Brilliant writing!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Even when I acknowledge all the stupidity and dragging in the show Jamai raja, I also sometimes feel the writers of the show are doing a fabulous job👏👏 The story is written with a lots of foreshadowing and atleast a bit of thinking has gone into writing the tracks👍🏼

One track which I always found incomplete and filled with loophole was Shiv's disappearance and his return.. i was never able to digest the fact that he doesn't have a back story.. That was such a blot in the story telling.. Now I'm really happy that the writers addressed that loophole by showing Shiv was living with a family and had 2 children in another women😕 now that justifies the story to a large extent..

I'm glad the Ayesha track has been given a logical ending👏 I always knew the adoption may not happen and with all the gandi khoon dialogues, ayesha's khoon belong to patel family.. Many of us used to guess shiv being the culprit😆 And DD's Shiv returned as double dhamaka.. do - do Shiv

Even after all the dragging, the climax part of the track have been brilliantly written and I'm glad they didn't let SidNi adopt the kid.. And even Gafoors master plan was just superb, there is no better humiliation one can give to their dushman.. He did all the research to find Shiv's past affair, used it very constructively, to humiliate DD to the maximum😆 and the way he has executed the entire thing.. Gafoor rocks⭐️😆😆

So, I would like to thank the writers of the giving a fairly good 300 episodes, I'm sure they can give more good tracks🥳No wonder Nia and Ravi keeps their hope high in the writers and the team, the writers have the capability to do justice to the show.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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well said Rose... It's really gud they showing Shiv's back story now atleast😊 It was left totally incomplete before😕 But it'ld be really a great humiliation frm Gafoor's side and no one frm Patel's home expected this😲 Hope they move the story interestingly frm this plot😊👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Rose.. but what if he is making up that Ayesha is Shiv's daughter so that they all could stay under one roof.. and then he takes revenge (Donno how) ???🤔
Anyway Ayesha if really is Shiv's daughter then a big big LOL !! And if your prediction is true that he did it to humiliate DD in front of all then yea it was good planning on his part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i mean seriously i dnt knw with whom might be with skinno we had discussed something similar😆
but still hard to beleive ayesha related to shiv
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: skinnypal

Rose.. but what if he is making up that Ayesha is Shiv's daughter so that they all could stay under one roof.. and then he takes revenge (Donno how) ???🤔

Anyway Ayesha if really is Shiv's daughter then a big big LOL !! And if your prediction is true that he did it to humiliate DD in front of all then yea it was good planning on his part...

ayesha shiv daughter its sounding like comedy fr me😆
well i knew this part there wil be dhamaka so we gt
bt y was roshni attck planne thn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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could ayesha be shiv grand daughter atleast that makes sense and shabnam shiv daughter
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prathe

ayesha shiv daughter its sounding like comedy fr me😆
well i knew this part there wil be dhamaka so we gt
bt y was roshni attck planne thn


ikr.. it sounds so ridiculous... tabse sidni were mamma pappa... abh didi jeeju.. 😆😆
i donno i think gafoor has more plans in his mind.. this is not the whole truth.. he may just be framing Shiv in this to take down DD for a while so that he could strike something else on her? 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: skinnypal

Rose.. but what if he is making up that Ayesha is Shiv's daughter so that they all could stay under one roof.. and then he takes revenge (Donno how) ???🤔

Anyway Ayesha if really is Shiv's daughter then a big big LOL !! And if your prediction is true that he did it to humiliate DD in front of all then yea it was good planning on his part...



Of course the drama is not over.. Its just the beginning.. Gafoor would use Shabnam Ayesha to the maximum to destroy DD But I'm sure they are Shiv's children.. All that photos can't be fake and 20yrs is not a short time for Shiv to just roam around and not come back to DD.. May be to clear Shiv's name towards the end they may show this was his friends children and he was not having an affair with the lady😆 But whatever he was taking care of them, that in itself is his backstory I'm happy about it.. I always wanted to know what he was doing this 20yrs..

And I have faith in gafoors plan, he is going to end it with a dhamaka.. This is just the beginning, he is playing behind the back, I don't think even Sid will be able to find him as the villian.. 😆

As of now, I'm happy with the progress in the story, but there is more to come Jashn - e - kathra has just begun😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so new entry will be shiv again in back drop drama is it
is it connected to the money he gt fr treatment of his son
i still beleive tht its all trap and may be this will run fr months and thn jamai after his shoot will soon discover the root truth

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prathe

ayesha shiv daughter its sounding like comedy fr me😆
well i knew this part there wil be dhamaka so we gt
bt y was roshni attck planne thn



Roshni attack will happen.. the drama has just begun.. Gafoor will use Shabnam to destroy DD.. and even yesterday precap, Shabnam tried to harm Roshni, this would continue b'coz now they may claim DD's property too.. If Roshni is killed, Ayesha Shabnam may get the property Attack on Roshni is imminent, but it will be delayed till Oct 15😆 and then may Sid will get hurt trying to save Roshni😕

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