OS: Ive Been Waiting For You

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Tiana,

This was beautiful in how it illustrated their relationship gradually strengthening as they learned to love each other again.

The ending was of course fantastic (passionate Ragini is my favorite! 😳) but this part went straight to my heart:

"Ragini, I am safe... Look... I am perfectly fine. How can I not come back, when I knew you were waiting for me?"

She looked at him looking at her with concern and fell in love again. He was right, he belonged solely to her and she would let no harm touch him until she was alive. As she kept looking into his eyes, he bent down and gave her a light peck on the forehead making her heart flutter.

"I am sorry for the tears, Ragini."

Just...gorgeous. How their hearts are calling out to each other and that concern for each other that will never go away 😭 Beautiful ❤️

Thank you for this Tiana! If only the show had your understanding of these characters.

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Santosh

@Santosh99

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

@tiana, Loved it. I so like when you come up with such stuff. I listened to that song just now, for the first time it's a beautiful song and beautiful OS! 😊

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loveleen3

@loveleen3

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

I read it again. <3 I am so glad it was Ragini who took the lead! But more than that, I am glad she wanted to take the lead. <3 <3
Beautiful, Tiana! :D

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Oh dear Tiana!

What are you doing to me girl! Sweet Lord this is WOW!

Every time you come up with such magical stuff that I am not even able to express myself properly. Matlab, how do I even praise you for this?!

I so so so liked Ragini's feelings here; she desired him, longed for him, wanted him. I so so so loved the way she broke the barriers at the end. To hell with his commitments indeed! He was hers and she was his, that is the ONLY thing that matters!

This piece is pure beauty... 👏

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: loveleen3
Tiana,
Amazing! Amazing! Amazing! <3 <3

Thank You😃

Glad you enjoyed it😃

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ronitfan
This is me, LITERALLY!!!

These vignettes and moments were oh so beautiful..
And really, they just adore each other.. if only the other knew the sort of devotion they have for each other <3 Awww! This really warmed my heart, Tiana! So lovely and so natural..

Loved Ragini's go-getter attitude at the end... you rock, woman! <3

Aww... Thanks😳 They really do adore each other...😳

I loved the gif😳

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: poetic
Thanks Tiana, this is nice 👏 And the song by ABBA has been well used.
Glad to see finally Nishi and Jignesh deciding to come back together now that happiness is going to invade their lives. 😃

Thank you.

And thank you for reading😃

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl
WOW, WOW, WOW!! 😃😃😳

I loved your selection of the song and everything in between. 😃 Beautiful! I actually have no words. I loved it. Ragini losing her self-control and how her tears when she hears about the accident. That was beautiful, the whole scene.
And the end wala scene. Way to go Ragini

Thank you Tiana for writing this! 🤗

And thank you for such a lovely comment😳

Sooo glad you liked it😃

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Aww... Thanks😳 They really do adore each other...😳

I loved the gif😳

Pleasure 😳😳

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: neiralove
Tiana! 🤗 First, don't apologize--it takes a bit of time to create this level of magic! 😉

It's totally the little things that count in their relationship and I loved how you captured that essential piece here. 😊 I loved that glimpse of his back, the way he sensed her headache, and how all her love came flooding out when he walked through the front door unscathed. 😳

And the ending was marvelous--finally Ragini takes the initiative! Absolutely beautiful--thank you so much for this dear ❤️

Awww... Thanks😳

Thank you so much for reading😃

Glad you liked it Shikha😳

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