Hum Saath Saath Hain - Part 10 - Page 20 - Jan 10 - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago

Wow Deepu! This was amazing... emotions portrayed really well! looking forward to the next part!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Pleasecontinue soon. Atleast a part for new years
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Posted: 15 years ago
Deepu, kya bolu dil khush ho gaya aaj...read all your fics at one go and each was a complete delight⭐️ very nice chapter...liked how ayesha understood both the brother's bond...and hehe jai coming to know about veesha's marriage that scene was cute too....veesha iss fic mein bahut romantic hai...love it...hospital corridor scene was the best😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ht312

Deepu, kya bolu dil khush ho gaya aaj...read all your fics at one go and each was a complete delight⭐️ very nice chapter...liked how ayesha understood both the brother's bond...and hehe jai coming to know about veesha's marriage that scene was cute too....veesha iss fic mein bahut romantic hai...love it...hospital corridor scene was the best😉



waiting for ur next update..........pz do it fast...😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey di, after trying so much also i culdnt get my sig n avi. Plzz help me na. Sorry for bugging yu. Gave yu a pm reg that. Plz check it !!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: CanadaKudi

Hey di, after trying so much also i culdnt get my sig n avi. Plzz help me na. Sorry for bugging yu. Gave yu a pm reg that. Plz check it !!


well, i have replied to you and now, it is working 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART TEN

Jai gets a shock when they call ayesha as mrs. veer vardhan singh, while veer blushes at that, since he was trying to find a way to reveal this to his brother and ayesha also blushes a little.

ayesha: yes. it's me.

nurse: mam. yeh discharge papers hai. in mein aap ki sign chahiye.

ayesha: thanks.

she passes the paper to veer and veer looks at her questioningly. she asks HIM to sign, since he is more closer to jai. she did not know why. but she wanted veer to sign the papers. she wanted the brothers to share the same bond, which they used to share years ago. veer signed the papers, with tears in his eyes.

jai: aap dono ? aap..

veer: haan bhaiyya.. hum ek doosre se bohot pyaar karte hai. aur hum dono ki shaadi kuch hi din pehle hui hai.. mein aap ko batane ki waala tha..

jai turns towards ayesha...

ayesha: haan jeej. mein bhi veer se pyaar karti hoon. bohot lambi kahani hai. ek din sunaoongi.

jai: hmm.. aap dono toh mere do jaan ho.. aur aap dono ko aise khush dekh kar mein bohot khush hoon.

veer / ayesha: thanks a lot bhaiyya / jeeju

jai: toh. kitne saal hua aap donon ki shaadi hoke ?

veer: saal. no no bhaiyya.. just a week ago..

jai: ohh. mom aur nandini.... woh dono kahan hai ?

ayesha: jeeju, woh kamini ji aa rahe hai US se... aur inhonne nandini ko phone kiya.

jai: mujhe ab unn logon ko bhi dekhne ka bohot mann kar raha hai.. nihal aa raha hai na..

veer: haan jai bhaiyya.. woh shayad abhi shuru hote honge mumbai se. raat taq pohonch jayenge..

ayesha: veer, tum jaake ek baar dekh lena.. ki gaadi aa gayi ya nahi.. mein packing karti hoon.. okay..

veer leaves while ayesha keeps packing all the stuff they bought at an instant for convenience. while she keeps working, jai asks her to come closer and talks something with her..

jai: ayu.. kya tum iss shadi se khush ho ?

ayesha: haan jeeju.. mein sach mein veer se bohot khush hoon.. usse bohot pyaar karti hoon.. issi liye maine usse hi shaadi kiya hai.. aur hamare beech mein koi problem nahi hai jeeju. aap phikar mat keejiye... sab kuch theek hai..

jai: aur kya maa aur nandini ne aap ke shaadi accept kiya ?

ayesha: jeeju, nandini ji se hum bohot din pehle alag ho gaye.. aur kamini ji US mein rehte hai. unhonne naa na bola na haan.. bass..unhonne kuch nahi kahan. veer ne mera saath diya.. jeeju, hum dono ek dusre ke bagair nahi jee sakte. aur hum ne shaadi kar liya.

jai: yeh sun kar mujhe bohot khushi ho rahi hai ayu.. pata nahi.. mujhe poochne ka mann kiya toh..

veer comes and they head back to their shimla home. ayesha does all the rasm and welcomes jai back to their home and asks him to take a nap for a while. both of them finally get back to their room and veer lies down on the bed, upside down, lazily.

ayesha also sits beside him and places a hand on his head and shoulder..

ayesha: kya hua ? thak gaye ?

he shifts his head onto her lap for some comfort and she starts massaging his head..

veer: hmm.. this feels better... how do you always know where i have the pain ?

ayesha: buddhu.. thats because.. i love you so much and i think i know enough about you..

veer: achcha.. toh aap mere baare mein aur kya jaante ayesha ji ?

ayesha: sachi bataoon ?

veer: jhoot mat bolna.. sirf sach.. mere baare mein joh bhi jaanti ho, jaldi batao..

ayesha: okay.. well, tum jab thak jaate ho, you will get severe body pains.. yeh ek.. and then.. hmm.. tum jaldi jealous ho jaate ho and you are very very pocessive.

veer: haan hoon.. ab bhi yahin kehta hoon.. tum MERI ho.. samjhi ?

ayesha: dekho.. jealousy ke wajah se tujhe bohot ghussa aata hai and you start shouting... aur haan. waise mein tumhe ghussa kuch jaldi hi aa jaati hai.. joh tumhare saath hai.. unko cautious rehna chahiye. kuch bhi ulta seedha baat karein, unki band baj jaayegi.. 😆

veer: achcha... hmmm.... aur..

ayesha: tum dikhte nahi ho lekin naughty ho.. har waqt romance hi romance soojta hai. mujhe tang karte ho.. but iss statement ke liye tum koi return comment nahi doge.. i know what will come up..

veer: OKAY !! 😡

ayesha: aur... hmm.... agar tum dinner nahi karoge, raat bhar tujhe neend nahi aayega..

veer: yeh tumhe haise pata ? yeh toh mera secret hai...

ayesha: dekhiye.. zara vistaar se suniye ji.. mein aapki biwi hoon...

veer: arey baba.. okay.. waise.. mere weak points tumhare saam ne kya chupana.. continue... now...

ayesha: aur.. tumhe chocolates passand hai.. and video games even... comics too...

veer: 😲 😆 this is fun.. aur kya investigate kiya mere baare mein.. bolo bolo..

ayesha: hmm.. tumhe tigers cute lagte hai...

veer: very good mrs. ayesha veer vardhan singh...

ayesha: tumhara favourite place paris hai... and favourite khaana.. actually, everything tasty.. but sab se special aloo ke paranthe, noodles, panneer, manchurian and italian pizza . haan.. gajar ka halwa, biryani and kheer..

veer: waah.. tere paas toh poore ke poore list hai..

ayesha: aur.. kya jaanti hoon tumhare baare mein.. (she keeps thinking)

veer: kyaaaaa.. bolo na.. kya soch rahi ho ?

ayesha: jab tum apne kapde utar te ho na.. ek buri aadat hai.. unhein zameer par phenk dete ho.. kabhi bhi bin mein nahi phenkte. aur jab tum kamre se bahar aate ho, saare lights, fan aur AC on rehte...

veer: sorry.. lekin kya karein.. adat ho gayi hai...

ayesha: its okay.. maine kahan complain kiya.. that is one of your aadat.. and yeah.. i know one more thing.. tumhe hockey and basket ball khelna bohot achcha lagta hai.. and tm apne school mein captain the.. basket ball team ki.. you hate waking up early in the mornings.. and you dont like gobhi at all. you hate makhan too.. and yeah.. kuch aur bhi hai mere paas..

veer: kya hai kya hai.. bolo na..

ayesha: hotel mein log tumhe, peeche se hitler bolte hai..

veer: maine bhi suna hai.. un logon ko toh maar daalna chahiye..

ayesha: bass.. itna hi.. agar kuch yaad aagayi toh boldoongi..

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PRECAP: the same as before.. kamini's entrance.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part dear...loved it....specially Ayu-jeej bond is too well shown. N veesha.....needless to say...was absolutely magical....awww...how shweet nnn cuteeee. Loved it in all....

I noe..even am supposed to update...but no ideas...!!!! Hope some great ideas strike me soon. 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
GREAT PART.plzzz try to update next part too.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice and naughty, great fun as usual😃 the nice part was jai-ayesha conversation....and the naughty part was veesha😉 good detectivegiri by ayesha.....that whole conversation was cute...

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