Our love is strong enough [SidDiti] - Upd - Pg 23 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Veer: chalein ?

Ayesha: hmmm..

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veer and ayesha make their way out and veer, opens the door of the car for ayesha like a true gentleman and ayesha smiles and sits. Soon, veer will be in the drivers seat and off they start to ramada.

Veer realizes that, ayesha's saree pallu is disturbing his job of changing the gear. He slowly looks at her, who is staring out of the window smiling happily !! He tenderly puts her pallu back and ayesha notices it and mouths a sorry. Veer in an instant, grabs her hand and places it on the gear... As he places her hand, he places his hand on hers and starts regulating it till they reach ramada making her blush increase and they have a romantic ride.

They enter into the hotel and everyone gets shocked to see her.. Especially pammi.. She will feel like, she is on the top of the world. Ayesha requests pammi not to inform nihal about her returning back since she wanted him to have a surprise !!

They welcome her warmly.. Even minnie too because, she wanted to patao ayesha ;P

they make their way to the presidential suit, walking hand in hand and matching each others steps.. Veer makes her stand out of the door, wraps his arms round her waist from back side, with his chin on her shoulder and manahes to open the door...

Ayesha gasps at his sudden touch but will be left spellbounded at all the decoration done and the way the table is made and the food is arranged. She makes her way into the room, whispering a WOW !!

Veer: achcha laga..

Ayesha: bohot achcha veer.. Par mere liye itna sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi ?

Veer: oye.. Yeh tumhare liye nahi.. Naa mere liye hai.. Yeh saare decorations, hamare liye hai.. Mujhe apne honewaali ardhangni se gul milne ka haq banta hai.. Wouldbe mrs. Veer vardhan singh !! No questions are expected. Got it ?

Ayesha salutes in a funny way.. -- yes sir.. "giggles"

veer: chalo khaana khate hai.. Bohot zoron ki bhook lag rahi hai !!

Ayesha and veer head towards the dinning table and help eachother in serving the food !!

As they will be in the midway, ayesha raises the topic..

Ayesha: veer, kameeni mam ne kya kahan.. Tum ek dum itne pareshan kyun ho gaya tha ?


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this is the part friends.. Please do comment n press like button.

NOTE: this fiction material is written keeping aditi tailang in mind and the whole fic is dedicated to my princess, aditi tailang !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
Awesome part deepu👏👏👏👏👏.........plz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
Awesome👏👏
Romantic ride followed by a romantic dinner😍
sooo romantic

Thanks shanoveer so much, u r great.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ayesha and veer head towards the dinning table and help eachother in serving the food !!

As they will be in the midway, ayesha raises the topic..

Ayesha: veer, kameeni mam ne kya kahan.. Tum ek dum itne pareshan kyun ho gaya tha ?

Veer: kuch bhi nahi ayesha... Apne mood ko unke wajah se kharab mat karna.. Aur unhonne kuch nagu kahan mujh se. Just a normal talk.

Ayesha: hmm.. Toh tum mujhse share nahi karna chahte. Not at all a problem veer. Mein samajh sakti.

She really means it rather than getting sarcastic and he also understands that, when she quickly changes the topic into something interesting...

Ayesha: veer, waise tum itni kam time mein itna sab kuch kaise arrange karwaya ?

Veer: ayesha, topic badalne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Ab toh tumhe haq banta hai.. Mere dill aur dimaag ki baat jaan ne ki. Tum aur mein ek hai. So, mein tumhe bataoonga.. Lekin ek sharat par..

Ayesha: aur woh sharat kya hai ?

Veer: tum bilkul bura nahi maanogi.. Kyunki mein tumse pyaar karta tha, karta hoon aur hamesha karta rahoonga..

Ayesha: arey baba.. Mein bura nahi maboongi. And same to you...

By that time, they finish everything and sit on the bed. Ayesha rests her head on bis shoulder, while he starts telling about what kameeni said and how annoyed felt. He panics to see, ayesha lifting her head off his shoulder and going into a trance. He immediately slides down from the bed and sits on the floor facing her. He cups her face and makes her look into his eyes..

Veer: ayesha.. Mujhe pata hai ki maa tumhare baare mein bohot buri keh rahi thi par ayesha, mein tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon aur mein maa ke saamne asliyat saabit kar ke rahoonga. Please ayesha.

Veer starts getting tears in his eyes.. Ayesha sees that and feels bad at her negative reaction.

Ayesha: please veer.. Dont cry.. Iss mein tumhari koi galti nahi hai.. Please..

Veer: ayesha, mujhe nahi pata ki maa ne tumhare baare mein aisa kyun kahan.. Woh toh tumhe bohot admire karti thi na..

Ayesha thinks at this statement while veer finds something fishy..

Veer: kya soch rahi ho ayesha ? Please be open ayesha. Darne ki koi baat nahi.

Ayesha: veer, kameeni ji, mujh se sirf aur sirf nafrat karti hai.. Day 1 se unhein mein passand nahi thi. Unhonne mujhe vardhan ghar mein sirf nihal ke dekhbal ke liye rehne diya.. Par vardhan ghar mein mujhe tumhare aur nihal ke ilava, sab log mujhe ek dog jaise treat karte hai.. Issiliye maine achchanak se, ramada mein bhi join kar liya.. Aur mein unn saare din, beizzati issiliye sehti rahi kyunki, woh JEEJU ki ghar hai, jeeju ke mom hai. Mein didi se jzyada jeeju ki pet hoon aur unnmein mein apni papa ko dekhti hoon.. Apna maan kar maine sab kuch seh liya.

Veer, mein hamesha se tumse bohot pyaar karti thi.. Par pata hai.. Kabhie kabhie aisa lagta hai ki, mein kabhi tumhare barabari nahi kar sakti.. Aur mujhe yakeen bhi nahi hai ki, tumhare gharwaale, hamare rishtey ko accept karenge. Zaroor kameeni ji mana karenge.

Veer: ayesha.. Itna sab kuch hua aur tum ne mujhe ek baar batane ke liye layak hi nahi samjha ?

Ayesha: nahi veer... Mujhe nahi laga tha ki tum mere upar vishwaas karoge. Par kameeni mam bhi toh sach hi hai na.. Mein tumhari social status kabhi bhi match nahi ka sakti.. Mein ek maamuli house keeper hoon aur tum hi socho.. Agar nihal nahi hota toh kya tum mujhse pyaar karne lagoge ? Tum toh mere chehre bhi nahi dekhna chahta tha.. Veer, i guess, i made a blunder. Kameeni mam sahi the.. Shayad..

Veer: ayesha, kya tum mere bina reh sakti.. All of this is coming out as an emotion but you s
dont mean it na.. Ayesha, mein tum se shimla trip mein bhi bohot pyaar karta tha na.. Ayesha, mein tumhare bina jee nahi paoonga.. Please mujhe chod kar mat jao.. Mein akela pag jaoonga.. Tum mere zindgi ho.. Please..

Ayesha: mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai veer... Issiliye..

Veer: jab mein tumhare saath hoon toh dar kyun ? Haan.. Hum dono saath milkar har ek kadam mein har problem ko solve karenge.. Promise..

Ayesha: i love you veer.. Mein bhi jee nahi sakti tumhare bina..

Veer: i love you too ayesha !!

Ayesha: Ek aur baat kehne waali hoon, joh ab taq mere ilava iss dhuniya mein kissi aur ko nahi pata.. Veer, jeeju aur didi ki accident nahi hui.. Unpar ek planned murder kiya gaya hai.. Aur mere upar bhi murder hi kiya gaya.. Par maine escape kar liya.. Mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ki woh kaun hai.. Par... Hmm.. Par.,, itna pata ki, woh vardhan's family mein se hai..,

this is the part frndz. Please do comment n press the lise button if you like it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Hi Deepu,
yiepiee i am the first one to comment..........fantastic episode......loved it..........i hope at least here we will get what we wanted to see ..... plz update soon😛😛😛

tanvi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Fantastic........want to read more naughty veer scenes!!................continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
how sweet Deepu itni jaldi update kia.thanx aur haan next part zara naughty chahiye.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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superb👍🏼
Looking forward to read the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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deepu, you are too good.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yiii...deepu....loved ths twist...this shd what have been in the actual story...

Lovely stroy deepu...waiting for moree...

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