TS: Almonds and Contentment and Bliss part 3 @ pg 5

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Hello all. I wrote this based on Shikha's prompt. As this became very long, I decided to post it as two shots. I hope you like it.

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TS: Almonds and Contentment and Bliss

Chapter One: Almonds

He stood looking at her busily checking her shopping list. She had forgotten something very important and he was waiting for her to exclaim in annoyance and turn to him and shout Why didn't you remind me?', but he was in for a shock.

"Yes, I guess that's everything. Let's go to the billing counter."

"But... But..."

"Yes, Nachiket. Is there anything else you need?"

"No... but aren't we forgetting something important?"

Ragini looked at him with irritation. He had been fidgeting ever since they started their grocery shopping and by experience she knew he badly wanted to ask her something and as usual expected her to know what he wanted. She had often wished that he would stop playing the stupid guess-what's-in-my-mind game, though she had never expressed it to him in words. Right now, all she wished was that she was the one playing the game and he was the one struggling for answers. She was usually very patient with him, but today after 14 hours of continuous work; she was certainly in no mood for this game.

"Nachiket, I checked the list twice and there is nothing missing."

"Oh really... Let ME check"

"Here... You are only wasting my time, Nachiket. Remember, I have to go back to the hospital."

"Well... I still say something's missing."

"Will you please stop talking in riddles and tell me what you want to say?"

"Why do you have to get so irritated?"

"You will too if you are running late and you are delayed because of some stupid riddle."

"Well who is asking you to go to work? Why don't you take leave?"

"That is none of your business... Now tell me what I forgot, quick."

"ALMONDS."

"Almonds? But... none of the kids asked me for that and you hate almonds right? Then for whom?"

"Ragini... It's for YOU. Have you forgotten how much you love almonds?"

...

"Ragini... Come on, it's time to go. How long will you stand here?"

"Nachiket... Aren't we forgetting something important?"

Nachiket looked carefully at his shopping list and looked back at her innocently.

"Umm... No."

"Nachiket... You do this every time."

"What do I do, Jaan?"

"Don't call me Jann."

"Okay, Baby."

"NACHIKET"

"Yes, sweetheart."

"I am not talking to you."

She left him in a huff and walked towards the car park. Nachiket looked at her retreating back and gave smiled. She looked so cute when she was angry. He knew the exact thing to do to soothe her anger. He walked to the nuts section.

As he walked to the parking lot carrying the shopping bags, he saw her leaning against their bike looking angry. He sighed and said to himself softly You have a tough job today, Nachiket.'

"Hi..."

"I said I am not talking to you."

"Really?"

"Yes"

"But you are already talking to me."

"Hmmmph"

"Okay, Okay... No more teasing... Here..."

"ALMONDS... Oh, Nachiket..."

"So am I forgiven now, my Queen?"

"NO"

"NO??? But..."

"You lied to me... You made me think that you forgot what I loved the most."

"Arrey Jaan, did you really think that I actually could forget anything about you?"

"Well... Not exactly... But you need to be punished for teasing me so bad."

"Okay... So, what is my punishment? Please don't say that you won't talk to me or something like that... I can't bear to live a single day without you."

She looked at him looking sadly at her and her heart melted. She did what her heart wanted her to do. She pulled him close to her and kissed him. He was surprised. Ragini was the one who hated any public display of affection and here she was kissing him on the parking lot. Some young boys saw them and whistled. He tried to pull away hearing that but Ragini only pulled him even closer and deepened the kiss. They slowly pulled away for air.

"Well... I MUST say that I LOVED the punishment."

"Shut up, Nachiket."

She playfully gave a punch on his chest and blushed. He smiled at her shy face and pulled her into a hug. As she stood engulfed in his warm hug, she felt contented.

...

She looked down quickly to hide the tears of joy that quickly formed in her eyes. She felt her knees go weak at the thought that he still remembered such a silly thing like what she loved to eat. She tried to speak but her voice came out in a whisper.

"So... You remember..."

"Of course, I remember, Ragini. How can I forget such an important thing? How do you expect me to forget all the time we went for shopping and I got scolded because I purposefully forgot to add Almonds in our shopping list? And the Punish... Err... Ummm... Now before you start scolding me again, I'll run to the nuts section and get a pack of Almonds... How much do you want? Half a kilo or one kilo?"

"NACHIKET... No... uh... I hate almonds."

"But, Ragini... You used to love it so much..."

"Exactly! I USED TO."

"Come on Ragini, you just can't hate something you once loved so much."

"Of course, you can..."

"B..but..."

"Nachiket... Sometimes, we learn to hate something we love for the sake of pseudo-contentment."

"Pseudo-contentment??"

"That is the false feeling that you have EVERYTHING when you actually have NOTHING."

He stood as if rooted on the spot as she moved quickly towards the billing counter thinking what on earth she meant when she said that she had NOTHING? He just couldn't get it. He had always thought that she had managed pretty well on her own. Although he knew from Aarav's never-ending grumbles that she was a little stingy, he had never had stopped to think why. But today was different. As he watched her take out her little purse from the bag and count the money again and again as if to make sure it was all there, a ton of memories flooded his mind and he did what he had not done for a very long time. He tried to understand what she might have gone through without him and what she was going through right now.

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Chapter 2: Contentment

Chapter 3: Bliss

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Too beautiful. Will come back soon
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AWWW!!!
That was so simple and poignant .. yet so them! Awww.. how complex they'e become.. from the silly stupid lovers with their sweet nothings to broken flawed human beings with their jagged edges..

Oh, can't wait for the next bit Tiana..this was really lovely!!

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Thank you so much Tiana for writing on my prompt! 🤗 This was gorgeous and I will be back soon with comments! Hugs! ❤️
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I loved it! Amazing! <3 Complete justice to the prompt! Waiting for the next part.
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Loved it tiana just beautiful they have gone from carefree lovers to a couple who can't even say what they truely feel loved it
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Ok, I'm back! First a BIG THANK YOU to you, Tiana, for taking up this prompt! 🤗 It was even better than what I had imagined! 😃

I liked how Ragini was dancing around the issue the whole time; it was very much in character for her--always prioritizing the happiness of others over her own. I absolutely ADORED the flashback, especially Ragini's punishment! 😳 😆 If this is her punishment, I can't wait to see how she says thank you! 😉

And the ending was brilliant: the idea of psuedo-contentment and Nachiket trying to put himself in her shoes. Just spectacular! 👏 I can't wait to see what comes next and how he deals with the situation; please post the second part soon!
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Tiana,
This was awesome...these are such serious issues that they need to address in order for them to truly be able to move forward together. It's the little details in this - her love of almonds, his memory of her likes and dislikes, that make it great.

I am looking forward to more after Nachiket's realization!
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Loved it.
It was difficult for Ragini to manage the family in her limited income. But she did her best within her resources. It is easy for Nachiket, Arav, Nishi or everyone else to point that she is stingy with money but they should understand that if she has asked them to let go of some luxuries then she herself had let go more than anyone else. All these years her income was utilized to provide basic necessities for their living and securing their future. She has fulfilled all their requirements. Both her kids are having cell phones. They have laptop for their studies. For many families these are also luxuries. Just because you are not ready to waste your hard earned money on frivolous things doesn't makes you stingy. More than anyone else atleast her kids should understand this. Unfortunately, those two are the biggest failures. Arav is completely money minded and Nishi cares only about herself.
Ragini is content because she knows this is what all she can afford. The term pseudo-contentment fits her situation perfectly. She has learned to modify her tastes according to necessity.
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Originally posted by: poetic

Too beautiful. Will come back soon


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