TS: Almonds and Contentment and Bliss part 3 @ pg 5 - Page 3

Oh God Tiana, this is so beautiful. Thank you so much Dear 🤗

Tiana this was very beautiful, as always...

I am a big fan of your writing, it's so easy to connect with it, you are an amazing writer and I love all of your FF's and OS's.

It feels so good to read an OS like this :)

Loved how he realizes what Ragini is going through and when asked for her day off, it was so pleasant :)

I am waiting desperately for the next update i hope you won't take long :)

Loved the update tiana. Nachiket realising his mistake and how much ragini works him asking for a day off for ragini was so sweet. Now nachiket is going to show her real contentment looking forward to the next update.

Tiana,

Originally posted by: neiralove

Tiana, first thank you so much for updating this story! 😊

Nachiket imagining Ragini's soothing touch after a tough day at work was just great! And the way he ends up calling her subconsciously was so Nachiket poking through the facade of Neil. I loved the way you tied in Aarav and Ragini's financial problems into that whole scene.

And then, coming back to the present...the way Nachiket just longs for a glimpse of her; even after they're married, he still pines for her. That was brilliant! 👏

Finally, the way he takes charge and gets her a day off, finds himself a job to aid with the household expenses, and buys her those almonds that she loves. The perfect way to tie the whole story together!

You are a gifted writer--very few can connect so many elements of a story so beautifully. Take a bow, you deserve it! 👏

P.S. You wrote this while working? How do you get the inspiration to write such beautiful pieces while working? Never mind how you do it--just as long as you keep writing! 😊

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Oh gosh Tiana..

This was sooo good! Just how well you tied in the whole almonds episode from the past to the present and also linked it back to the first part of your story.. lovely! The detailing in your writing always makes it so much more delicious, and so memorable.

Also really enjoyed reading those small vignettes from their past and Nachiket's sorry realization of how careless he has been in the current situation..

And now he's going to show her the meaning of true contentment? I'm already rubbing my palms in glee! :D

Super super job! Please write more soon!

Thanks for this update!

Originally posted by: poetic

Oh God Tiana, this is so beautiful. Thank you so much Dear 🤗

In fact, I was thinking of an update for this same piece today afternoon, and here it is.

I am so impressed by this Nachiket - the way he really did manage to understand eventually how difficult it must be for Ragini to run the family. Am double glad that he decided to make himself useful and go to work as well. Now, they could actually work together as a family and put things right.

And then the last dialogue - that is so Nachiket. ❤️

Ragini seems to be working double shifts as well to run the family - now that N is ready to take up his share os responsibilities, life may finally look up for them.

Originally posted by: hamna19khan

Tiana this was very beautiful, as always...

I am a big fan of your writing, it's so easy to connect with it, you are an amazing writer and I love all of your FF's and OS's.

It feels so good to read an OS like this :)

Loved how he realizes what Ragini is going through and when asked for her day off, it was so pleasant :)

I am waiting desperately for the next update i hope you won't take long :)

Originally posted by: shabz50

Loved the update tiana. Nachiket realising his mistake and how much ragini works him asking for a day off for ragini was so sweet. Now nachiket is going to show her real contentment looking forward to the next update.