TS: Almonds and Contentment and Bliss part 3 @ pg 5

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loveleen3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Awww Tiana! This was so sweet! <3 Thank you so much for writing this! :D

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TiaMaaaaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: shabz50
What a beautiful ending tiana finally they are together and he wants nivi out loved it. Thank you for writing it

Thanks Shabz🤗

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TiaMaaaaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: loveleen3
Awww Tiana! This was so sweet! <3 Thank you so much for writing this! :D

Thanks Loveleen🤗

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poetic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

I am in Dreamland

See, I was so right about this ... and YOU 🤗

Will respond in details ltr

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Mansur Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

At work...😕 will read it soon...

Thanks Tiana for extending this masterpiece...😳😃

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neiralove

@neiralove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Tiana, I just LOVED it! How could you ask if this is ok? It is most definitely NOT ok.

IT IS WONDERFUL!!! 😃

I loved the details in the effect that Nachiket still has on Ragini and the way he loves teasing more out of her. 😳 I had butterflies in my stomach when he leaned in so dangerously close to her--beautiful! Their conversation about themselves and Nivedita was handled really maturely too.

"When I came to know you hated almonds."

Awww! 😳

"Na..chi... ket... I..."

"How often have I told you not to say my name like that? You know it turns me on, don't you?"

Oh, she knows, that's why... ☺️ I have no words for how happy reading this scene made me!

Finally after years of suffering and loneliness, they were content in the bliss that Love gives freely to all true lovers.

A perfect ending to a perfect story! 👏

Seriously Tiana, I'm running out of words to describe your magic. It was just

Thank you dear, both for writing on my prompt and for extending this story!!! 🤗

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TiaMaaaaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Waiting for your comments @Rachna, Mansur and Shikha

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Vikram

@Vicky7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Read all the parts again.you are really one of the best writers in this forum.cheers.

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Vicky7
Read all the parts again.you are really one of the best writers in this forum.cheers.

Thanks Vicky... Though I really don't deserve that compliment... I still have to learn a lot in writing😊

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@metoyou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

DAMN IT...

I'm literally grinning like a teenage girl now and the entire species of butterflies in my stomach

Damn Tiana, what on earth did you do to me. Straight to heaven this is.

I have been a bit out of this NeiRa magic but this totally brought me back to it. This is a perfect end of a new beginning.

Yes, Nachiket always has this effect on her and they both know it too damn well. He was indeed dangerously close and if I were Ragini trust me, I would have attacked that man right there!

The little outburst in the car was much needed. Finally both vent out and said what they wanted.

The sea...of course. And how sweet of Nachiket to bring her there. This guy so wanted to reminisce their first kiss, naughty he is! 😉

But even Ragini was despo types here...and I don't blame her at all!

Ice cream can do wonders is liye I love it so much. Delicious it is! 😳

This was gorgeous and can bring anyone in the right mood to go in that advanced level 😉 Seriously, I am in love with them and your work ❤️ THANK YOU! 🤗

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