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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohkk u updated part 11 so soon..
It was awesome!
Amar attached to Roshni!
Who is this invisible grandma waiting to see her..
Kritika is surprised? But I thought she was behind it😕
Anyway ur story has too many twists so i'll wait😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
both the parts are super so many twists
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg what a twist update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow u updated both d parts r fantastic
Omg so many twists at a tym
U also brought dis misha 😭
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Such an amazing update.. Stephie.. it was fantastic.. their convos were good.. so simran had knowledge about misha's child all these years and the khurana's have been fooled to think that the child is Sid's.. i wonder what will happen next.. and kritika planned all this!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 12

"Simran what do you mean when you said that little boy is my grandson" asked a now angry Raj

"As far as i know Siddharth never shared any relationship with Misha so how can that child be his" he asked her

"Raj that boy is our grandson, I am the one that brought him to see Misha because i know he deserved to be there, it was time for Sid to meet him, it was time for Amar to have his father" she said crying

"What nonsense are you saying, have you gone mad, you are trying to tell me that for the past couple years you knew Sid had a son and you never told him, that is complete madness, what will happen now, how will you tell your son that you knew and you kept such a big secret from him" Raj shouted at her he was so angry at her once more How can she be so selfish he thought and without saying anything he left in a huff to inform Sid while Simran realized where he was heading she ran behind him to stop him.

"Raj, listen to me please do not tell Sid now,too much has happened, we will tell him when the situation is better" she said trying to keep up with him
He stop at the door of the guest room and saw that Sid fell asleep right next to Amar..."You see Sid is already taking care of him, we just need to give him sometime to get accoustom to Amar and then we will tell him that Amar is his" Simran said to Raj

He looked at her and said "Simmi it is not right, we cannot lie to our son, he already went through so much drama and now this, if we did not meet Misha today would you have ever thought of telling us " he said staring straight into her eyes

"No, i would have never infromed anyone that Amar is Sid son" she said as she cried
and Raj walked away from her, shocked at what she had just confess
"Well, Well it seems god really likes me, to have given me such an important weapon to separate Sid and Roshni " said Kritika you had just heard the conversation between Simran and Raj


The next morning Roshni got ready early and was about to leave when she met DD " So are you not going to tell us why Siddharth and you did not get married and why did he spend his time in a hospital room" DD asked her

"Mom Siddharth met an old friend and she is ill, so any human being would save someone rather than leaving them to die on the road, please do not worry as soon as Misha gets better the wedding will happen" Roshni said

DD looked at her daugther eyes and saw that something was bothering her "Roshni you know you can talk to me about anything and i can see something is bothering you , so please tell me so i can help" DD said

"Mom i am okay, nothing to worry about. Anyways let us forget all this serious talk, i will be home late i am going to see your Jamai" Roshni said as she left

"Oh Roshni, i know you are affected by this whole situation, i just hope you don't get hurt from it " DD said to herself

Roshni arrived at the Khurana house and she asked for Siddharth the servant said he was still sleeping and Roshni thought of going and wake him up. When she arrived at the room she saw both of them sleeping on the bed and she thought how cute they look
"Oh Siddharth i know you will make a great father someday" she said to herself and then she went over to the bed and kissed him on his cheeks, which he smiled a little and then his eyes open..he was looking so innocent , so care free...
"Good Morning sunshine did i wake you" Roshni asked
"You can wake me anytime " he said smiling and the smile disappeared after he look across to his sleeping companion

"Siddharth please don't spoil your mood by thinking about the past, just relax and get dress we need to go to the hospital quickly" she said to him and then she went over to Amar to wake him

Siddharth , Roshni and Amar were at the breakfast table joking and enjoying their meal when Kritika joined them
"Good Morning" she said
"Good Morning" they both replied

Amar just stared at her, Roshni looked at him..."Dont you have something too say"...he then looked at her smiled and shaked his head signalling a no.
"Well arent you a naughty boy" Kritika said to him
"You know Roshni mom told me that when Sid was little he was so naughty" she said laughing

"I know even now that mischeivous side is still there for him" Roshni laughed as she told Kritika...Siddharth just stared at them mockingly and then he noticed Amar mouth was dirty, he took his handkerchief and wiped the little boy mouth and then smiled at him
Both Roshni and Kritika watched keenly and then Kritika said
"Wow Sid, it really is amazing how well you and this little guy is getting along, he really catched on to you quickly" she said staring at Roshni with a smug look on her face.

Roshni just smiled and said" Its true even up to a few minutes i was saying how i cannot wait for Sid to be a dad, he would be great at it" Sid just sat there not joining in on the conversation

"Roshni i think we should head over to the hospital now, we dont want Amar to be late to see his mom" and after he said that both of them along with Amar left Kritika at the dining table.

"Kritika what are you trying to do" said Simran startling Kritika a little
"Oh my, what do you mean i was just innocently pointing out how well Sid and Amar are getting along, why is that a problem" she asked innocently
"Just don't do it please" Simran begged her
"Mom i am worried now, what is the matter why are you so worked up about what i said about Sid" Kritika pretended to sound like if she cared
"Mom please tell me, you can trust me"

"She will not say anything " said Raj shocking them both
"Simran loves to keep secrets in this family Kritika so she will not tell you what she did" Raj continued
"What do you mean, are you guys fighting and why is everyone so worked up about Amar and Sid, it is not like it he is his son" Kritika said leaving both Simran and Raj shock
"Or is he, becuase from the look on your face when i mention the word son, you guys froze, so Amar is my nephew isn't he " she asked them once more

"Yes Kritika Amar is Sid son " Simran barked
"WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY" said DD you had just entered the Khurana's house
"SIDDHARTH HAS A SON"





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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG.. Lol.. this was amazing.. DD heard it all.. it's gonna be interesting now.. i am loving this story Stephie..you have engrossed me in it now! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...i did'nt that story will move with such a great and interesting track
i loved it❤️..oh my how will DD react😲 and rosh🥺 what will happen now?
please update asap...n pm me😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
totally awesome!!
simran and kritika shud go n die😡
DD heard it now major drama gonna happen!!
U are updating super soon btw..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

totally awesome!!

simran and kritika shud go n die😡
DD heard it now major drama gonna happen!!
U are updating super soon btw..😆




i am enjoying writing this one because ideas keep popping up in my head lol part 13 will be up soon

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