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skinnypal thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
What a fabulous update.. totally loved how DD understood her daughter in an instant... continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
awesome updates stephie...now i am really excited for sidni meeting...
continue soon n sry for short n late reply busy wd exam preparation
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
so sorry fr late reply i was not able to comment.
had read it in the morning only.
i loved it..u potray the emotions so well i just love this ff.
once u gave me a compliment today i give u the same..
u should seriously start writing fr JR!!😃
sorry again!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Amazing...plz update soon...i just love your work...i will be waiting for the next part eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
So amazing part it was...👏 And I loved the letter wala part it was cute and emotional one...😳 Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 7

About a week pass by and both Sid and Roshni were sending notes to each other unaware of the other person identity, it was finally the day both of them were to be released when Sid decided to go and meet his mystery pen pal. So he went straight across to her room only to find the bed neatly made and the room empty. He then saw a nurse and asked her about the young lady that was in the room, the nurse said he just missed her. Disappointed in not getting to see his new mystery friend he turned to leave when something caught his attention, he saw a small diary lying next to the bed being curious he went to see who diary it was and to his surprise he saw a picture of him and Roshni in it. This got his attention so he checked to see if any information was on it and he began reading he was stunned as to what he was reading tears quickly filled his eyes as he rush through each page of the diary, he fell to the bed still scanning the pages.
Shocked as he was broken to know the pain his Roshni felt for all these months , he read how she visted him each day with new hope that he will wake up, he saw how she yearned for him. Sid could not believe that all this time he was talking to Roshni and did not know it was her.
He remembered how he had a dream of a his Roshni crying for him while he was in the coma, but he just thought of it as a dream, he thought she did not want to be with him. He stood up from the bed and ran outside to find her but he could not instead he saw his mom smiling at him ." Sid you are so eagered to leave nah, come let us go , everyone at home is missing you" But Sid just stood still and stared at her, his eyes burying with rage "Mom while I was in coma did Roshni ever come to me" Simran replied " Sid why are you doing this to yourself , I told you a million times only I and you sister was by your side Roshni abandoned you, she never love you Sid"...Sid just got more angry with her because he knew she was being untruthful.. " Ok mom I trust you would never lie to me but please answer this one question Why did Roshni slit her wrist in our home? answer that mom, tell me if you say she never loved me why did she try to harm herself when you hid me from her" Simran was hell shock, she could not believe that Sid knew about the suicide attempt. "Sid I can explain Roshni is lying yes she tried to kill herself but she is not the right one for you" Sid replied "Right one for me, wow mom since when have you become my mind and heart to know whom is right for me, I am saying this once to you Roshni is my life and because of you I've lost her, all because of your stupid ego mom, how can you do this to your son mom, can I even call you mom" "Sid please do not be this way" "Which way mom, I used to have so much respect for you but now I cannot even look at you, listen to me Mrs. Khurana that day in Bangkok your son died in that accident because from today I do not consider you my mother" Sid said and then he turned and left a broken Simran crying her eyes out " Sid please don't leave me, please " but Sid left his mom and went into the elevator. He was crying because he felt betrayed "where are you Roshni, please I need you now more than ever" he said and as the elevator arrived at the ground floor and the door opened up to his surprised as he looked up at the now opened door he say saw her, staring at him with a shock expression with tears filling her eyes "Siddharth" she said...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
that was short..but great!!
i loved it..sid abandons his mom.
as i said i m in love with this..
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Mind blowing update...😳 First i loved sid outburst on that nutcase🥳It was so emotional when he read that diary, how roshni was visit him daily...😊 Waiting for the next part...😊
Edited by rachana10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic update.. I really love your story.. eager to know what happens next!! SidNi romance please!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plzzz plzzz plzzz i am eager to read next part update asap but a very long update plzzz
Amazing update

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