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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ronitfan


Too good too good.. warmed my heart 😳

I was not sure people would like to read something like this glad you and shikha liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shabz, update soon! I am loving how the story is progressing. :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: loveleen3

Shabz, update soon! I am loving how the story is progressing. :D


Thank you will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Thank you next update will be up tonight.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Shabz this is amazing👏
I read all the three chapters just now and I loved it😊

So Pam is the main reason for Ragini's letters being returned😡 And he actually didn't know she called him because of Pam😡 Seriously she is too much😡

I am glad he took her to the US😊 ha ha Ragini is jealous😆

I am glad he understood her when she doesn't let him make love... True love it is😳

Wonderful story Shabz😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Shabz this is amazing👏

I read all the three chapters just now and I loved it😊

So Pam is the main reason for Ragini's letters being returned😡 And he actually didn't know she called him because of Pam😡 Seriously she is too much😡

I am glad he took her to the US😊 ha ha Ragini is jealous😆

I am glad he understood her when she doesn't let him make love... True love it is😳

Wonderful story Shabz😊


Thank you for liking and yes ragini is jealous and its not that she doesn't let him she has just asked for time and feels guilty thinking she is making him wait too long. Next update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Part 9

Kitchen USA
"The condition is that you only shop for yourself no one else" "but the kids nachiket" "yes and we will get them presents but not today ragini" she looked at him "but why nachiket" "because you always think of everyone but yourself so promise me" "i promise nachiket can we go now" "yes let me get changed first" he went to get changed and his phone rang it was pam ringing ragini picked up the phone and took into the bedroom.

Bedroom
He was just putting his jacket on nachiket your phone is ringing he took the phone and looked at the name and ended it "nachiket why did you do that" "you are asking me that" she was standing in front of him she put her hands on his chest and said "ring her and speak to her she is your sister and you miss her and its hurting you" "ragini after everything she did and i am not hurting or missing her" "i know you nachiket and i can't see you hurting whatever she did she did raise our children" "i will ring her when we get back to india ok happy" "yes thank you" she turned to go when he grabbed her waist and pulled her in close "are you sure you want to go shopping" "yes my husband is spoiling me today" "is he? any reason" "no just because he loves me" nachiket smiled and kissed her on her lips "shall we go"

Car
Nachiket was driving ragini sat with her hand in his hand. "Where we going nachiket" "i don't know you wanted to come shopping" "you have lived here you should know the places" "yes mens clothes not womans" "nachiket" "ok ok lets see"

Shopping
He took her to bloomingdales and barneys she got some lovely bags and shoes he tried to get her to buy some dresses but she would not they been shopping for a few hours "ragini i am getting hungry now can we get some food then more shopping" "ok nachiket just one more shop then we will get food" "ok which one we going to now" "no i will go on my own you stay here please" "ragini why" "just please and can i have the card" nachiket gave her the card and saw her go up a floor and then he saw her walk into the lingere shop he just smiled to himself. She came back 15 mins later "what did you get ragini" "its a suprise".

Car
They were driving home when they stopped at the lights "nachiket is that Nobu's that famous resturant" "yes they do great food" "have you been" "yes" "can we go nachiket" "you should have told me before ragini they are booked weeks in advance" "oh it does not matter" they drove a little and nachiket stopped the car. "Ragini wait here i just have to get something i will not be long" he went out and he looked to make sure ragini was not watching and went into Harry Winstons shop "hi i am neil khanna i ordered a diamond necklace and earrings" yes mr khanna its ready who's the lucky girl? he smiled "my beautiful wife" thank you very much. He got back in the car and put the bag in glove compartment "what is that "its a suprise ragini" "let me see" "no let me see ur suprise then" "its ok i will wait" she turned he head she could feel herself blushing.

Home 6pm
Ragini and nachiket were home watching tv when ranbir came in "you ok beta"ragini asked "fine thanks" "dad i need to you to sign some contracts and look at some resumes" "ok give them here were the meetings ok" "yes dad boring but ok" ragini got up "where you going ragini" "i am going to start dinner" "can't we order food today" ranbir said "good idea ranbir" nachiket said.

Bedroom 10pm
Ragini got ready and was in bed when nachiket came in "ragini where is that red file" she sat up "its in that cupboard on the left" he got the file "thanks" "are you not coming to bed" he walked upto her and bent down and gave her a kiss "you go to sleep i will not be long just some contracts to finish" he went out. Ragini turned and she woke up and noticed nachiket had still not come to bed she looked at the time it 2.30am she got up and put her dressing gown on and went to see where he was.

Living room 2.30am
Nachiket was still sat going thru contracts. Ragini came and sat next to him "nachiket come to bed have you seen the time" "ragini i have just a bit more to finish"

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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Shabz! Shabz! Shabz!
You can not end the update here! Pleaseee! Update the next part already! :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Lovely update Shabz...
I love how he is spoiling her😳 And she is getting so much comforts after such a long time😳

Nachiket is angry with Pam? Rightfully so, she separated them

I hope he reconciles with her,,,

Oh and I loved the diamond necklace😊

Loved the update😊

Waiting for the next one
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Oh Wow shabz please update the next part soon please, ending the update here was not fair but not when you've done it so please update the next part soon... Will be waiting

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