OS: Because being together is enough - Page 3

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

This was a sweet OS😳 The first part made me smile😃And the second part made me emotional😳

The children were super cute😳

Nachiket: Macchar Maar Rahe The.. Bohot Macchar Haina Iss Ghar Mai Toh Wahi Maar Rahe. Saale Maccharo Ne Naak Maid Um Kar Dia Hai (He Glanced At Ragini) Haina Ragini?

Ragini Was Surprised That Nachiket Just Called Her A Mosquito! She replied Haan Bacchjo, Hum Macchar Maar Rahe The. Mote Mote Macchar Jo Sirf Pareshaan Karna Jaante Hai with a Sparkle & lurking Anger in Her Eyes (She Looked at Him)

Mosquito?😆😆This was funny😆😆

The letter was very sad. Made me feel very bad for her😔This was my Favourite line in the letter. Made me feel her pain😭

Kis Kis Chiz K Liye Rou, Kaise React Karu. Mere Bacche Mere Saath Nahi The, Tum Bhi Nahi The.

He Promised himself that he will not To Leave Her At Any Cost and Decided to End This Contract Marriage Drama as He Knew She Only Belongs to Him.

So true. He loves her a lot😳

Loved the OS😳Sooo sweet😳

Originally posted by: shabz50

Loved the update even when they fight they are cute and the kids so funny and the last bit sooo emotional loved the letter and she kept everything awww

Originally posted by: poetic

Zainab,

This OS is so heart warming, simple and sober. It has all the right ingredients that would make any read a success - humour, nostalgia, emotions, and pain. 👍🏼

I liked how the kids were so concerned about what happened inside the room, once the lamp fell and broke, and the noise could be heard outside. It was funny.

Then, I really liked what Nachiket discovered inside the drawer - Ragini's prized personal possessions, and of course, finally the letter.

That was elegantly done.

Thanks a lot for the OS. 😃

Originally posted by: MAK56

Flame on Zainwaa😆😆

Super Zainwaa k super super OS👏👏

Feedback Time:

They were now on a struggling path full of Terms and Conditions called Life. Nachiket and Ragini Had Total Different Lives with unrelated Thoughts. Their World, Their Nature, Their Perspective way Of Living Life Was Very Different, But They had a thing *their Heart* beating for the opposite person. Both Were Expert into reshaping their faces with a Fake Smile in Front of Others.

Super Explanation given of Neira's lives😃😃... Wah wah😆😆😆

Nachiket Sitting On The Bed With A Mug Of Black Coffee In His Hand says, " Puri Duniya K Samne Tu Meri Patni Ho, Par Mai Tumhe Apni Patni Nahi Manunga''

Ragini while keeping her Saree In her divided Cupboard raising Her Right Eyebrow in the direction of Nachiket with an appropriate reply, "Mujhe Bhi Koi Shauk Nai Hai Tumhare Saath Pati-Pati Khelne Ka"

I so loved this Eyebrow raising moment of Ragini😛... Can we get to see this in show😊

Nachiket: Jab Tak Tum Shani Banke Mere Sir Pe Sawaar Ho, Kuch Accha Hona Na Mumkin Hai

Only R.R can perfect this dhaasu dialogue😆😆

Kids were so awesome as they interrupted at the right moments😆😆😆

They Both Were Siting Ignoring Each Other. Nachiket Went To Washroom To Change And Ragini Was Cleaning The Cupboard As It Was Too Messed Up. Nachiket Came Out Of The Washroom to face a Firing a Taunt from Ragini For Being So Messy. Ragini was stunned like she used to be in past as Nachiket Was Shirtless. He Came Too Close To Ragini, Very Close to her comfort. She Started Shivering and gazed her eyes down, Nachiket Stepped Back in Hesitation. But Ragini Was Gazing At Him.

Perfect Neira romantic moment. Superb👏👏👏

Nachiket while Covering His chest with both Hands says "Stop Staring Ragini, Mujhe Sharam Aa Rahi Hai😆

Ragini: Nachiket Jab Tum Shirtless Bahar Aaa rahee Tab Tumhe Sharam Nai Aayi.😆😆😆

Nachiket Digged Inside Her Desk. It Had His Pics, Button Of His Shirt, Cds With Their Recordings, Every Single Gift Nachiket Gave Her From Start To End. Even Roses, Ice Cream Sticks and Movie Tickets. Everything Was Kept Inside With Lot Of Love And Care. He Was Able To Recall All Those Days. He Never Knew Ragini Could Do Something Like This. He Thought She might have thrown away things that may have reminded her about their love & memories Long Back, But He Was Wrong.

NB Should learn😡 something from this moment😆😆. Kaash it was shown in the show. Awesomely scripted Zain👏👏

The most important part... The Letter written by Ragini to Nachiket. Wah hila diya Zain👏👏

Dear Nachiket,

Pata Hai Yeh Meri Zindagi Ka Sabse Bure Din Hai, Worst Days of My Life. Ab Mera Bacche (Aarav, Suhani, Ranvir Aur Aagam) Mujhse Dur Hogaye, Tum Mujhse Dur Hogaye Nachiket. Why Did You Do This To Me. Kyu Kiya Aisa Nachiket? Jeete Ji He Maar Diya Mujhe. Tumne Toh Mujhse Promise Kiya Tha Na Ki Mujhe Kabhi Chorr K Nahi Jaoge, Toh Tumhare Uss Promise Ka Kya Hua Nachiket. Kyu Chorr K Chale Gaye Apni Ragini Ko? Kya Mai Itni Buri Hu? Manaa Ki Maine Kaha Tha Chale Jao Aur Gussa Bhi Hui Thi Tumse, Par Maine Kabhi Yeh Nahi Socha Tha Ki Tum Chale He Jaoge. Tumne Mujhse Promise Kiya Tha Ki Mere Saath Rahoge, Mujhe Rone Nahi Doge, Mujhse Kabhi Jhut Nahi Kahoge... Par Tumne Toh Mujhe Todd He Diya Nachiket.

Standing ovation to you👏👏

So wanted to quote more, but kuch zyada ho jayega😆😆😆

You have superbly nailed that Letter written by Ragini. Expressing her situation, her mood to her x-hubby. It was full on Emotion, Expression of Love, her mistakes, her naraazgi & so on...

I am so Emotinal now... Off i go for a face wash. *Kidding*😆😆😆

Totally loved this OS Zainwaa.

I must repeat this NB ko hatao & my fav IF Star writer Zain ko lao on board😛😛

Keep writing😊

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Zainab!

❤️

This was absolutely lovely!

The prompt was used so well.. I am sure Pavan aka Goldstar will be super thrilled to read this and see the prompt being transformed into something so magical!

Smiling so widely after reading it .. him finally finding out what she was hiding.. lovely!

Keep writing, dear! :)

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome.