FF Destiny Last Part on Pg 18 - Page 8

Originally posted by: shabz50

Right i will post but if it is not liked i will take it down

Ranbirs room
"Ragini but" "please nachiket just let him sleep a little longer" "ok fine i will see u later i am going to a meeting" " with sonu" "yes with sonu why is there a problem" "she is your PA why do u have to hug her?" "Are you jealous ragini" "no i am not" she went to go when he grabbed her hand and whispered in her ear "i love it when you get jealous" he then kissed her cheek and off he went. Ragini stood there smiling.

Evening
Ragini had made dinner she was on her own nachiket had gone out earlier and ranbir had followed when he woke up. She was setting the table when her mind wandered to this morning and the look in nachikets eyes and she felt guilty again was she being too harsh on him on their realtionship he had proved again and again he loved her and wanted to stay with her then what was stopping her from giving him the right to make love to her. She heard the door open they were home "hi mum something smells good" "go freshen up dinner is ready" "hi ragini" he walked upto and took her in a hug and kissed her he looked at the table "what was the need to do all this ragini you are suppose to be relaxing and resting" "i wanted to do it for you and ranbir now go freshen up and i will serve dinner". They were having dinner but ragini was very quiet nachiket noticed it she was worried about something he could tell.

Bedroom
Ragini was sitting on the bed she had got changed and was still thinking about this morning when nachiket came in. He went to the bathroom to change he came out and saw ragini wiping a tear away he sat next to her. "Whats wrong ragini you have been quiet all evening and now you are crying" "its nothing nachiket" "we said no secrets ragini now what is it please tell me what you don't like it here you miss the kids what ragini" "its not that nachiket its me i am sorry i" she stopped "sorry for what" she looked at him "sorry for making you wait all this time not giving u the right to" she stopped he looked at her "what make love to you" she looked at him and nodded "never say sorry to me for that never ragini i love you and yes i want to make love to you but you asked for time and i respect that and i will wait as longs as you want" "its not fair nachiket you have proven your love again and again for me and i can't give you this one right i am sacred nachiket its been so long since and i don't want to let you down" "ragini look at me" she looked at him "18 years i have waited so what is a few more months ragini but i want you to give me this right when you are ready not beacause you feel guilty and you can never let me down" "18 years there has been no one else nachiket" "no one ragini only you have this right no one else ever" " nachiket" he hugged her and kissed the top of her head "i am with you ragini forever ok" he broke the hug and looked at her "i will wait ragini i know how hard it is for you but never feel guilty and no more tears" They went to sleep in each others arms ragini thinking how lucky she was to have him as a husband.

Morning 7am
Ragini was making breakfast when she felt his arms around her waist "morning beautiful" "morning" he kissed her on her cheek "you ok this morning ragini" she leaned back into him "yes" "i meant every word i said last night" "i know you did do you want coffe" "yes please" he went and sat down she brought his coffee. "Where is ranbir" "he went out for run" "so what do u want do today" "do u not have meetings" "ranbir can handle them" just then ranbir walked in "handle what dad" "the meetings today" "why what you doing today" "i am spending the day with your mum today" "nachiket if you need to go then go we can spend the afternoon together" "its ok mum i will handle the meetings dad i will let you know tonight how they went" "ranbir have breakfast before you go" "i will grab something on the way" he was gone. "So what we doing today ragini" "can we go shopping we have to get the kids their presents" "ragini you know i hate shopping" "please we have to get kids their presents" "i will go shopping with u on one condition" "whats that nachiket".

wow. very nice. Last scene was very emotional and Ragini's love for Ranbir. All the parts are very nicely written. Thank u very much. waiting for next upadate.

Awww jealous Ragini! 😳 😆 I could totally imagine that scene!

Originally posted by: neiralove

Shabz! Don't you ever dare doubt your writing again! 😡 This was marvelous! 👏

Awww jealous Ragini! 😳 😆 I could totally imagine that scene!

And I thought her breaking down and feeling unsure about whether she can give him that same relationship that they had years ago is very natural. On one hand she is scared of not being able to cope with him leaving and thus doesn't want to commit too much as a defensive mechanism; on the other hand, she is afraid of not meeting his expectations as a wife and as a lover if she does open up her heart to him again. That bit was perfectly written! 😊

The kitchen scene was also beautiful; I'm sure Nachiket will ask for something naughty in return for going shopping with her! 😆

Thank you for writing and posting this so quickly! ❤️

Originally posted by: shabz50

Thank you for liking it i was trying to put that point across she is sacred that after 18 years she will not meet the expectations as a wife and lover and that if she makes him wait too long he will leave. And this time he does not ask for anything naughty sorry

Originally posted by: neiralove

Don't be sorry! It will be super sweet; please post soon! 😊

WOW Shabz!

Originally posted by: ronitfan

WOW Shabz!

This was so natural and so nice..

Can totally get Ragini's hesitance and her constant fight with herself to give in to Nachiket completely.. but she's so hurt by the past that she will take time..

Nachiket <3

So adorable for being the lovely guy that he is!

Really waiting for the next bit, Shabz!

Originally posted by: shabz50

Thank you yes she is sacred of letting him down and getting hurt. He just loves her