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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ronitfan
Well worth the wait, Narges dear!
Poori raat aur aadha dun rukaye rakha but this is gorgeous.. just brings out the many ways she's been missing him throughout the years.. the big things and the small- you captured the immensity of her feelings so well..

the white kurta <3
the cuddling when she wakes up <3
The kiss on the forehead <3

SO gorgeous the imagery is, here!!

Thank you thank you thank YOU!!!

*HUG*

:D

Sukhi! 😳

Yaar, again no idea what I did. This was pending kabse and I had to get it of my mind. His POV was so much easier for me. Of course, that white kurta had to be a part of this😳 Khair, you know it means a lot when you like it 😊

Hope you can live with this now for some time 😉 Don't stalk me anymore 😆

🤗

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: metoyou

Take your time, won't go anywhere :)

but trust me, I have already read it. It's so nice

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: poetic

but trust me, I have already read it. It's so nice

Come on Rachna, I wouldn't complain even if you hadn't read it. Thanks though 😊 Come back soon 😳

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shabana

@shabz50

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Loved it raginis emotions so beautifully written how she was feeling and how she missed him and what this marriage means to her and how it is in essece dragging the past up.

Loved it

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sushmaArshi

@sushmaArshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Wowww... I'm short of words...This one s just wowww... After reading first paragraph my respect , love towards Ragini doubled... U beautifuly described her character, emotions, feeling ...everything... I totally loved it...

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sushmaArshi
Wowww... I'm short of words...This one s just wowww... After reading first paragraph my respect , love towards Ragini doubled... U beautifuly described her character, emotions, feeling ...everything...I totally loved it...

Thanks a lot Sushma, glad you liked it! It has been a tough journey for Ragini and trust me it wasn't easy for me either to bring out her true emotions.
Thanks again!

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loveleen3

@loveleen3

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: metoyou

Please do come back haan :)

🤗

Narges, kitna tarsaya iske lie hamein! But its okay! Because you wrote Ragini's POV. 😳

This was everything that I have been wanting in the show. Ragini talking to herself. No kidding!

So much is happening around her that she really needs to take a moment and get a hang of the situation. Thank god she went to the balcony in here, at least. 😊

I loved the whole piece, but here are my favorite bits-

But somehow she would end up blaming them both; him for not giving her that one explanation and herself for...she didn't even know that, but still would blame herself for it too.

This shows how innocent she is.

This was the only time she would allow herself to cry it all out. No fake smiles, no fear of hurting people, just she and his memories.

This shows how vulnerable and alone she is.

It won't be easy for her, but she was ready to walk with him on this fragile path. Fate has brought them back together and she was ready to give it one more chance.

I am too scared to say anything about this. Just make sure your Nachiket doesn't hurt her now.

I'm good till 10:30 pm now. Thank you! 🤗