Our love is strong enough [SidDiti] - Upd - Pg 23 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Wow Deepu....yet another sizzling & romantic....ur FFs give me a reason to feel excited as the serial is totally dead now.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...kash ye scenes real soap mein dikhate...but these idiot creatives are hopeless........i know aditi is gone forever..i hope to see her on some other show...

waiting for ur next update..😉😉😉

Tanvi


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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

m loving ur ff........the romancing part is awesome add more such stuff in next update......for such a romantic version u need no comments coz bohat sey abhi tak veesha world main hain thats why they forgot to comment........

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
thanks for the comments girls.. will try to continue tonight :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
Deepu , I read all the parts and all of them are wonderful. Very well written ... Thanks ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
Fantastic....ur ff is gooood and romantic that i have read it almost 10 times!!...plz continue soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
ayesha: haan.. idhar udhar try kiya.. aur net mein bhi draping a saree video dekha.. and i am dressed up.. hehe...

veer: but you look gorgeous...

ayesha: love you.... ab chalo tayaar ho jao... mein hall mein hoon okay..

veer: just gimme 5 mins okay..

Ayesha: (giggles) okay...

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he comes down wearing the clothes choosen by ayesha, looking all hot and handsome. He observes ayesha engrossed in a magazine. Therfore, moves to the back of the sofa on which she is sitting and slowly rounds his hands around his neck and places his head on her shoulder..

Ayesha: veer !!!

Veer: yeh kya ? Mujhe laga tha ki tum jerk karogi.., :( plan fail. Tumhe kaise pata hai ki mein tha.

Ayesha: aur kaun kar saktey hai mere
saath aise harkat ? Nihal ya tum hi honge.. Aur ab nihal ghar pe nahi hai toh obviously, you.

Veer: hmm... Chalo chalte hai... Gimme some attention yaar..
Yeh magazine toh aaj se mera dushman hai !! Huh !!

Ayesha: stop pouting veer.. Aur chalo..,

as they will be making their way out, veer will be stopped by one of the servants..

Servant: sir, aap ke liye phone hai.. Kameeni ji se...

Veer: ok tum jao mein baat karta hoon..

Veer: haan mom boliye..

Kameeni: veer, kaise ho ? Wahan sab kuch kaise chal raha hai ?

Veer: (somehow did not want to tell about ayesha's return) mein theek hoon mom. Im just going out.. Well, how is nihal doing ?

Ayesha's face blooms with joy with the mentioning of nihals name, which veer notices too. He pulls her into his arms side hugging her and continues to talk.

Veer: haan mom.. No problem.. Boliye.. Mein free hi hoon !!

Kameeni: ayesha ke baare mein baat karna hai veer. Uss ladki jitni badtameezi ladki aur koi nahi ho sakti. Just imagine veer.. Uss ne hotel se accident ke pehle 7 lakh rupees draw kiya.. Aur pata nahi kiss haq se kiya hai ussne yeh sab.. Aur saath mein accounts bhi gadbad hai.. Yeh ladki upar se bass, 7000 rupees leti hai aur peehe se sab kuch chori karti hai.. Khair.. Woh toh mar gayi. Veer, mein tumhari maa hoon aur sach hi kehti hoon. Tum bass usko bhool jao aur uske kiye hue frauds ko theek kardo beta. Tum apne papa ke sapnon ko tod rahe ho..

Veer: thanks for the info mom. Bye..

Kameeni misses the sarcasm in his voice and assumes that, veer believed everything. Veer on the other side, for the first time in his life, felt like slapping his mom. As he saw ayesha's innocent face and sweet eyes portraying pure love for him, he felt the anger rise in himself. He did not want to spoil her mood. Therefore, he tries his level best not to show any emotions
but ayesha, who knows everything about him, catches the fact that something
is wrong and he is hiding something from her.

Veer: chalein ?

Ayesha: hmmm..

Precap: veesha (sidditi) moments, veer tells about what hos mother told him, ayesha opens up infront of him completely, veer ensures her that from now on, there will be only happiness for her; a few of ayesha's words hurt veer but then, they make up sweetly !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
yipeee...
i get to comment first.... 😃
deepu... sry i couldn't comment b4.....
but here we go.... he he...
well... first of all... i love all the chapters...
and in the last chapter thank god veer didn't tell anything to ayysha.... oh else hw would u write ur romantic scene na??... he he.... just kidding...
i really liked ur chapters...
update the next part soon.... :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
fantastic part
update soon
and what about the veesha moments in the garden?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
yaar kya hogaya hai no romantic scenes thz time.........it was good for me wanna see more n more pappi jhappi ok next time no kanjoosi..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
soooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet, ,
romantic
mouth watering
delicious.
pl. give us all this

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