OS: Because being together is enough

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Hello Guys,

I'm Back With My New Os. Do Read It Please And Ignore The Flaws

Dedicated To - #SanamAppi #Makwaa #Hamna #Nayyu #Poojee #Simi

Thankyou Guys For Your Support And Love.


Thanks alott @goldstar 😊



OS: Because Being Together Is Enough


One Week after Their Marriage - At 12:00 Am

It Was a Quiet Night at Patel's House. Ragini And Nachiket Were Locked In Their Bedroom. They Were Feeling like Throwing up the awful thought of being together. They knew that they hated Each Other to Extreme Extent, But They Never Realize They Love Each Other to the Extreme too.

They were now on a struggling path full of Terms and Conditions called Life. Nachiket and Ragini Had Total Different Lives with unrelated Thoughts. Their World, Their Nature, Their Perspective way Of Living Life Was Very Different, But They had a thing *their Heart* beating for the opposite person. Both Were Expert into reshaping their faces with a Fake Smile in Front of Others.

Nachiket Married Ragini in order to save Nishii's Marriage & he wanted To Suck Out The hatred that Ranvir Had for His Mother. Whereas Ragini married her ex-husband for The Sake of Nishi and Aarav. People Created So Many Misunderstandings between Them so that they started Hating Each Other even thought their hearts were totally made for each other!

Nachiket Sitting On The Bed With A Mug Of Black Coffee In His Hand says, " Puri Duniya K Samne Tu Meri Patni Ho, Par Mai Tumhe Apni Patni Nahi Manunga''

Ragini while keeping her Saree In her divided Cupboard raising Her Right Eyebrow in the direction of Nachiket with an appropriate reply, "Mujhe Bhi Koi Shauk Nai Hai Tumhare Saath Pati-Pati Khelne Ka"

It Was 12:30 And They Still Kept Quarrelling, Fighting On Small Issues. They Tried To Control Their Volumes while Arguing, So That No One get what they are upto. But It Was Impossible for them or might be anyone To Stop Their World War 3,4,5,6,7 with an Infinity or Beyond. While keeping up the tempo of who Raises Their sound box *Voice* much better On Each Other Between, Nachiket Breaks The Side Lamp with His Hands Mistakenly. They Were Looking At Each Other and Silently Playing Blame Game

And There Was A Knock At The Door.

Suhani: Dad? Mom?

Nachiket: Lagta Hai Suhani Ki Neend Khul Gayi Tumhari Aawaz Se

Ragini: Meri Aawaz Se? Sab Tumhari Galti Hai, Bass Jaha Jaate Ho Lardte Ho Aur Meri Chize Torte Rehte Ho

Nachiket: Galti Se Haath Lag Gaya Tha Ragini, Jaan K Nai Toda Maine

Ragini: Tumhari Life Mai Sahi Bhi Kuch Hota Hai Ya Nahi

Nachiket: Jab Tak Tum Shani Banke Mere Sir Pe Sawaar Ho, Kuch Accha Hona Na Mumkin Hai

And They Hear Aagam's Voice

Aagam: Dono Zinda Toh Hona

Nachiket: Dekha Ab Aagam Bhi Jag Gaya

Ragini: Nai Mujhe Sirf Sunai Diya Hai. Huhh,Waise Sab Tumhari Galti He Hai.

Nachiket: Bass ...Taali Ek Haath Se Nai Bajti

Ragini: Mujhe Bhi Pata Hai, Dono Hatho Se Baja Lo Phir. Bhagwan Ne Do Haath Diye Haina tumhe.

And Then Nishii's Voice

Nishii: Yeh Kaisa Sawaaal Hai Aagam. Shutup

Ragini: Lo Ab Nishi Bhi Aagyi. Pure Moholle Ko Utha Diya Tumne

Nachiket: Haan Haan Mai He Toh Sab Galat Karta Hu

And Then Aarav's Voice Too

That Was The Point Where They Start Laughing Hard.

Aarav: Dekh Le Kahi Maa Ne Papa Ko Kuch Kar Toh Nai Dia

Nachiket: Bass Zyaada Nai Hogya kyaaa (he was laughing)

Ragini: Nachikett !! And She Couldn't Control Her Laugh

Nachiket: Aur Koi Bachaa Hai. Saare Bacche He Jag Gaye Hai

And Then Ranvir's Voice Too

Ranvir: Chup Rahoge Tum Dono @ Aagam And Aarav

Ragini Was Unable To Control Her Laugh, She Caught Hold Of His Collar And Buried Her Head On His Chest And Started Laughing Hard. Nachiket Laughed Along With Her.

Kids Could Hear Their Laughter And Were Suprised

Nishii: Maa? Aap Thik Toh Haina.

Aagam: Hain? Yeh Kya Ho Raha Hai

All Were Confused, They Thought That Neira Were Again Into a Fight. But both Laughing Together Was A Surprise & a big Shock For Them

Nachiket Open The Door And was Surprised To See All his Five Kiddos Were Waiting For for their Parents Outside With 1000 Questions In Their Mind with a staring face

Aagam: Yeh Kya Ho Raha Tha Andar?

Suhani: Haan haan batao?

Nishii: Chal Kya Raha Hai Maa-Papa

Aarav: All You Alright Dad?

Ranvir: Dono Thik Hona?

All Of Them Questioned

Nachiket: Hogya Tum Sab Ka Sawaal Puch Ke?

Maine Sabke Sawaal Likh Liye Hai...Ab Sojao Jaake.. Mujhe Neend Aa Ri Hai. Mai Kal Sabko Jawab Dunga Ok.

Ragini: Sojao Baccho (She Repeated)

Nachiket: Jao Abb Aise Ghuro Mat Hume

Aagam: Jaane Bina Toh Hum Nai Jayenge

Suhani: Haa Bataye Dad And Mom

They Had Nothing To explain as They Were Confused On What Excuse They Should or can Make. They Were Trying To Hide the Well Known Fact That They Were arguing With Each Other

Nishi: Itna Kya Soch Rahe Ho Papa, Boliye Na

Aagam: Mom Aap Boliye

Ragini: Woh Hum...

Nachiket: Macchar Maar Rahe The.. Bohot Macchar Haina Iss Ghar Mai Toh Wahi Maar Rahe. Saale Maccharo Ne Naak Maid Um Kar Dia Hai (He Glanced At Ragini) Haina Ragini?

Ragini Was Surprised That Nachiket Just Called Her A Mosquito! She replied Haan Bacchjo, Hum Macchar Maar Rahe The. Mote Mote Macchar Jo Sirf Pareshaan Karna Jaante Hai with a Sparkle & lurking Anger in Her Eyes (She Looked at Him)

Ranvir: Aur Woh Aawaz? Kuch Girne Ki

Nachiket: Woh.. Acccha Who...Awaaz Aaa

Aarav: Haan Woh Kya Tha Dad

Nachiket: Who Toh Macchar Marte Marte Ragini K Haath Se Side Lamp Gir Gaya Tha

Ragini Was Now in a Weird Situation as smart mind Nachiket Blamed Her for Everything. She Gave Nachiket You So Dead hubby' Look

Ragini: Mujhse? (Raises Her Eyebrow)

Nachiket: Haaan Ragini.. Batao Baccho Ko. Galti Se Gir Gaya Tha

Ragini: Haan Wahi Jo Nachiket Ne Kaha

Nachiket: Okay Ab Sun Liya Naaa, Jao Jaake Sojao

They Said Ok and Bid Goodnight to their Parents

Back To Their Bedroom

They Both Were Siting Ignoring Each Other. Nachiket Went To Washroom To Change And Ragini Was Cleaning The Cupboard As It Was Too Messed Up. Nachiket Came Out Of The Washroom to face a Firing a Taunt from Ragini For Being So Messy. Ragini was stunned like she used to be in past as Nachiket Was Shirtless. He Came Too Close To Ragini, Very Close to her comfort. She Started Shivering and gazed her eyes down, Nachiket Stepped Back in Hesitation. But Ragini Was Gazing At Him.

Nachiket while Covering His chest with both Hands says "Stop Staring Ragini, Mujhe Sharam Aa Rahi Hai

Ragini: Nachiket Jab Tum Shirtless Bahar Aaa rahee Tab Tumhe Sharam Nai Aayi.

Nachiket: Mai Sirf Mera Dermi Cool Powder Lene Aaya Th, Uske Bina Neend Nai Aati Mujhe. Batao Kaha Rakha Hai

Ragini: Mujhe Kya Pata Nahiket. Tumahre Samaan Ki Rakhwaali thodi Karti Hu Mein.

Nachiket: Help Nai Kar Sakti Ho Toh Taunt Mat Maaro, Mai khud hi Dhund Lunga

He Searched for the Powder In Their Cupboard, In His Bag, On The Table only to Find It Nowhere. He Opens The Draw that Ragini Warned Him Not To look at.

Ragini: Nachiket Maine Kaha Na Yeh Mera Personal Desk Hai, Isme Mere Personal Samaan Hai. Please Usse Haath Mat Lagao

Nachiket: Aise Kya Personal Hai Isme.. Mai Bhi Toh Jaanu

Ragini: Tumhe Isse Koi Matlab Nai Hona Chahiye

Nachiket: Mai Tumahra Pati Hu, Tumhari Har Chiz Pe, Mera Hak Hai. Samjhi

Ragini: Yeh Sirf Ek Contract Marriage Hai.. Yaad Haina

Nacjikrt; Contract Marriage Hai Toh Kya, Tumhara Pati bana hun.. Dekhne Do.. Hato Side Mai

Ragini: Nachiket Plz

Nachiket: Ragini Tum Hat Jao Nai Toh Mai Tumhe Hug Kar Lunga

Ragini: Nachiket Tum Aise Nai Kar Sakte Ho

He Was Too Curious To Know What Soo Personal In That Desk Was, That Ragini Never Allowed Anyone To look into or Touch It. He Was Ready To Do Anything Just To Check What Was There In That Desk. He Gave Her a Look That He Would Open It By Any Chance. Ragini intervenes again to have her Hand.

Ragini: Jo Karna Hai Karo, Mai Sone Jaa Rahi Hu

She Just Wanted To Ignore This Awkward Situation, Those Eyelocks And His Touch. She Never Wanted Anyone To See Those Things And Specially Nachiket.

Nachiket Digged Inside Her Desk. It Had His Pics, Button Of His Shirt, Cds With Their Recordings, Every Single Gift Nachiket Gave Her From Start To End. Even Roses, Ice Cream Sticks and Movie Tickets. Everything Was Kept Inside With Lot Of Love And Care. He Was Able To Recall All Those Days. He Never Knew Ragini Could Do Something Like This. He Thought She might have thrown away things that may have reminded her about their love & memories Long Back, But He Was Wrong.

He Realized Why Ragini Went To Sleep, Why She Wanted To Ignore All This because She Never Wanted let the truth out That She Still Loves Him as she always Wanted To Avoid That close Awkwardness... If She Hated Him Like She Said She Did, She Would Have Burnt All This Long Back. Nachiket Had Tears rolling down In His Eyes as He Realized How Much She Still Loves Him. But Never she Uttered Anything, He Picks Up A Card With Written Words "You Are The Best Thing That Ever Happened To Me, I Love You Nachiket''. He Had a Wide Smile on His Face but He Was Confused Why She Never Gave It to Him, He Started Searching Again

He Looked inside and Found a Letter Written by Ragini, the Date Flashed before His Eyes as it Gave Him A Reality Shock that even I had. He Wanted To Read That But He Was Afraid To Do So... It Was Written... A Week Later After Nachiket Left For USA And Aarav Went to Jail. With All His Inner Strength He Began To Read by laying back on the Couch.

Dear Nachiket,

Pata Hai Yeh Meri Zindagi Ka Sabse Bure Din Hai, Worst Days of My Life. Ab Mera Bacche (Aarav, Suhani, Ranvir Aur Aagam) Mujhse Dur Hogaye, Tum Mujhse Dur Hogaye Nachiket. Why Did You Do This To Me. Kyu Kiya Aisa Nachiket? Jeete Ji He Maar Diya Mujhe. Tumne Toh Mujhse Promise Kiya Tha Na Ki Mujhe Kabhi Chorr K Nahi Jaoge, Toh Tumhare Uss Promise Ka Kya Hua Nachiket. Kyu Chorr K Chale Gaye Apni Ragini Ko? Kya Mai Itni Buri Hu? Manaa Ki Maine Kaha Tha Chale Jao Aur Gussa Bhi Hui Thi Tumse, Par Maine Kabhi Yeh Nahi Socha Tha Ki Tum Chale He Jaoge. Tumne Mujhse Promise Kiya Tha Ki Mere Saath Rahoge, Mujhe Rone Nahi Doge, Mujhse Kabhi Jhut Nahi Kahoge... Par Tumne Toh Mujhe Todd He Diya Nachiket.

Mujhe Tumhari Sabse Zyaada Zaroorat Thi Aur Tum Mujhe Chorr K Chale Gaye. Maine Tumse Jo Kaha, Janti Hu Galat Tha Par Uss Waqt Mujhe Kuch Samaj He Nahi Aa Raha Tha Ki Mai Kya Karu! Apne Aap Par Koi Kaabu Nahi Tha Mera. Mujhe Laga Tha Tum Mujhe Samjhoge Par Phir pata chala Ki Tum mujhe chor kar U.S Chale Gaye.

Samaj Nahi Aa Raha Tha Kya Karu! Kis Kis Chiz K Liye Rou, Kaise React Karu. Mere Bacche Mere Saath Nahi The, Tum Bhi Nahi The. Jaanti Hu Mai Bohot Buri Hu Isliye Sab Mujhse Nafrat Karte Hai, I Deserve It Nachiket. Maine Finally Zindagi Se Samjhota Kar Liya Hai. Pata Hai Mai Janti Hu Ki Mai Ab Tumse Kabhi Nahi Milungi, Hum Kabhi Ek Dusre Ki Shakal Nahi Dekh Payenge, Kabhi Nahi. Naa He Yeh Letter Mai Tumhe Dungi. Mai Bass Apni Feelings Zaahir Karna Chahti Thi... Shayad Aage Likh Nahi Paungi ..

Ragini

The Letter was soaked with Dried Droplets of Tears. The Pain that Ragini experienced Filled His Eyes. He felt a Lump in His Throat! Nachiket never felt Wiping His Tears.

Nachiket realized that he Loved Her... Alottt Alottt. He Knew It Was A Contract Marriage, He Pretended To Hate Her. But The Only Thing That Made Him Happy was that he was Staying under a Roof with the Woman He Loved The Most. He Promised himself that he will not To Leave Her At Any Cost and Decided to End This Contract Marriage Drama as He Knew She Only Belongs to Him.

Nachiket went Ragini & found that She Was Fast Asleep. He began playing with Her Hair And later Tucks It behind Her soft ears. He Could Clearly See The griming Pain On Her Face. He Held Her Hand And Whispered In Her Ears, "You Mean The World To Me, I Will Never Let You Go."

"I Promise You" This Time I Won't Leave You.

Songs Playing In The Background -

Rafta Rafta Hogayi Tu Hi Meri Zindagi

Rafta Rafta Hogayi Chaaro Taraf Roshni

Sajde Main Tere Sar Hai, Thoda Sa Dil Mein Darr Hai

Kaise Karu Mai Bayaan?

Jaanu Naa, Jaanu Naa, Jaanu Na.

Chaahe Dedaar Tera Nazarein, Jhukhe Bhi
Mere Kadam Chalna Chahein, Ruke Bhi
Lab Bhi Kuch Kehna Chahein
Lekin Gum Hai Sab Baatein
Gum Sum Si Bhi Hain Zubaan

Rafta Rafta Ho Gayi
Tu Hi Meri Zindagi
Rafta Rafta Ho Gayi
Chaaron Taraf Roshini
Sajde Mein Tere Sar Hai
Thoda Sa Dil Mein Darr Hai
Kaise Karoon Main Bayaan
Jaanoon Na Jaanoon Na Jaanoon Na..
Rafta Rafta Ho Gayi

Mera Wajood Ab Tu Mujh Mein Hai Shaamil
Shaubat Mein Teri Mujhein Sab Kuch Haasil
Phir Kyun Lagta Hai Aisa
Jaise Main Hoon Bekhud Sa
Dhoondhon Main Khud Ko Kahan

Rafta Rafta Ho Gayi
Tu Hi Meri Zindagi
Rafta Rafta Ho Gayi
Chaaron Taraf Roshini
Sajde Mein Tere Sar Hai
Thoda Sa Dil Mein Darr Hai
Kaise Karoon Main Bayaan
Jaanoon Na Jaanoon Na Jaanoon Na..


The End





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Vidya.CV thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Zainab
My eyes were blind with tears You deserve a standing ovation , you're so good. The BEST.

I wanna give you a round of applause.
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Zainab you deserve a huge round of applause for this master piece. Mind-blowing
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Zain Di..
This is sooo cute..
Mosquitoes..😆
The Letter..😭
#NeiRa..❤️
#Awesome...
Luv Uh..😳
Keep Writing..
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My goodness ZAINAB🤗
What a fantastic weekend treat!!! This was too too good! Loved it! Start to end. Their fights, that mosquito comments, kids reactions, them suddenly laughing, everything! And all that happened near her drawer was 😳

And THE Letter. Pure awesomeness! The emotions were conveyed so well...This is exactly what Ragini must have written I think. Loved loved how all this ended, Nachiket's determination. Too good Zainab!

I'm in my la lalala land
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Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng

Zainab

My eyes were blind with tears You deserve a standing ovation , you're so good. The BEST.

I wanna give you a round of applause.




😳 Aww baby plz dun cry
Awww ... itni bhi acchi nahi waise 😊

Thankyou soo much yaaa for always appreciating my work❤️

biggg huggg🤗 and loads of love..

Your comments actually mean alot to mee😃


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Originally posted by: Santosh1999

Zainab you deserve a huge round of applause for this master piece. Mind-blowing




Santosh 😳

Thankyouu yaaa😊

Glad you liked it😃

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Originally posted by: NayanSrivastav

Zain Di..

This is sooo cute..
Mosquitoes..😆
The Letter..😭
#NeiRa..❤️
#Awesome...
Luv Uh..😳
Keep Writing..




Nayyu baby ❤️

Hehehehehee thanks love 🤗

Love you moreee bacchuu 😳 mwaaahhh

Glad you commented 😉


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Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

My goodness ZAINAB🤗

What a fantastic weekend treat!!! This was too too good! Loved it! Start to end. Their fights, that mosquito comments, kids reactions, them suddenly laughing, everything! And all that happened near her drawer was 😳

And THE Letter. Pure awesomeness! The emotions were conveyed so well...This is exactly what Ragini must have written I think. Loved loved how all this ended, Nachiket's determination. Too good Zainab!

I'm in my la lalala land





My Teacher ji😳

M soo happie that you liked it😊

Thankyouu sooo much baby❤️

Awww mee tooo😳😉

Thanks for the support😊

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SOO HAPPIEE SUCH LOVELY PEOPLE COMMENTED ON MY OS😊

#VIDI #NAYYU #RAGS😳




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U are just outstanding di!!!!! Luvd it to the coreee and that letter... I wanna cryyy

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