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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Not gonna happen Sun.

But you writing the companion piece could happen, pretty please. 😊

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sun29

@sun29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: poetic
Not gonna happen Sun.
But you writing the companion piece could happen, pretty please. 😊

rachna i know ...and yes i shall try and write another piece on neil and his reactions...

i really hope they make ragini spunky post wedding ..she should send neil with nivedita to the honeymoon and herself pack the bags take a break alone at the farmhouse letting everyone assume she has gone for the honeymoon...😈

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

This is beautiful❤️😊 All the past memories... Was very Beautiful😊 I loved it😳

As she opened the box with her hesitant fingers ,it once again unwrapped a time ,an era by gone ,lost ,buried ,dead

This was lovely❤️ Long lost memories coming back as soon as she opened it was❤️

it was the first thing that broke when he left her,yet she could not throw them even if it hurt her again and again

Poor Ragini💔

The letters ,every one of them for the lack of courage to post them ever

💔How sad💔

This was beautiful😊 Loved it😳 can you write one from Nachiket's POV also? Like him finding the letters?

P.S: I love Tennyson and this poem absolutely suited this OS😊

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sun29

@sun29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...
This is beautiful❤️😊 All the past memories... Was very Beautiful😊 I loved it😳
As she opened the box with her hesitant fingers ,it once again unwrapped a time ,an era by gone ,lost ,buried ,dead
This was lovely❤️ Long lost memories coming back as soon as she opened it was❤️

it was the first thing that broke when he left her,yet she could not throw them even if it hurt her again and again
Poor Ragini💔

The letters ,every one of them for the lack of courage to post them ever
💔How sad💔

This was beautiful😊 Loved it😳 can you write one from Nachiket's POV also? Like him finding the letters?

P.S: I love Tennyson and this poem absolutely suited this OS😊

thank you so much for your warm comments😛...am glad you liked it and yes this story demands a reaction from nachiket too...i just need some time ...and even i love his work and this piece was apt for ragini and her turmoil ...

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sun29

@sun29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: wikalpa
very nice OS

thank you so much 😛

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sun29

rachna i know ...and yes i shall try and write another piece on neil and his reactions...

i really hope they make ragini spunky post wedding ..she should send neil with nivedita to the honeymoon and herself pack the bags take a break alone at the farmhouse letting everyone assume she has gone for the honeymoon...😈

That has gonna be the best part of NN's dalliance 😆 I so second you in this.

BTW, I did read your OS once again, and I loved the sentiments behind storing those important, yet inconsequential stuff from the past.

I can already visualise that wooden antique box, the carvings a bit faded, the corners are rounded with the passage of time. While the inside of the box still smells like rosewood

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Ragini Joshi

@RaginiJoshi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

This is gold, Sun👏

I was very curious as to what must be there in that drawer. And see, I got the best answer through you. I would like to live with this

Loved your imagination. Rose, Mangalsutra beads, broken bangles and those letters... Wow! Loved it totally.

Please write more😃

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi
This is gold, Sun👏
I was very curious as to what must be there in that drawer. And see, I got the best answer through you. I would like to live with this

Loved your imagination. Rose, Mangalsutra beads, broken bangles and those letters... Wow! Loved it totally.

Please write more😃

Absolutely Ragini. I want to read the companion piece where N finds out about the content of the Box ... and his feelings after that 😊

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Ragini Joshi

@RaginiJoshi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: poetic

Absolutely Ragini. I want to read the companion piece where N finds out about the content of the Box ... and his feelings after that 😊

That's an awesome idea! Please Sun. And also reveal his set of secrets😉 What they must be