yeh kya badtameez hai? Proof hai aapki paas?" he said giving her a worst look.


"Haan haan... proof hai meri paas. Ek minute ruko please... math jao" she said and ran to pick her mobile from steps crazily.


She took her mobile and ran to the spot back like a mad, but didn't found him there... She started searching for him... She was running here and there to find him but still she couldn't.

When she turned left, she saw him leaving the temple... She rushed to him shouting "Siddharth... Siddharth plz stop" she stood before him breathing heavily holding her stomach.

"Please don't go... I brought u proof" she whimpered.

She showed her mobile and the pics she took with him... their Karvachauth pics, their wedding pics and so on...

"See this... You are my Siddharth only, don't ignore me please" she begged holding his palms.

He snatched his hands from her clutch angrily, "Arey mein bar bar kehrihoon na, mein Raghu, sirf Raghu hoon. Aap chalo yahan se" he burst and went to start his bike.

"Why Siddharth behaving like this? He don't like me or he don't remember me? No... he is acting I think... let's check" she wiped her tears and went to her car. She started following him secretly...

She stopped her car and walked following him to the place where he reached... she saw him went inside a hut and closed the door. She went there and stood outside thinking what to do next. She opened the window of the house and saw him resting on his cot. He noted her presence and came outside... He pulled her hands and pinned her on the wall, "How many times I can say I am not ur Siddharth but how dare u followed to my home itself? Mein tume chodungi nahi" he spoke angrily and clutched her hands more tightly till she winced in pain & took her inside.

"yahi dekho... ye mera maa baap. I am not married and I never seen u. We are living in this chawl since 6 to 7 years and donno my worst fate, we clashed today" he burst in anger showing their pic hanging on the wall.

She closed her eyes letting out the tears saying "I am sorry I am sorry leave me please..."

Seeing her tears, He left her hands harshly... She ran out of his house hurriedly wiping her tears.

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She sat near the wall of her room and took the frame of his pic in her hand... "Siddharth, wo tum nahi?? I thought it was you and I hugged him also... I am sorry" she kissed the pic worriedly and kept it very close to her heart.

"what should I do now? How can I solve all these problems Siddarth? Everytime you would help me na, help me this time also" she mumbled unconsciously closing her eyes and thinking the incidents that happened today...

She opened her eyes suddenly as if she got some solution... She kept on thinking whether her idea will work out for the whole night and slept on the floor itself unknowingly.

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Next day, She went to Raghu's home straightly and knocked his door...

He opened it and showed an annoyed face seeing her, "Aap phir se ayi, mujhe waat lagane ke liye?"

"No... No Raghu. I understood well that u r not my Siddharth. But..." she said to him, though she was not sure about his identity completely.

"But watt kya ji??" he said displeasedly.

"I want to talk u something and make u understand my situation" saying this, she clearly explained the happenings in her life from their marriage and then later how Shabnam killed him and trapped her family.

"ji... itna kuch chaltha hai app aur aapki pathi ke sath? Bahut bahut galath hai ji... Ab mein kya kar sakthi hoon in sab ke beech mein?" he asked rubbing his forehead.

"wo... aap... app mere liye... wo..." she felt very awkward to say.

"ji... bolo bolo dar kyun?"

"can u come to my home as Siddharth?" she asked finally

"che... ye aap kya bathein kar rahi hoon?" he said angrily

"Plz don't ignore... I am asking you to act like him for just few days... very few days till I get my mom released from jail... plz" she begged him.

"kamaal hai aap!!! How can anyone refuse to act as a husband of some beautiful girl? Par ji, mein hoon hanuman bhakth and how can I stay with some other woman?" he said.

Tears rolled down her cheeks... "Mera pathi sirf Siddharth aur koi nahi... Even if u wish, I won't allow you to stay with me. I am just asking u a favour. After ur work done, you can go anywhere" she said.

"teek hai... lekin mujhe paise chaiye ye kaam karne ke liye" he said with a wink.

She nodded her head plainly as if she agreed and shared her plans to him before leaving the place.

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In Patels Home...

It was nearly 7 PM when he reached the Patels Home.

"Kya bath hai?? Koi nahi ghar ki andhar?" he shouted clapping his hands.

Roshni brought Nani outside pulling her wheel chair silently expecting he'll work out her plan. Kesar, Mona also came to the hall...

"Who gave u so much power to shout in the home, and tht too when I am resting inside?" shouted Shabnam and getting down the stairs slowly...

Now all are seeing him standing before them, but he is faced back...

"Can't u hear? Kaun ho tum?" asked Shabnam.

"Ji mein hoon!!!" he turned showing his face leaving everyone stunned.

"Tum... tum..." blabbered a shocked and stunned Witch lady Shabnam.

"ye kya tum tum... mein hoon Raghu" he said funnily looking at a shocked Roshni.

"What he is doing? I asked him to come here as Siddharth & help me to get my mom out, But..." thought a shocked Roshni.

"Raghu?? Ye kya naya drama?" asked Shabnam.

"Kaun sa Raghu ye, DD ki Aashirvad se?" blinked Kesar chachu and Nani went shocked as well as surprised seeing him.

"Haan ji. I am Raghu working as a mechanic in nearby place" he said. Roshni looked at him and shot angry glares as he is spoiling her plan totally.

"No... You are the damn Siddharth Khurana, us ladki ka pathi" shouted Shabnam.

"areyy... ji? Aapko us ladka.., kya naam hai uska? Haan... Siddharth!!! You don't like him right?" he asked.

"What is the purpose of acting like someother?" she angrily.

"Why should I act? Is this my home or my family? This girl planned something evil against someone called Shabnam and I came here to save her" he said seriously. And U can check my license proof, passport, Aadhar card and... dekho dekho meri school TC be hai meri pass" he said funnily showing a file to Shabnam.

She got it from him and checked them having all details clearly to prove he is not Siddharth Khurana.

"But we never seen u before? U residing in Mumbai?" asked Mona.

"Nahi ji... we were in Thane till last few years and now settled in Mumbai after my father's death" he said.

Everyone including Roshni now completely trusted him as he is Raghu and not Siddharth.

"Is ghar mein kaun Shabnam?" he asked.

"mein... mein hoon Shabnam Shiv Patel" she replied bravely after all her doubts got cleared.

"wah!!! Kya mast item hai re!!! I thought before itself u were Shabnam. Itna garmi, itna sexy... sirf aise ladkiyon ke sath hoga bahut buriya Dushmani is duniyan se" he said winking at Shabnam.

"How can I believe you?" asked Shabnam.

"Ji, I have evidence" he said and showed his mobile...

It showed the video clipping what Roshni talked to him, asked him to act as her husband to release her mom from jail and her every plan what she shared with him...

Everyone saw the video and went shocked...

Roshni also went shocked as he totally revealed all her plans to Shabnam... Her only hope... the last hope she had also went spoilt becoz of him. She got panic seeing Shabnam coming close to her but didn't showed it in her face and stood silently.

"How dare u Roshni? U dared to plan against me?" shouted Shabnam and held Roshni's hair.

She winced in pain... "AAHH... chodo mujhe" she cried. Seeing all this, tears flowing frm Nani's eyes... "Shabnam... wo bachi hai. Chodo usko" said Kesar.

"Ye lo aapka bachi" said this she pushed Roshni harshly towards him. Before she fell down on the floor, Raghu caught and stopped her from falling...

"Dekho madamji... I said you before I am not ur husband Siddharth but u didn't trust me. Moreover, u planned bad against some lady and I can't see that too... Mistake is all urs" he said making her stand properly.

She wiped her tears and angrily removed his hand from her shoulders... "You can never be my husband" she burst and left the place angrily.

"Only gud things happens with gud people... U planned evil & now u get caught. Thank U Raghu" smirked Shabnam.



I just tried using some hindi dialogues for tapoori Sid😛😊 sry if u find any mistake in this as I can only understand Hindi and not much gud in writing or speaking😛😛 Don't forget to share ur views after reading this😊


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Edited by madhuharini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: prathe

wow amazing concept abhi excited for this

do continue soon😳


thank u so much prathe😊
updated Part 1 just now😛😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res..
Unres😆
Wowww..abi..u toh twisted everything... Let's see war happens next...iaww...roshni felt bad forbher..DAT bitch u r gonna count or end son😆
Continue soon..
Edited by Purni12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
wow superb twit abhi raghu revealed it all to foxy👏 am sure there is something more to come here am excited
do continue soon😛
Edited by prathe - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Purni12

Res..wil in res later..abi😆


take ur time purni... np😉
Edited by madhuharini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: prathe

wow superb twit abhi raghu revealed it all to foxy👏 am sure there is something more to come here am excited

do continue soon😛



yeah so much to come Prathe😆😉
Sure I'll😊👍🏼 Thank u😊

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