OS : Of Love and Everything Else ... - Page 3

Originally posted by: neiralove

Yeah...I'm kinda bad at saying no to that... 😆

Originally posted by: loveleen3

And the magic continues.. <3 N and R are together again. :D
You are superb, Rachna.
I love the importance you give to conversations in your stories. And then the happy endings that comes because of the conversations, makes me happy and content, and believe there is goodness left in this world. So happy to read this! :D

Originally posted by: hamna19khan

WOW, such an amazing OS, beautifully written, each and every emotion is described perfectly in short this is Great :)

It is no doubt very easy for them to confess their feelings if they try to, and once they start there is no way they'll stop :)

I just wish that they clear their misunderstandings as soon as possible and realize that they are meant for each other, their is nobody else who can compliment them the way they compliment each other.

This was such a delightful OS and I loved it completely...

Originally posted by: neiralove

Ok, I'm back. I needed to crawl out of bed and get to my laptop in order to do justice to this beautiful work of art (which, by the way, was the best thing to wake up to this morning). So, without further ado:

Her elbow nudged him out of his reverie, alerting him to the plates coming his way. He patiently dried and stacked each of the ceramic dishes, savoring the tantalizing brush of Ragini's fingertips against his own during each handoff. Occasionally she would glance his way, a subdued smile on her lips.

She has that effect on him, just her mere touch is enough to drive him crazy. And that's all he longs for with her, that touch.

I loved Ragini's whole turmoil about love--that was perfect. She has the answers to all her questions; it's just a matter of opening her up heart, finding those answers, and accepting them.

But I could not afford to make any more mistakes. This is our last chance Ragini. And if we mess this up, nothing is going to help us, not any more.

Thank you Nachiket, for finally understanding this fact. Because if he lets this slip away, she'll be gone forever and he will destroy himself and her.

That kiss in the end was beautiful. Very poignant and I loved how they took it slowly and gently. They've finally found their other halves and now they're whole again. And even though Ragini breaks down in the end, it's a happy sort of crying, one that leaves the reader with hope for their future together...

Thank you for crafting yet another phenomenal piece of writing, Rachna Di. I've read this three times already and now I'm going back to read it again, because it is just lovely. And you are even lovelier. ❤️

My wonderful little ball of magic! 😆

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Originally posted by: poetic

Shikha 🤗

Thank you so much for the detailed comments. I hope you have a great day today since you read this the first thing in the morning. 😆

And you should have ended with - My wonderful big ball of magic 😆 Naughty you.

Coming back to the comments, I am overwhelmed. I just wrote in the flow of the moment, whatever that came to my mind and whatever that seemed correct.

Actually, I could so see RR and PK in this scene. ❤️

Originally posted by: poetic

Aww sweetheart 🤗 It's a good thing actually to be kind. 😃

Originally posted by: neiralove

Aww thanks Di! It's been a productive day thus far, so that's always good. 😊

But you're my wonderful little ball of magic! 😆

And RR and PK would so nail this scene! If only...!

Well, that's why we have fan-fiction, right? 😉 😆