Sidni OS 'May Be' Part 2 Punishment pg 5 *cmpltd*

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ksen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

very emotional and touchy

sad ending but written beautifully

thanks for the pm

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Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

😭 I was crying after reading this beautiful os. u made this os full of emotions .Great job 👏

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

No comments...

After reading this i m crying...

Both sidni got died...

Feeling really bady...

But u wrote very beautifully...

Hatts off to u

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

It was really emotional...😭

SidNi 🥺

Well, amazingly written and thanks for the pm. 😊

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tomandjerry16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

wow...such an emotional update😭😭 beautifully written👏

sid also died😭😭 but now at least they are together in heaven😊

loved it lot

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prathe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Sidni ki Adhuri kahaani...

Aroo tune muje senti kardiya😳...

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sowiee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Thank u dear...I am so glad u liked it😊
Sorry to make you cry😭
I am glad thanks...

I am so happy that you liked it..thank you for appreciating my work..i m overwhelmed

There is not need that every story should make every one happy sometimes crying is even necessary

..dat adds spice to the writing..to be frank I like lil sad ones which makes me cry...

You made me do that thank u so much...

For watching happy making serials should be there but for reading there should be a touch up of some sadness..and it's really difficult to change someone's emotions just from a writing , u did that great job hats off for that

In fact hats off to all writers of JR here👏

Waiting for next os / ff/ ss.

Your wish but please continue writings...

Congratulations on completing this os.👏

Edited by sowiee - 10 years ago

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aparnalokam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

omg both the parts are fantastic got tears in my eyes while reading both died😭awesome story dear very well written👏👏👏

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Another torturous part.
And In this even Sid died yaa did commit a suicide...this should not happen...I guess with even your enemies also.
Still a well written part..
Good work...Aroo.