SidNi FF : For All Eternity Part 20b,Part21 completed Pg49,Pg51 - Page 25

Originally posted by: aparnalokam

Wow double dhamaka
Wonderful updates
Loved sid rosh nd raj part
Kri nd rosh part is cute
Sid tld everythng 2 rosh abt rv
Nw rv is upto sumthng
Hpe he dnt hurt rosh
Update nxt part soon

Originally posted by: skinnypal

SO MUCH happened.. my god!! i loved the paratha scene, sid's dialogues were amazing.. i donno whenever i read your story i find sid a little bit like christian grey (if u've read that book u will know) 😳 Oh god RV will put Roshni in a bad situation at office ? Next update Sid-DD please So many new questions have risen in my mind now..all will get solved eventually but still i am curious.. u really know how to keep the reader's interest going on in the story.. 👍🏼

Actually I missed reading Part 14, only now I realized it. Part 14 was fantastic, especially the Sid Ni scenes😳 Would love to read more such scenes😳

Both these parts were also superb👏 Loved how Sid was teasing Roshni😉

Kritika is really good in your story and Rosh - Kri scenes are also good. I can't ever imagine that in our show.

Sid - DD bond is also really good😛 Loved the Patel family reunion😊

RV is again creating trouble, hope he don't harm Roshni. Poor Sid won't be able take it again😭 Waiting for the next part😊

Y don't you kick that Rv out 😡
Loved both the updates
Hope he won't create any problem to roshni

Originally posted by: anuv123

Thank you Pallavi😊..I love the paratha scene too...Christian grey?? really?? i love his lines in the book..😳..and now that i come to think of it..even i think i have made sid sound like him a little..😆

But if i actually write similar dialogues then my FF will be closed for sure..😛

RV is going to do something dhamakedaar...

Sid-DD will meet and plan something 😊

Oh! Thanks for the compliment...i hope the interest stays till the end..😊

Originally posted by: zoopassion

Actually I missed reading Part 14, only now I realized it. Part 14 was fantastic, especially the Sid Ni scenes😳 Would love to read more such scenes😳

Both these parts were also superb👏 Loved how Sid was teasing Roshni😉

Kritika is really good in your story and Rosh - Kri scenes are also good. I can't ever imagine that in our show.

Sid - DD bond is also really good😛 Loved the Patel family reunion😊

RV is again creating trouble, hope he don't harm Roshni. Poor Sid won't be able take it again😭 Waiting for the next part😊

Originally posted by: NiaDiva

Y don't you kick that Rv out 😡
Loved both the updates
Hope he won't create any problem to roshni

Originally posted by: tigress.meenu

superb updates dear😊

amazing updates.enjoyed reading them.

Originally posted by: afghangirl

amazing updates.enjoyed reading them.

please continue as soon as possible.