OS: Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa - Page 12

Originally posted by: metoyou

You should be jealous...so much attention from girls for only one person. Damn Sid...

As if a maalik doesn't need some care

Originally posted by: poetic

Narges, finally I have been able to read this in peace. Have read this twice before but not in peace, hence couldn't comment properly.

I must say that the deep undertones in this OS is amazing. There is so much happening over here, but in a very subdued and subtle manner. Hitting home some basic truths.

Like the momentary presence of happiness in Ragini's life, despite her struggles and endeavours

Like the truth about this contract marriage, which is neither a dream nor a nightmare for her - she just doesn't know what it is

Like the yearnings which she has for him, and the roles that she wants him to fulfil - not only that of a husband, but that of a Father, a Companion, a Lover.

And my favourite part when she slips back into his arms after realising that he was missing her there. These two are so attuned to each other, yet so clueless. Makes them so endearing. ❤️

Thank you so much for this. And the use of that song is just so perfect, just enough to weave patterns in the fabric of the story. 🤗

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

It's amazing right ❤️

Originally posted by: metoyou

Finally you are here...waiting kabse! To be honest, I didn't expect this kind of comment 😲

Matlab so many kind words and so detailed... it overwhelms me especially coming from you means A LOT! I was so unsure about it because Nachiket's POV was so much easier. Ragini is more complicated. But the way you pointed out certain things means somehow this was a good piece.

You are right that many things happen here at one time, but this woman has endured so many struggles and hurdles. Her whole life has been about fighting for what exactly? And now her time has come to embrace that fragile love once again and see how it will work out...

Seriously, I can't thank you enough for this amazing feedback.Trust me, again I will say, this means truly a lot to me. 🤗

Originally posted by: poetic

I upgraded to Mogwai No.1?! YAY! 😎

Ah yes Sunny Tai - sure will give it a try

Thanks once again 😳

Originally posted by: goldstar678

First of all really very very sorry for such late reply.

What an amazing OS Narges it is.I just loved the fact that someone really wrote this from her point of view which never happened in the show ever for a single episode out of 200 odd ones.Every character in the show from Neil,her kids,Pam,Fls played with her emotions not really trying to understand what a gem human being she is.i can still understand Ranbir being angry at her for obvious reasons,but her set of kids never understood their mom.What all she went through to provide them the best that she can all these years.Even after all this bitterness i last 18 years,one name which made a difference in her heart and soul is Nachiketh.Everyone walked on her as if its their right to hurt her.

Im really liking Ragini in the last two episodes where she is giving back to the Fls,but we all know this is happening because the show is ending.Repeating the same lines nth time but if we had some better writers and creatives,this show would have done wonders.

Thanks a lot for the OS and sorry again for the late reply.