TUM MILE-AN VEESHA FANFIC-BY PAYAL-updated on Pg 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Guys....herez am experimenting on Veesha...yhh. a ff on Veesha. I had ben thinking of this since a long time....but like my preparations n all...for my xams.....so cudn't do so. Today by chance am a bit free....so thought of starting.

<font size="4"> It basically will b revolving round Veer and Ayesha...and their post marital life.But their marriage is still a secret to the entire world and only the little Nihaal and Pammi are aware of it. Its their plan to expose the real murderers. Veer somehow have cum to know that someone from the Singh Family is involved....but is yet unknown of the fact whoz the real culprit. Nihaal no longer stays with Ayesha and Veer....coz it was Veer's decision to send him away. Ayesha had been reluctant...but Veer reasoned it that as its a sensitive issue....dealing with the murder of his parents....it may have adverse effects on his tender mind....so its better for him to stay away from here.....and promised Ayesha that he wud be brought back just as they complete their mission. She still works there as an housekeeper....but has xcused herself from staying in the hotel....convincing them that her parents are ill n shez needed at home. Veer also no longer lives in his Singh Mansion..stating that he feels frustrated in his old home without his brother...n wants to settle in a new place.
But against all odd and oddities....its Veer and Ayesha's love that makes everything very simple.



Guys....u all have to b a bit patient....coz as u noe I am having xams. Just wanted to post the 1st part. Plzzz...give me ur comments as they r highly needed. May b I will update another part or so....but then.....u will have to wait till the next Year😆</font>
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART -1



It was a huge room...all decorated in white. White symbolizes Peace......the peace which they share when they are together.......the peace which they feel when they realize how important they r for each other....the peace which the room witnesses every day and night...when they just relax in each others arm.....forgetting all their worries and tensions....the worldly affairs.....only the blossom of love occupying the space.

Ayesha came inside the room...kept her bag on the side table and smiled as she saw a man.....petty taller than her....well build.....occupying the entire bed.....sleeping away his time...a light smile on his lips.....the face looking as innocent as a newly born.

Ayesha came near him.....caressed his hairs and gave a light peck on his forehead.....lest he awakes. Ayesha again looked at his face........she remembered her initial days.....when she had misunderstood him....had taken his silence as his attitude.....she had misunderstood his firmness as his arrogance......she remembered that time when they had undergone some very difficult days......those days when hatred had taken over their love.....but...dis man had never let the love die....she thought. Looking at him...she realized he is all hers...he belongs to her now....and everyday this special realization make Ayesha feel that she is the luckiest one in the entire world.....she owns him....she owns Veer.

Lost in his thought she hardly noticed that he was also observing her...seeing each bit of her face....angelic ,he thought. Veer always wondered...how come her face always had that special spark....that shine....which made him all crazy. One day she had answered its his love...which makes her shine.....adds that spark....and makes her special. Snapping out of his thought......Veer took the initiative to speak.

Veer: (slowly) Ayesha......tum kab aayi?
Aye: (Coming out of her most beautiful thought) Ahhh...abhi abhi.... Ummm......sorry...mainne tumhe jaga diya.

Veer: Hmmmm... well....aab jaga diya hain to...itna bhi batado....lunch ke liye kyun nahi aayi....pata hain....mujhe kitna dukh hua...?

Aye: Am sorry..(holds her ears) Lekin....aaj actually...bahot kaam tha.....aur dopahar mein....aana...woh bhi Minnie Maam se permission le kar......!!!!!

Veer: Ohhhh....to meri Ayesha...Minnie se darti hain.....Koi baat nahi.....usse kal hi fire kar donga.....

Aye: Ohhhh...aur Hotel ko jo best Hospitality award mila hain.....uska kya.??? Minnie Maam....is very dedicated.....aur ek tarah se theek hi hain....kaam ke waqt koi distraction nahi hona chahiye.(almost giggles)

Veer: What....!!!!!!!!!! main...mujhe tumne distraction kaha (pulling Ayesha into him)....arreee.... attraction to main hoon.....kaam hi tumhara distraction hain......

Ayesha starts giggling and Veer pulls her tightly....almost making her lie over him.
Aye: Ohhhh.....to...din bhar.....hotel na jakar...... janaab yehi sab soch rahe the...(still smiling)
Veer: Nahi.......main to kissi aur ke baarein mein soch raha tha......arre pata hain...Ayesha.....sapne mein.... kya larki dikhi mujhe....khubsoorat....smart....lovely..... (n starts giving flying kisses)

Veer could see the changing colors in Ayesha's face....he always loved to see those jealous expressions in her face....
Aye: Hnh.....!!!!! arre.....aankhein dikhao.....woh main hi thi.....kyunki...tumhare saapne mein aane ka ticket....sirf mere pass hain....samjheeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Veer: (still smiling) Ohhhhhkkk....tumhara matlab hain ki tum...khubsoorat...smart aur lovely nahi ho???

Ayesha burst into a fit of laughter......and starting punching him lightly on his muscular chest.....

Veer now sits up.....and makes Ayesha sit infront of him....her back facing him....pulling her by her waist....Ayesha's head resting on his chest.....n his on her shoulder.
Veer: ayesha....
Aye: Hmmm...
Veer: Pata hain....mujhe bahot bura lagta hain....meri patni hote hue bhi tumhe uss hotel mein house keeping ka job......Its ridiculous....I mean.....main...main tumhare liye kuchh nahi ker pa raha.....
Aye: Tumne mere liye...jo kuchh bhi kiya...Veer....wohi bahot hain. Aur....yeh...yeh to bas kuchh hi din ka mamla hain....ek baar sacchai saamne aa jaye......to hum sarre duniya ko cheek cheek ker kahenge.....ki...hum dono ek doosre ke ho chuke hain....lekin.....tab tak....
Veer: lekin fir bhi....mujhe accha nahi lagta....main Ac room mein baithker....order kerta hoon....aur meri Ayesha ......din bhar...kaam kaam kerte kerte thak jati hain....
(kisses her neck) I am sorry Ayesha....

Ayesha tilts herself a bit so that she could face Veer
Aye: Mujhe....kissi bhi cheez ka parwa nahi hain.....jab tak...tum mere saath ho....I love u Veer.....(kisses his nose)

Veer: (Taking her into a warm hug) I love u tooooooooo
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That is really nice Payal -love the starting-so romantic!!

Update soon!!!

P.S All the best for ur exams(psstt.. I have my semesters in Dec. too -8th )
Edited by andromeda_kia - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its simply fabulous dear. i just love this. please do keep writing. i am really waiting for the part one. please continue soon na. when are you gonna update part one ???
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wowie!

A VeeSha FF!

VeeSha married is a first! coolll!😎

Indeed a romantic beginning!😳

good luck for ur exams Payal 👍🏼

but we'll hv to wait till the next year for the next update?😲

(Purva dear, good luck to you too for ur exams👍🏼.)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#6
love the starting of the fanfiction so ROMANTIC.hope to see next part soon.waiting for your next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#7


Part 2

Veer and Ayesha were still busy chit chatting when Ayesha suddenly looked into her watch.
Aye: Aree...baap re.... raat ke aath (8) baj gaye....au Nihaal ne aab tak phone hi nahi kiya.......mshhh...aaj bhi time nahi mila hoga.....bechara....kitna pressure hain wahan per......humko..jald se jald kuch kerna parega.....mujhe Nihaal ke bina yahaan rehena bilkul accha nahi lagta.

Veer: Hmmmmmm....kitna accha hota na Ayesha...agar yeh sab pareshaniyan hoti hi na....bhaiyya aur bhabhi ke saath....hum log bhi Shimla mein....ek saath rehete. Humhara bhi ek chotasa-pyaarasa parivaar hota.....aur Nihaal bhi saath hota.

Aye: Pata hain....Veer,,,jeeju...(Kringgg.....Kringggg...)

Veer..looked at his cell phone.
Veer: Oooo...God....yeh Minnie...iss waqt...kya ker rahi hain?
Aye: Minnie....matlab...Minnie Maam...(Veer nods his head n picks up the phone)

Veer: Hello..

Minnie: Sir....Sir....yahaan ek bahot bari problem ho gaya hain

Veer: Kyun...kya hua?

Minnie: Sir....Sir...Rajdep..Sir..wants to fire me....infact....unhone to yeh bhi kaha hain...ki..main...yahaan..kaam kerne ki layak hi nahi hoon.

Veer: (mumbling) Raj ko yeh shubh kaam kerne mein ...itni der kyun lagi!!!)

Minnie: Jiiii?

Veer: Hnnhhh...nahi...matlab...Thats Sad!!!!

Minnie: Sir...aap kuch kijiye na....please sir...

Veer: Aab...main kya karu? Tumhe to pata hi hain Minnie...ki hotel ka saara kaam...Raj hi sambhalta hain...U noe...I can't interfere....

Minnie: But...Sir...its me...!!!!!!!

Veer: (mumbling again) Wohi to problem hain....main kuch kerna bhi nahi chahta(Loud) Sorry Minnie....I don't think I'll b able to help you.

Minnie: Yeh...Yeh sab uss Ayesha ke wajah se hua!!!

Veer: ( a little irritated) Aur woh Kaise?

Minnie: Sir....pata nahin...yeh larki...kya chakkar chala rahi hain Raj Sir ke saath...hamesha unke hi kamre mein reheti hain............Usine kuchh kaha hoga Raj Sir ko....

Veer: (getting furious now) Minnie....I think...she has got better work to do..
Minnie: Sir....main yahaan....peechle saath saal se hoon....aur woh yahaan aaye...ek saal bhi nahi hua....still sir...aap us...do kauri ki larki per biswas ker rahein hain!!!

Veer: Yhhhhhh...bcoz....she deserves that...n not U.
Veer slams off the phone.

Aye: Kya..ho gaya....itne naraaz kyun ho gaye....Minnie Maam ne kuchh..???
Veer: (Looking at her innocent face) Raj wants to fire Minnie

Aye: Kya....lekin Kyun??? I mean...aaj shaam tak to sab theek tha...achanak se....kya...kya hua.?

Veer: No...idea....But must say...Raj is doing a fantastic job.

Aye: Theek hain...but mujhe lagta hain....kuchh to baat zaroor hain....warna...Rajdeep Sir.....Veer mujhe lagta hain ki kal humko hotel jaake yeh baat pata kerna parega.

Veer: What's the need? I don't have a problem....main to...tumhe HouseKeeping Head bana donga. Tab tumko kissika permission bhi lene ki zaroorat nahi...nah hi...tumhe kaam kerna parega.

Aye: Nahi Veer.....humein...har ek kadam soch samajh ke lena chahiye ...nahi to...humhara sach kabhi bhi khul sakta hain. Aur haan....kal jaakar sabse pehele...yeh baat....suljhani hi hogi.

Veer: Okk...baba..as u say. But letz not spoil the mood now toking of Minnie(makes faces)

Ayesha smiles a bit....but things weren't that clear to her. Something was still bothering her.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sorrrriiiieee.....for the short update....will try and update a longer part next time. I will keep on giving promos....but U noe...xams....so may b u all have to wait a bit for the next update. Hup u all njoy reading. With lots of lov Payal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#9
hey payal, this is a lovely fanfic👏 loved it, nice setting, secret marriage and all...interesting...and very romantic too..keep it up...hehe liked veer's mumbling in part 2 over rajdeep firing minnie😆
best of luck for your exams...and will wait for your updates even if they take time⭐️ best wishes,you'll do well in your exams😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
Thanks a lot ht.....thanks for those kind words. Ur wishes means a lot to me.

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