Hum Saath Saath Hain - Part 10 - Page 20 - Jan 10 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow part1 was nice buddy...write more on veesha
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Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

wow part1 was nice buddy...write more on veesha


thanks a lot for the comment.. will update it by tomorrow morning.
thanks a lot again. keep reading and commenting as they mean a lot to me.

luv
deepu :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part one - page 5

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veer: come on ayesha. kal bhi maine kuch nahi kaha na. tum poore ghar pe idhar se udhar bhaag rahi thi. aaj nahi. aaj mujhe koi nahi rok sakta tumhare saath waqt bitane se. you know something, we approximately spent more time with eachother before our marriage as compared to now. waise mein yaad aagaya. when are you getting back to the college ? you are getting some holidays right ?

ayesha: yeah.. but i have my final semister coming in this december. another one week to go.
holidays sirf uske baad honge. and dont worry. i will spend all my time with you once i finish these things.

veer: love you ayesha.

ayesha: love you too. acha chalo. ab mein nahaane jaa rahi hoon..


she will be making her way towards the washroom but stops and turns towards veer, only to find him smiling and staring at her retreating figure. she remembers their suhaag raat. the way he understood that, she requires time, even before she said a word, the way he read her eyes and they way he took care of her each and every need including nihal's welfare. she felt so lucky.

veer: kya hua ? aise kya dekh rahi ho ?

ayesha: no no.. nothing.. kuch nahi...


she leaves into the washroom smiling to herself, while veer goes out into the living room, and sits there, reading his morning news paper, as well as thinking about ayesha and him..

soon, ayesha comes out wearing her night suit and she notices that, veer will be sitting on the swing, and will be reading the newspaper. she immediately makes her way to the kitchen and gets makes some coffee for him. as the stove burns, she keeps thinking about the small tiff they had just after proposing, when she told about her family, and how veer flabergasted, but then, the way he convayed to her that, he loved her truely and after knowing the truth about who her family is, he can not stop loving her. he considered her as his life, while she had the same feelings towards him.

she smiled thinking about, how she always addressed him as "sir", even after their confession and the way he laughed and how she got embarrassed. even though they never had good terms in the beggining, when they first met, ofcourse, their first meeting is a disaster, they never seem like that

she smiles to herself dreamily while she feels a pair of arma, wrapping, wrapping around her waist. she jerks suddenly. veer smirks at her sudden jerk and starts nuzzling near her ear, while she feels goosebumps raising in her. she turns towards him and speaks up with great difficulty.

veer: kya kar rahi ho ?

ayesha: tum kya kar rahe ho ?

veer: pyaar kar raha tha. woh bhi apne biwi se. koi parayi stree (woman) se nahi..

ayesha: huh.. mujhe toh shaadi se pehle pata hi nahi tha ki tum itne bade badmaash ho.. warna..

veer: uhumm.. uhumm.. small correction. mein pehle se, yaani mere bachpan se aisa hi tha. tum ne mujhe pehchanne mein der kar diya. aur madam, agar aapko shaadi se pehle pata chal gaya toh, aap kya karenge ? aap thoda detail mein batayiye. humein sunne ka bohot shauk hai..

ayesha: veer.. pata chal gaya toh, aur kya karoongi ? tumhe tab hi theek kar doongi. ab kya faida ?

veer: baah.. chodo yaar.. yeh tum kitchen mein kya kar rahe ho ?

ayesha: mere pati ji ke liye coffee bana rahi hoon. kyun, aap ko koi problem hai ?

veer: ohh.. mujhe kya problem hoga ? no problem.. not at all. waise, aap ke pati ji kya karte hai ?

ayesha: what do you mean ?

veer: kuch toh karte honge na, jeene ke liye ? hmm. aap se pyaar karne ke ilava..

ayesha: come on veer. its getting too much now. tum jao aur bahar baito. mein aa rahi hoon.

veer: nahi. mujhe yahi par baitna hai.

ayesha: toh, please silently baito.

veer: mujhe baat karne se koi nahi rok sakta.

ayesha: veeeer.. please... itna shor kyun macha rahe ho subah subah.

he suddenly gets closer to ayesha and whispers in her ears, with a musky voice..

veer: toh, subah nahi.. raat ko machaoon ?

ayesha will be left open mouthed. since morning, he was just teasing her. he did not even give a break. he was all naughty and never gave her peace. not even for a moment.

ayesha: veer, tum jao aur bahar baito. warna, mein khud chali jaoongi.

veer: okay okay. final question and damn serious

she notices the seriousness in his voice and decides to listen to him carefully..

veer: hmm.. tum coffee kyun bana rahi ho ? ramu kaka kahan hai ?

ayesha: woh, ramu kaka ke tabhiyat theek nahi thi. aur maine unhe chutti di hai. waise.. ghar mein tum, me aur nihal ke ilava aur kaun hai.. mein sambhal loongi. chalo.. meri coffee bhi ban gayi.

veer then moves towards the cupboard and starts looking at the things weirdly.

ayesha: aise kya dekh rahe ho ?

veer: mein.. actually, tumhe help karne ke liye, cups doond raha tha.

ayesha: oh my god veer. cups wahan par nahi, us taraf ke shelf mein hai. aur bahar ki pade hai.

veer: oopsieess.

both of them go out and sit in the lounge. veer sits on the couch and pulls ayesha on to his lap.
she shivered at the intimacy they shared. they had an eye lock for a while, but then, ayesha broke it.

ayesha: coffee...

she hands him the coffee mug. he takes a sip, and puts forward the cup for ayesha. she hesitates and shies away in the first but, then, takes the cup into her hold and gulps a sip from it. she hides heself in his arms, just to cover her blush but he very well knew that, she was blushing.

ayesha: veer, mujhe dar lag raha hai.

veer: kyun ?

ayesha: exams aa rahe hai.. aur abhi toh 1/4 th of the syllabus waisa hi padi hai. aur..

veer: ayesha, seriously bataoon, just stop panicing. i know you will do well. bekaar mein tension mat liya karo. che foot ke aadmi tere saath hai, jisne bhi, wahi course ko top ki hai. tumhe help karne ke liye mein hoon na. why do you take all this depression and pains ? shall i tell you something,
you should first change the attitude of taking all tiny things in a huge manner. you know, as you keep thinking about them, and when you start giving priority to all the petty things in your life, they will start controlling you. you control the things. dont let them take a chance on you. main hoon na.

ayesha: thanks..

veer: thanks kis baat ki ? ayesha, hum dono ek hai. aur hamare iss pyara sa rishta mein thanks ki koi jagah nahi hai. just keep smiling like this. i will also be happy.....

suddenly, they hear the door bell and veer answers the door... he finds nihal outside, with pammi. pammi gets uncomfortable with veer opening the door. veer asks in a worried way.

veer: nihal, beta kya hua ? tum school se waapas aa gaye ?

pammi: sir, woh, nihal ko chot lag gaya hai, toh, school se phone aayi hai. mein usko leke aagayi.

veer: chot ? kaise ? thanks a lot pammi. andar aao na..

nihal: chachu, uss bunty ne mujhe push kiya. maine usse kuch nahi kaha. 😭

hearing to nihaal's voice, ayesha also comes out and finds that, nihal is crying. she immediately runs towards him and hugs him as tight as possible. after assuring that, his sobs are subsided...

ayesha: nihal, kya hua ? ro kyun rahe ho ? pammi, sab kuch thek hai na..

pammi: ayesha, phir se uss bunty ne, hamare nihal par haath utaya. iiss baar toh, mein hi uss bunty ko sabak sikhane waali thi. lekin nihal ne mujhe rok diya. warna ab taw.. uss bunty ka..

she then realises the presence of veer and even realises that, bunty is the son of his sister and stops

pammi: sorry sir.

veer: pammi, first of all, you are ayesha's best friend, so, you are my friend also. aur tumhe mujhe sir bulane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. just call me veer. okay. aur tumhe shayad, nihal ke wajah se rokna nahi chahiye tha. you should have given those people some piece of mind. but anyways, i will talk to the principal of the school tomorrow and assure about nihal's safety. thanks a lot.

pammi: its okay................ veer...................

pammi: ayesha. ab mein chalti hoon. kaam hai hotel mein. bye.

bye nihal..

nihal: bye pammi maasi..

ayesha: bye pammi..

PRECAP: Ayesha, Veer and Nihaal Moments, Ayesha shares many things with both of them.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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just updated. waiting for your comments.

luv
deepu :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved the update deepu....its realli gud...simple n soo much romantic.....veesha moments are mindblowing...missed my dear Nihaal a bit...but ur precap sounds interesting...n I wish ek six foot ka aadmi...jisne mere course mein bhi top kiya hota....abhi mere saath hota....coz I am sooo tense of my cuming sems!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8 job.i love your this part of the story plz write next part soon

take care

fatima

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: paaal

loved the update deepu....its realli gud...simple n soo much romantic.....veesha moments are mindblowing...missed my dear Nihaal a bit...but ur precap sounds interesting...n I wish ek six foot ka aadmi...jisne mere course mein bhi top kiya hota....abhi mere saath hota....coz I am sooo tense of my cuming sems!!!!


hey paaal,
thanks a lot for the comment dear.. thank you again.. glad to know that, you liked the moments.. aww.. dont worry.. next update, you are going to have nihal along with veesha. haaye.. so sweet.. i wish the same too.. but agar veer jaisa koi mere saath hoga, i will leave about my studies and stare at veer dreamily.. LMAO...
me either.. i am having exams from monday and then, my finals are up for this jan.. hehe.

keep reading and commenting as your comments mean a lot to me..

luv
deepu :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pickachu

gr8 job.i love your this part of the story plz write next part soon

take care

fatima


hey fatima,
nice to see your comment.. keep reading and commenting as your comments mean a lot to me. will continue as soon as possible.

love
deepu :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wah deepu mera toh weekend bana diya tumne...😃was wondering when you will update and here it is...good one, nice veesha moments...😳.that cup searching was funny...oh toh badmaash bunty ne yahan pe entry maar di...is bunty going to cause more trouble ya veer uske kaan khichega?

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