The Value of Truth FF Updated Chapter 4-Page 7 - Page 3

This was magical. You captured Ragini and Nachiket's love beautifully through this conversation. And the way you handled the Dr. Aman issue was very mature--you can clearly see that they are both frustrated with the situation but don't know how to handle it. You are a fantastic writer!

Originally posted by: poetic

Oh Azka, this is so beautiful. will comment in details later -I need to read this again.

Thanks a lot.

Aww rachana, thank you so much. Your support truly means a lot to me.

Originally posted by: Tiana.Disney

This is beautiful Azka 👏 . I really felt bad for Ragini... And you beautifully described her relationship with Aman... Now will she come out of the deal she has made with Aman? I really want to read the next part. Please update soon 😊 .

Thank you so much tiana.😳Irealized that Aman and Ragini's relationship wasn't truly explained in the show. It was only aagham who reached some depth with it when he said "ehsaan chukankeliye ke liye rishta jorliya" which is why I decided to build on that.

Originally posted by: hamna19khan

Lovely, this update was beautiful, I mean the way you express each and every emotion is just beautiful, portrayal of mature and sensible conversation between Ragini and Nachiket is amazing. Your'e doing a great job.
Can't wait to read the next update please update soon :)

Hayee thank you so much humna (can I call you that) I will try to update at soon as possible, I'm off tomorrow so maybe.

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Azka!

Hats off to you for this..

for writing this in the state that you did and for thinking about their issues so well.. it was so smooth and so natural.. like the two of them were in front of my eyes saying and doing all those things to each other..absolutely heartbreakingly good!

Thanks so much for these raw emotions and for their confessions..

This was just stunning!

Really sukhi, I just wait for sun and you to comment. You have no idea how much your comments mean to me.

Originally posted by: shri123

Wow, what a conversation between them, Ragini expressed her side very well and also nachiket's emotions, his breakdown was heartbraking. beautifully written. Thanks.

I wish in serial also this scene if at all it is there turns out this way only.

Shri (can I call you that) thank you so much. I know that Ragini's side is usually lacking in the drama and that is why I decided that it was an important component for her to explain her side as well. Usually we only have seen Neil being explained, Ragini never except for her conversations with suhani before the leap. But thank you so much and I will try to update as soon as possible.

Originally posted by: neiralove

This was magical. You captured Ragini and Nachiket's love beautifully through this conversation. And the way you handled the Dr. Aman issue was very mature--you can clearly see that they are both frustrated with the situation but don't know how to handle it. You are a fantastic writer!

Thank you so much for this! I can't wait to read the next part!

The pic that you put of Ragini and Neil is magical too. 😳(Cough)(cough) where were we...yes thank you for commenting and I know that the characters are frustrated, even onscreen you would see them frustrated but unable to portray their emotions. Thus this means a lot to me for having you say that I managed to bring their frustration into the story as well.

Originally posted by: JB-US

The pic that you put of Ragini and Neil is magical too. 😳(Cough)(cough) where were we...yes thank you for commenting and I know that the characters are frustrated, even onscreen you would see them frustrated but unable to portray their emotions. Thus this means a lot to me for having you say that I managed to bring their frustration into the story as well.

Ahhh...this was so beautiful and so painful all at the same time. The way Ragini confessed to Neil that he was so much a part of her, still, was absolutely heartbreaking. Such gorgeous imagery.

Originally posted by: JB-US

Really sukhi, I just wait for sun and you to comment. You have no idea how much your comments mean to me.

As for the raw emotions in their confessions, I wasn't at first planning to do it because I thought the story would seem too rushed but I decided that it would be better to bring intensity to the characters hence I was uncertain and very relieved when you said you like it,

Awww that's awfully sweet of you..you deserve all the praise and compliments for this piece..thanks for sticking with the pure intense raw version..my heart went into overdrive 😳