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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: NeiRaFreak
Rachna ... Thank You 😳 this is like a soothing balm ... really... don't know what to say , am speechless ... but yes this is beautiful ...
and this part and dialogue "I wish they could take better care of you. But then, neither did I ... maybe THIS is a good thing" clouded my vision ...

You are simply a beautiful beautiful writer and am out of words to praise this piece of yours ... a big THANK YOU dear for writing this 😳

Thanks a lot Jia. Glad you found this soothing 😊. Maybe sometimes accepting the truth is the easiest way to resolve certain issues. But when have human beings resorted to easier things?

See, I didn't give you a chance to remind me. 😆

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sun29

this is absolutely a beautiful piece..if only if only we could see such sensitivity..the whole time i imagined RR and PK enacting this scene...if only they would focus on ragini's feelings for once ,other than the many nonsensical scenes...

thank you so much rachna for such a heartwarming scenario..ragini has to take that step towards him now...she send him away...she needs to bring him back...he is as heartbroken as she is ...if she masks it behind a cold existence ,he masks it behind his anger and bitterness...

Totally Sun. Irrespective of who is the stupidest of the lot, this time IMHO Ragini needs to bring him back. And give all of them a chance.

What is she going to do by marrying Dr A? Might as well she kill herself, rather than survive in that relationship. She is never gonna survive that one, emotionally.

@ Bold - You have mentioned it right. That's how they both handle their heartbreaks, not that the heart break doesn't exist.

Thanks for reading it. 😊

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: EtherealRati
Awwwe that was reallyyy sweett...loved reading it .

Thanks for the kind support, and for reading the OS. 😳

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Ragini Joshi

@RaginiJoshi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Ragini. 😊
Writing after a long time - the heartbreak is getting to me.

Super Naani is a NR camper, all the way. The fact that she loves both N and R is very important, given that she probably realises that these two would only be happy with each other.

What surprises me is that we already see NR fighting and bickering, or romancing. It's almost like being a pendulum swinging from one extent to another, forgetting that there are moments in between as well.

I so wish we could have seen their internal contemplations as well ... that is just starkly missing from the entire Show. No depth in emotions. Sad, but true !

I know...chalo at least something made you write! Beautifully expressed. And so rightly, there ARE moments in between. It's missing in the show definitely, but we have you at least- to make us feel those moments in between...

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sampa79
Beautiful update

Thanks Sampa 😊. Mighty glad you liked it.

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

This just warmed up my heart..

how much he still feels responsible for her and her happiness even though he is hardly in her life.. but that's what you do and feel about a person you have loved with all your heart..

Wow..

So beautifully written Rachana! Absolute treat to read and feel..

REALLY really wish they get some kind of privacy in the trip and a hint to what they actually feel about each other ..

Fantastic portrayal of their hidden emotions..

Thank you!! :)

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Jia

@NeiRaFreak

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks a lot Jia. Glad you found this soothing 😊. Maybe sometimes accepting the truth is the easiest way to resolve certain issues. But when have human beings resorted to easier things?

See, I didn't give you a chance to remind me. 😆

True Rachna ... accepting the truth is one of the most difficult things sometimes especially when things go beyond our capability or when we have ourself left hope from future...

I can't find words to even Thank you for writing this... this is so emotional yet so soothing to see both of them loving and longing for each other ... and yes the best form of love is wish your beloved happiness more than your own personal wishes and desires... and that is something we see Nachiket doing only in these FFs ...

and to that reminder part ... I actually myself didn't flood your old writings deliberately ... coz when ever I read them I get so lost in the beauty of these two that fell short of words to comment even... Plz do write often ... am in love with your writings 😳

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ronitfan
This just warmed up my heart..
how much he still feels responsible for her and her happiness even though he is hardly in her life.. but that's what you do and feel about a person you have loved with all your heart..

Wow..

So beautifully written Rachana! Absolute treat to read and feel..
REALLY really wish they get some kind of privacy in the trip and a hint to what they actually feel about each other ..

Fantastic portrayal of their hidden emotions..
<3

Thank you!! :)

Thanks Sukhi. Miss you guys a lost, hence the attempt to write something.

I feel that as human beings both NR are flawed, but their characterisations are just pathetic. Why can't the CVs show them more as real human beings, struggling with the fact that their love is what binds them together, and often pushes them away from each other.

Even after 20 yrs of working, she is unable to do this, then she has failed really. I mean, NB!

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

@ Jia - I want to see both N and R feeling for the other ad realising the deep emotions held within, at least sometimes. Instead of always fighting and bickering for no reason.

That would highlight their progression as mature individuals.

And never mind about the reminders, you could always do that. Yeah ... remind, that is.

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Sukhi. Miss you guys a lost, hence the attempt to write something.

I feel that as human beings both NR are flawed, but their characterisations are just pathetic. Why can't the CVs show them more as real human beings, struggling with the fact that their love is what binds them together, and often pushes them away from each other.

Even after 20 yrs of working, she is unable to do this, then she has failed really. I mean, NB!

Awww!!

I miss you all over the weekend so much too!! This was absolutely gorgeous... 😳

The main problem is NB lacks depth and a total lack of understanding of her own characters.. she could have worked magic!!