OS: Ive Been Waiting For You - Page 3

Originally posted by: shabz50

Loved this how much they care for each other and ragini making the first move loved it

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Tiana,

This was beautiful in how it illustrated their relationship gradually strengthening as they learned to love each other again.

The ending was of course fantastic (passionate Ragini is my favorite! 😳) but this part went straight to my heart:

"Ragini, I am safe... Look... I am perfectly fine. How can I not come back, when I knew you were waiting for me?"

She looked at him looking at her with concern and fell in love again. He was right, he belonged solely to her and she would let no harm touch him until she was alive. As she kept looking into his eyes, he bent down and gave her a light peck on the forehead making her heart flutter.

"I am sorry for the tears, Ragini."

Just...gorgeous. How their hearts are calling out to each other and that concern for each other that will never go away 😭 Beautiful ❤️

Thank you for this Tiana! If only the show had your understanding of these characters.

Originally posted by: Santosh1999

@tiana, Loved it. I so like when you come up with such stuff. I listened to that song just now, for the first time it's a beautiful song and beautiful OS! 😊

Originally posted by: loveleen3

I read it again. <3 I am so glad it was Ragini who took the lead! But more than that, I am glad she wanted to take the lead. <3 <3
Beautiful, Tiana! :D

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Tianaaa

We want more <3

Originally posted by: metoyou

Oh dear Tiana!

What are you doing to me girl! Sweet Lord this is WOW!

Every time you come up with such magical stuff that I am not even able to express myself properly. Matlab, how do I even praise you for this?!

I so so so liked Ragini's feelings here; she desired him, longed for him, wanted him. I so so so loved the way she broke the barriers at the end. To hell with his commitments indeed! He was hers and she was his, that is the ONLY thing that matters!

This piece is pure beauty... 👏

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

More???😲😲😲

Originally posted by: neiralove

Yes, more and more and more! 😳

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

What a lovely long comment😳... I loved it😃

And that part was the part that took me the longest to write... because that came out unplanned😊

I really didn't think that was good...😊

Once again a big THANK YOU for this comment😳

This is beautiful.
The care & concern. The love <3 <3
Liked how you used different situations to highlight those. And the attraction & longing.
And then their reality check.
& what a perfect ending.
Natural & really nice.

Thanks!