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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: neiralove

Now, I can't say things like that publicly, can I?!😳
At least now they're married, so she has a right to do something about his little "problem"😉

Not here but everything is fair behind closed doors 😉

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Ragini Joshi

@RaginiJoshi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: neiralove

Ragini, take your time dear! You focus on writing that OS--I'm waiting 😉

And your siggy! Did you make it?!

And what were you seeing don't kill me and all? Of course I'll kill you! Look what you've done to me. You make me read your piece at least twice every time. Kitna time waste hota hai mera! Itna investment kaise afford karungi? Yes I'll kill you, you just wait 😆

I'm also writing yes, Wait :D And siggy credit goes to Nishant from Twitter.

Edited by RaginiJoshi - 10 years ago

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi
OMG Shikha
Girl! What have you done?😳 This was so lovely. I'm still lost in the magic happened to me just now

So many magicians here Beautiful beautiful! Loved the way Ragini was thinking! "To hell if this isn't right" Loved that!!!😆

Wow! Awesome! Majestic Shikha❤️

Ragini! Thanks for reading and liking it dear! ❤️

Yes, you're right, so many wonderful magicians here, but I, unlike you, am not in that category 😆

I love that line too! That was as close as I could get to her swearing without it seeming way too out of character 😳 😆

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: metoyou

Not here but everything is fair behind closed doors 😉

I just want to see them the morning after! 😳

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

And what were you seeing don't kill me and all? Of course I'll kill you! Look what you've done to me. You make me read your piece at least twice every time. Kitna time waste hota hai mera! Itna investment kaise afford karungi? Yes I'll kill you, you just wait 😆

I'm also writing yes, Wait :D And siggy credit goes to Nishant from Twitter.

What?! I didn't force you to read it! 😲 And I definitely didn't ask you to read it twice! 😆

Although, I'm ok with you killing me with that OS 😉 Nachi baby has already done half your job 😳 ❤️

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Shikha...

This was absolutely gorgeous...you so perfectly captured the tension and the longing in that moment for both of them. It would have been so natural for them to do exactly this, somehow delicate and raw and powerful simultaneously.

I've already read it a few times but may revisit before bed for some beautiful dreams 😳

Fantastic, thank you!! 👏

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: ShyNomad
Shikha...

This was absolutely gorgeous...you so perfectly captured the tension and the longing in that moment for both of them. It would have been so natural for them to do exactly this, somehow delicate and raw and powerful simultaneously.

I've already read it a few times but may revisit before bed for some beautiful dreams 😳

Fantastic, thank you!! 👏

Oh gosh Nidhi, I'm blushing so hard right now! 😳 Thank you dear for the lovely comment! 🤗

I think it would have been much nicer if that palaang todh paan had resulted in something sweet and simple instead of the jhadoo scene; just my two cents. 😊 Awww, this as a bedtime story; that's so sweet of you! 😳

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Shikha!

This is me and my heart after reading this -

So beautiful and gorgeous.. the imagery around her back.. I am sure it does so many things to him and reminds him of all things beautiful - you captured the urgency of that touch and romance so damn well!!

Thanks a lot for writing this.. this was really really dreamy <3

Edited by ronitfan - 10 years ago

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: ronitfan
Shikha!
This is me and my heart after reading this -

So beautiful and gorgeous.. the imagery around her back.. I am sure it does so many things to him and reminds him of all things beautiful - you captured the urgency of that touch and romance so damn well!!

Thanks a lot for writing this.. this was really really dreamy <3

Sukhi Di, thank you so much for reading this and liking it! 🤗 ❤️ And that gif is so great! 😆

I wonder how long they'll be able to control themselves--I can't wait for one to just be brought over the edge 😳

Edited by neiralove - 10 years ago