Hum Saath Saath Hain - Part 10 - Page 20 - Jan 10 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: _Mariam_

Hey, really good character sketch I love all the characters 😊😊

expecially veers he seems really sweet and caring
great job👏
cant wait to read the first part 😊
update soon
Love Mariam xxx

hi mariam,
thanks a lot for the comment. yeah. i am also in love with the veer's character in this ff. thanks again. will continue with the first part as soon as possible.
keep reading and commenting.
loads of love
deepu 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aamirkhanfan, _Mariam_, nehara, ht312, QueenAnnie18, ArmaansGirl, kyphfanz, jeniluvmayur, 26javey26, aish_punk, AnjanaToronto,
thank you so much for liking the character sketch.
love
deepu :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33


he woke up to see her sleeping beside him, which her back facing towards him. he smiled at her and wraps his arms round her waist and places his head on her shoulder.
due to the sudden movement, she wakes up.


veer: oops. sorry. maine tumhe jagaa diya..

ayesha: kya veer. tum ne toh mujhe sach mein jaga diya. please. sone do na.

veer: hmm. okay. but let me just tell you. for your kind information, it is 10:00 in the morning.

ayesha wakes up with a jerk and looks at veer with wide and shocked eyes.

ayesha: tum ne mujhe jagaaya kyun nahi ? nihal ko school pe bhi jaana hai. oh my god ab mein...

even before she starts speaking, veer cuts her off..

veer: arey. dont worry. nihal school chala gaya. rajdeep, nihal ko leke gaya hai. okay.


ayesha: ohh. agar raj ke saath hai toh no problem.

veer: ayesha. mein tumse kuch baat karna chahta tha. aur shaadi ke dhoom dhaam ke wajah se bol bhi nahi paaya. woh mein. bohot dinon se batana chahta tha ki.. umm.. woh.. actually...

ayesha: kya hua veer ? feel free to tell me. mujhse kya chupana ? huh ?

veer: ayesha... i dont know... i think, i was really rude to you in the startings, when we met.

ayesha: arey veer.

veer: no ayesha. no stopping this time. let me tell what i want to say.

veer: mujhe pata hi nahi tha ki, tum bhabhi ke sister ho, aur nihal mera bhatija hai. aap log mere saath hi the, RAMADA mein aur mein kuch nahi kar paaya and i was the one who added more pareshani on your heads. aur nihal ko toh, ussi ke hotel mein ussi ko chup ke rehna pada. agar maine bhaiyya ko milne ke liye, aur bhi pehle se hi try kiya hota toh, shayad mein aap donon ko miss nahi kiya hota. sab kuch mere hi wajahh se hua hai. aur maine upar se, uss avinash ko saare rights de diya. i was a b*****d.

ayesha: VEER !! is mein tumhare koi galti nahi hai veer. please dont accuse yourself of everything.
joh hogaya, woh hogaya. aur ab hum sab saath mein hai na. let's thank god for that.

veer: thanks for understanding me ayesha. i am so lucky to have you in my life.

ayesha: main bhi bohot lucky hoon veer 😳 achcha chalo. mein naha ke aati hoon.

veer: kuch der aur baito na ?

ayesha: nahi veer. mujhe kaam hai. abhi nahi. please.

veer pulls her and due to the force, she twirls and lands in his arms and he ensures that, she is comfortable in his lap. she lowers her eyes, while veer keeps staring at her angelic face.

veer: ayesha..

ayesha: .....

veer: look at me. please.

ayesha lifts her head a little and it was clearly visible that, she was blushing

veer: did i ever tell you, you look damn sexy, while blushing.

ayesha was so shocked at that comment. even in their one year friendship, she never found him being so very cheesy and naughty and since the past two days, due to all the guests in their place, she was
busy and then, she had to be with nihal. so, they both did not even had time to talk. she
looked scared and shocked but was enjoying the way veer was flirting with her.


ayesha: veer.. please.. jaane do na..

veer: come on ayesha. kal bhi maine kuch nahi kaha na. tum poore ghar pe idhar se udhar bhaag rahi thi. aaj nahi. aaj mujhe koi nahi rok sakta tumhare saath waqt bitane se. you know something, we approximately spent more time with eachother before our marriage as compared to now. waise mein yaad aagaya. when are you getting back to the college ? you are getting some holidays right ?

ayesha: yeah.. but i have my final semister coming in this december. another one week to go.
holidays sirf uske baad honge. and dont worry. i will spend all my time with you once i finish these things.

veer: love you ayesha.

ayesha: love you too. acha chalo. ab mein nahaane jaa rahi hoon..

she will be making her way towards the washroom but stops and turns towards veer, only to find him smiling and staring at her retreating figure. she remembers their suhaag raat. the way he understood that, she requires time, even before she said a word, the way he read her eyes and they way he took care of her each and every need including nihal's welfare. she felt so lucky.

veer: kya hua ? aise kya dekh rahi ho ?

ayesha: no no.. nothing.. kuch nahi...

she leaves into the washroom smiling to herself, while veer goes out into the living room, and sits there, reading his morning news paper, as well as thinking about ayesha and him.

friends,
this is the part one. if you like this fan fiction, please do leave your comment and i will continue with part 2 and will give a longer update next time. thanks a lot for the support for this fan fiction.

loads of love
deepu 😃

Edited by loyal-kashian - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
updated the part. waiting for your comments. do press like, if you find thee post or the update worthy.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
deepu, seriously my craziness levels are already high after watching yesterday's veesha's moments and waiting for tonight's episode...and you just increased it a lot more by writing such hot veesha moments😉 good job, liked it a lot😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ht312

deepu, seriously my craziness levels are already high after watching yesterday's veesha's moments and waiting for tonight's episode...and you just increased it a lot more by writing such hot veesha moments😉 good job, liked it a lot😃

thanks a lot himani.. 😆😆 i know.. LOL. 😆😆 thanks a lot again. really happy n excited to read your comment.
loads of love
deepu 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
hey!!!
it's so awsome!!!
i'm going crazy.......
pls pls update soon.....
i cnt wait to see wt happens next.....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
deepu, sara I think we are one crazy lot😆 veesha ne hume crazy kiya re🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ht312

deepu, sara I think we are one crazy lot😆 veesha ne hume crazy kiya re🤣



he he.....😆
totally...........😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: nehara

hey!!!
it's so awsome!!!
i'm going crazy.......
pls pls update soon.....
i cnt wait to see wt happens next.....😊


hi sara,
thanks a lot for the comment...
hehe.. me either.. i am also crazyyyy..
will update the next part as soon as possible 😃

luv
deepu 😃

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