OS: Her Back - Page 6

Originally posted by: Santosh1999

It's just too beautiful and perfectly written! 😊

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

This was superb😳

What a sweet OS😳

I loved it😳

And the part I loved the most was how they became lost souls that night... So true... When they are together they are seriously lost 😳

And the pallu scene was☺️

Loved it Shikha... Do write more and more and more and more😉 In short I would love to read whatever you write

Originally posted by: neiralove

And "hard times" will definitely trouble Mr. Khanna!🤣☺️

We just have to wait to see if Ragini decides to do something about it😉

Originally posted by: neiralove

Thank you so much Tiana! 😊

That last line was tough to write--I couldn't quite get the words to string together in the right way and I wasn't sure how successful it would be in concluding the piece, so I'm really happy that you liked it! 😳

Speaking of writing, when is your next piece coming up? 😉

Originally posted by: metoyou

What can Mrs. Khanna do about it 😉

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

I was asking about your piece and you are asking me???😲

Anyway... my next piece is under construction... I will post it tonight or tomorrow...

And it is inspired by Nachiket taking the paan😉... I so loved it😆

Originally posted by: neiralove

But I just wrote! 😲

Oooh, I can't wait to see what magic you cook up with that--post soon! 😊

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

It's not very good😆 Don't keep your expectations high...

And about your writing... I will be happy to get a new piece from you each day... So think fast girl... And post a new work soon😉